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Findell

Can't she just go back to living with her dad?

Hoffman

Thats what I thought she would do when he got home. I was a little surprised that she's living with Shrio.

Hoffman

Lost, Shrio really needs to finish the Roughrider if anything for the Crusade person so she has some $$. Oh I thought Shrio was going to Nael's place to help Iris? I know lots to do and write about. Thank you for the chapter. Id take another one please 😆

kreiverin

Shiro want to do many things but it take for her forever .....

John

I thought this was an amazing chapter. Situations unrelated but i felt echos of difficult conversations and challenges ive had with close friends IRL. And inspiration.

Gardor

That electric paper stuff really made me think of the perspective (?) of "what are circuits but runes, channeling energy into a ritual?". Probably paraphrasing that horribly, the idea being that channeling electricity through a circuit is analogous to channeling mana through a ritual. And if you can make the rituals using just paper, without the expensive reagents, without the Crimson Fire Root or Neodymium, that sounds game changing.