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Hoffman

I'm blind I didn't put it together 😔

Ria

Yah no now I kinda feel dumb

Gardor

Never even occurred to me, but also id forgotten most of his description.

Gardor

"lightly patted him on the shoulder, sneaking a Dragonfly onto his clothes while I went. " How big are dragonflies? Are they like, actual dragonfly sized? Smaller? Ive been picturing them as around a foot long, like a remote control toy car, for some reason. Starting to think ive got that wrong.

Hamfist

The reversed name thing is obvious once I noticed it, but I didn't notice it until reading this chapter.

HikinBear

I’m terrible with palindromes and didn’t spot it. I suspected something was up with the preferred way Suvroc/Corvus treated Shiro and it somehow involved Aether. Great ending to that mini-arc.

TheBotler

I'll be honest, I didnt analyze that name enough to see it till now. Good job.

Amber S.

Hidden in plain sight, you should give your self some credit. It was subtle and well done. The best kind of surprise.

kreiverin

Thanks!)

Momongama

I swear I check every name in reverse except when I actually should

UnderwhelmingBird

Suvroc was less a hidden plot line and more an amusing 'wow I really should have realized' bit for Shiro. She seemed so used to keeping to herself, avoiding poking at folks' backstories, that it just....flew over her head. Ha.

John

i was clueless...