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Authors Note (Patreon)

Published:
2026-02-06 09:40:01
Imported:
2026-06

Content

Alright. So Chapter 111 .... And the new direction is semi finalized. Apologies for the lag in chapters, this is way more challenging than I thought it would be.

The Dark Arc ... as I like to call it, is almost over ... Oh wait, forget I said that. The Train disaster arc is nearly wrapped up

There is no cause for alarm though. For those whose hearts are palpitating at the recent chapters, I won't spoil what I have planned but I can assure you don't have to worry. ..... Too much.

We can't turn this into a grimdark story as that was never my intent nor will it ever be, but we can't have everything be smooth sailing for him either.

I think this is good enough character development.

What about you? Tell me what you think. Also a reader suggested giving Yuta a permanent scar and I don't really know about that one.

Comments

Sadhil Maneth

I really like what you've done so far well done and I don't regret what I said about the scar it be meaningful just like yuji it doesn't have to be a big one but it's up to you

Extended Heart

So the dark ark continuous you think I wouldn't notice cheeky bastard 😂😂, anyways mha world is not a safe place, gore, violence, Unethical human experimentation, even adultery, explore these narratives something the original show only hints about

Extended Heart

About the scar how will he have a physical scar his body can remember exactly how it looked like contradicting how a scar is formed, anyways a mental scar of trains or public transport is more accurate maybe 🤣🤣

Bingo bongo

I think it would be good if you went one step further and had thr league of villains pin thr blame on Yuta and explain why they did it, it would serve as the first big trail for Yuta, as a large portion of the public turns on him and an introduction to the public as Shigarki as the new symbol of Evil. I feel like its something AFO would make Shigaraki do given the opportunity present. It would also provide a good final climax to this incident with a potrntial next character development arc. It also forces Nezu to have a serious discussion with Yuta regaeding his character, though I still strongly believe UA would back Yuta killing Chisaki given the circumatances. You cannot tell me people would not view it as self-defence when Chisaki tried to kill him, turning him into a meatball and was trying to finish the job. UA would be waaaaayyu more concerned about the Stain thing tho given he paralysed a man out of revenge. That would actually make sense for them to struggle with. The Chisaki thing I believe they would be more likely to just give him therapy and mandatry training on what is considered appropriate use of force.

doomdude

Your doing GREAT!!!👍

Spidershark

I would actually not suggest the scar personaly. I mean, it does not make much sense in the situation, because how on earth is he going to get a scar from a wave crashing into him? That's not how that works. Also, it's probably better to show a mental scar through actions to show how fucked that situation is for him mentaly. Like actions he takes now instead of what he usualy would do. Not everything needs to be physicaly marked on a character to show change.

Turles

Good shit mane. Got me all fired up! I’ve been tryna supplement my addiction with other stories but I absolutely cannot wait for what comes next. I NEED IT I NEED MY CRACK!

Eren Özcan
>>202211046

It would be like accepting incompetence though. They would be saying look we tried to kill this guy twice but instead we killed bunch of unrelated people and caused a lot of property damage so join us we might not have succeeded in any of our goals so far but we are at the peak of vandalism.

Eren Özcan

I don’t know about the scar I mean when did he got it while he was at train he still had a lot of chakra at that point though also he probably wouldn’t choose to keep it as it would scare Eri. Also there was a villain who could control some kind of lines that attacked Endavours kids I wouldn’t want any kind of marking/scar on my body if Iwere him with all kinds of weird quirks around. League of should have harder time recruiting new members after this as there is no video of stain killing nomu comparing to cannon but I wonder how this train attack will affect them as most of their guys weren’t exactly mass murderers when joined.