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Authors Note (Patreon)

Published:
2026-02-27 13:51:32
Imported:
2026-06

Comments

Amir

its good but too many povs of villians and everyone. It feels like last 10 chapters, i read about mc like for 1.5 chapter. Everything else just povs

Ozzie_Cheddar

It's definitly not as dark as I thought it'd be. I thought it'd be 10 chapters of everyone grieving over his death and blaming themselves.

Sadhil Maneth

It's good but I think the rest of class 1A needs to gets stronger way faster than the original story seeing how things are speeding up not just yuta also please never do such a long buildup again it was way too long

TxSadz

I like it

JMR

It’s good, I really appreciate the chapters where you get multiple different pov’s of important events. It makes it feel like the world is alive.

Turles

I think one critique I feel the need to point out is the response from Heroes to the Leagues actions. In MHA proper, it took them attacking the USJ and kidnapping a singular student to bring the full force of the HPSC down upon them and yet, this version has done the USJ and murdered over 700 people. That is not a small number at all. I’m pretty sure less people died during the confrontation between All Might and All For One. That shouldve warranted an immediate hunt and raid on the League but it hasn’t. It’s made out to be ‘more of a tantrum’ and ‘not enough to warrant a greater reaction’ but we know this isn’t true based on MHA proper. I guess my point is that it’s a bit nonsensical for the League of Villains to not be getting wayyy harsher backlash from the Heroes.

Turles
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I also forgot to point out that one of the targets/victims is a U.A. Student so it goes doubly so.

TykiiMikii

The story and POV and great for me, like it very much!!

Josh kindred

Like the direction but shigaraki seems to focused on just yuta shouldn't he target some of the other students as well. After all he got attention for targeting one but if he hits another student that should shake heroes and there families more