Barty redesign sketches (opinions are welcome) (Patreon)

Since I’ve been struggling with liking what I draw lately I thought trying to redesign some characters could help unblock me a bit🫠

So these are sketches of a possible Barty I made, but I’m not sure if he really has the right vibe? What’s your opinion, do you like him or do you like the south-east asian Barty I usually draw better?

And if I were to keep him, what piercings/tattoos/hair colour/hairstyle should he have? I’m taking all the recommendations haha