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[Don't miss the earlier chapter]


Maelga. Pride of the human lands, home of their lord and protector, the Crystal King. One of the Three Hegemons of the land, there was never a time where the Captain Onyx of the Crystal Guard ever felt that Maelga would be attacked outside of a demonic event.

Even when demons spawned in their world, when the demons invaded, Maelga stood. Maelga was home to so many magical enchantments and defenses, that in the era of legends, it once withstood the might of even a demon king, and had enough firepower to counterattack, and injure it significantly.

In Captain Onyx’s mind, that was the truth, even if it was untested. Because that was what it felt to live in Maelga.

To walk the city streets was to walk near the power that lived within the Great Crystal Mountain.

To live under the overwhelming presence of the Lord of Crystal.

In the minds of Maelga’s defenders, an attack on Maelga was impossible. No one ever tried to attack Maelga. Even the other two forces never ever managed to march forces beyond their inner ring of defenses. Even when this new force, this- this upstart pretender called Aeon sent an army burning through their defensive lines, just to help the heroes destroy the demon king, it never ever occurred to them that Maelga would be attacked.

After all, who dares attack a deity?

Well-

Other deities, naturally.

***

Onyx ran, as the defensive bells rang. It has never rang in a real emergency, not once in the past fifty years. All previous ringing of the bells were all for drills. Entirely for practice purposes, and publicly declared.

“Is it a drill?” One of the civilians asked as Onyx ran towards the tower.

He shook his head. There really was no need to answer when they all felt the air feel heavy, as if the heavens itself pressed on them. Their mountain pulsed, and they felt a familiar force rise from below to resist it.

The soldiers were not sure what to do, either. In truth, only the elite guard would be able to stand against whatever dared attack the Crystal King. The lesser soldiers are nothing more than flies, if such a hypothetical enemy existed.

There must be some great illusion. An army somehow snuck past those lazy defenders and scouts.

Onyx climbed up the stairs and reached the walls, expecting an army outside.

All he saw was four individuals and a terrain he did not recognise. A man with a wooden staff, a woman in knight’s armor, and two archers. In normal cases, he’d laugh them off, but all of them emitted an aura not unlike their own deity.

Their ripples of power caused the air itself to seemingly churn in defiance. The grass seemed to sway violently. The ground trembled.

The entirety of Maelga’s surroundings were almost entirely dusty, rocky land. When did it all turn into grasslands?

“Crystal King.” The voice was soft, and came from an older man with a beard and wrinkled face. He sounded older than he looked. “We have found your attempts to sabotage our preparations against the demon king appalling.”

Onyx frowned. He wasn’t aware such a thing happened, but if it did, it must be one of the high crystal priests’ plots. The elite forces of the King, and magical golems, all emerged from their barracks and waiting areas, ready to fight.

He looked and saw one of the Elite Guards, Commander General Somun, take the stand and shouted something. Despite the Commander General yelling at the top of his lungs, he heard nothing.

Instead, all he heard was the voice of the older man. “Consequence.”

Huge towering roots shot out of the ground around the city, akin to the tentacles of a kraken pulling down a giant ship. There were so many roots that emerged out of nowhere, they emerged outside of all the walls, and they slammed into the defensive shields.

The shields wobbled.

Onyx prayed the shields would hold, but they didn’t.

The roots didn’t even have to try very hard. He watched the roots cut through the shields as if it was like soft butter.

The citizens panicked, and screamed.

The Commander General yelled, activating some kind of ability. The walls of the city glowed. Magical blasts of all kinds looked ready to be fired, and as they activated-

Then half of them were snuffed out instantly, like a fire that ran out of oxygen or fuel.

Even Onyx felt the effects of the anti-magical aura. “-anti-magic?” He cursed, as he watched the enchanted weapon in his hand flicker, as if magic was drained out of it. “-how?”

He could even sense it in the air, as the air itself felt as if mana was sucked out of it.

The other half, the higher tier spells slammed into gigantic wooden shields. It didn’t do any damage. The soldiers panicked.

One of them, horrified, and then begun to run. The rest of them realized the same, as did so.

“Wait- what are you doing?” Onyx shouted at the soldiers, some of them clearly weren't ready to fight them. “We are the guards of the Great Crystal City. We do not run!”

“Captain! This is madness! We’re not fighting them. No way!” The soldier countered. “Not those gigantic roots, and not without magic-”

Onyx looked at the soldiers. They stood unmoved. “But-”

“Captain. There is a time to be brave. Now, is not that time. Can you not feel their power pressing down on us-”

He couldn’t continue the sentence, as the entire magical defensive network of Maelga shattered like glass. Not from an attack, but from the weight of the enemy’s presence.

Onyx looked back, and his eyes gazed on the gigantic silhouette of a dark, shadowy tree. It was big, as if he was looking up a tree the size of a mountain, and some.

A shadow. A silhouette. A distortion in the air in the form of a tree. Just merely glancing at the strange apparition in the air made Onyx feel as if he was looking at a thousand forests, and somehow, a single tree.

His fingers trembled. The soldiers couldn’t even run. Their knees went weak.

“-what in the mountains-”

He felt his legs buckle. Not just them. All of the soldiers felt a weight of fear that suddenly crashed into the entire city. The panicked citizens turn even more panicked and delirious. Chaos turned into insanity, as they screamed and shouted.

Only the Crystal Guards managed to stand in defiance. Onyx couldn’t see who, but it was one of the great Generals of the Crystal King shouted. “[General’s Rally]!”

A wave of relief flooded the entire city, and Onyx felt his legs regain just a wee bit of strength.

Then, came the word of the enemy.

“Run.” The old priest spoke, his voice seemed to be carried by the land itself. The wind seemed to carry his message, that it felt to Onyx like the priest said those words beside him, whispering into his ears. “Run or feel our wrath.”

The roots surrounding the Crystal City suddenly opened to reveal two openings.

“Flee.”

The citizens ran. The soldiers ran. The servants ran. The lesser priests fled. Onyx ran, and he looked back at the mountain. Would the Crystal King answer their slight?

Then the Crystal Mountain cracked.

“YOU HAVE A LOT OF GUTS COMING HERE!” A gigantic crystal golem emerged from the Mountain, as they felt the King’s crystal presence push back against the four. It certainly tried. “YOU DIE TODAY.”

Onyx thought that they were saved, but the feeling didn’t last.

The Crystal King’s presence was overshadowed.

The old man smiled, as the shadow of the tree that seemed to be around the man grew even larger. The buildings of the city trembled and cracked. Onyx couldn’t believe it, but he saw segments of the magically enchanted walls crumble, not from an attack, but from the weight of the Tree’s presence.

Even the Giant Crystal King staggered. “-YOU!”

The voice that followed was thoroughly alien.

It was not the old man, even if it was spoken through him. The voice that emerged, that all of them heard clearly in their minds, was spoken as if it passed through the rustling of leaves and the whispers of the land. A million ancient trees spoke at once, it’s voice echoed in every one of their minds.  “-you once said we would come as invaders.”

The crystal king raised a spear of crystal so large that it could have been a tower of crystal.

“Your prediction is correct.”

The towering spear of crystals was thrown towards the old man. With it, the weight of the Crystal King’s history. Everyone could feel the immense magic of the Crystal King, condensed into a single strike.

But roots emerged from the ground, and the roots intercepted the spear midair, entangled it with its roots. “I was keen to let you be. But here we are. Do you feel delighted that you predicted correctly?”

The Giant Crystal King rushed ahead, stepped on the buildings and crumbled walls, and pushed at the spear. Even more magic was channeled into the spear, but the wall of roots that held the spear did not move. The Crystal King struggled. “I SHOULD HAVE KILLED YOU THERE AND THEN!”

The old man’s chuckle could be heard throughout the land. The land itself laughed with him. Little rocks, bits of sand, the grass, all shook as if laughing together. “Killing my avatar does nothing but enrage me. My fury arrives eventually.”

It was a clash of power, all in a single move. The king’s spear, and the wall of roots. “INVADER- I WILL NOT SUBMIT.” The crystal king roared, the crystal’s magic glowed. Yet, Onyx swore it looked like the spear’s magic was sucked about by the roots.

“So be it.”

The roots emerged from all over the city. It broke through the rocky tiles, it broke through the ground. They wrapped around the Giant Crystal King. The lesser golems, the elite guards all wanted to attack-

But the two archers fired a rain of paralysis arrows that stunned all of them. Those that managed to dodge the arrows were wrapped by the roots, and those roots paralysed them as well.

The Crystal King’s power wobbled. “MY DEATH WILL SHATTER THE PACT.”

“Death is too easy for a hardheaded fool.”

The roots wrapped around the Crystal King’s arms, and everyone screamed when they saw those roots ripped the left crystal arm off the body.

Onyx couldn’t believe it. It wasn’t possible-

Then the roots wrapped itself around the right arm, and it ripped it off as well. It flung the crystal arms to the side, throwing them away as if it was trash.

“YOU-” The crystal king’s energies glowed, as it regenerated both arms. “-YOU THINK THIS WILL HURT ME?”

The roots wrapped around the entire body of the Crystal King. “Then this will.”

The entire city shook as they felt a huge amount of magic was sucked out of the world around them. The roots drained magic, even from the crystal king. Yet the King was defiant.

Onyx watched, as a root emerged from the ground, far larger than any others. The root transformed into a spear embodying the world, and in a single, loud thrust, it pierced the Crystal King’s golem body.

The sound that followed was as if the entire world had cracked in half.

“May this pain be eternal.”

Onyx wasn’t sure what happened, but there was a huge amount of mana flooding the Crystal King. It wasn’t demonic, but instead-

It reminded Onyx of the dark nights. “Your domain protects your soul. But your body remains vulnerable. How ironic. I was just in your position not too long ago.”

The gigantic golem of the Crystal King crumbled. The citizens and soldiers of Maelga watched, dumbfounded and in horror. Many have fainted. Onyx stared at what remained, held by the roots. A spherical crystal no bigger than a basketball.

“So this is your true form. A spherical crystal that gained a will.”

A wall of roots that emerged, and encased the spherical crystal.

“For the crimes of tampering with our preparations and attempting to assassinate a hero, I, Aeon of Treehome, imprison you for the next hundred years. You shall remain a watcher of the world, while your empire collapses around you.”

A giant tree grew on their mountain of crystals, and this giant tree held a single object in it’s canopy, surrounded by vines and roots.

A tree, made into a prison, to hold the spherical crystal core of the Crystal King.

A beautiful prison for the King, on what was once their Crystal Mountain, and turned the rocky, crystalline land of Maelga into a verdant, blooming hill.

[Note from the Tree : I know this feels a bit too much power fantasy and maybe a little wanky, but I've been really, really wanting to write this. Let it slide, ya?]

Comments

Anonymous

Loved it

The Brandonator

Thanks for the chapters. For me I really liked this power flex by Aeon and would not mind more.

Kenevarious

Thanks for the power trip

Gokufix Murphy

Not really a power fantasy if you built up to this moment for multiple chapters I mean you clearly defined how strong Aeon is sooooo

Kenevarious

Can’t wait for next week

Hussar L

I loved the flex 💪 It’s quite fitting after Aeon’s recent huge level up

Tejing

Not too much power fantasy in my eyes. Great scene, though I do have one suggestion: Aeon's dialogue should make it clear that the Crystal King MADE his prediction come true. It wasn't inevitable like he claimed, it only came true because he believed it was inevitable and acted on that belief. Something like: “Your prediction is correct.” -> “You forced your prediction to become truth.” Also, I always thought there needed to be a retort to his statement way back that beings like them are incapable of friendship. Something like "no, that's just you".

Nathan Emerson

Didn't feel like a power fantasy, felt appropriate.

wallopingmetal

THIS CHAPTER IS THE BEST ONE EVER WRITTEN. OH MY ETERNAL TREE GOD

Jupiter

Thanks! I love it!

wallopingmetal

I remember when a certain little elf girl as if Aeon was power. And her mother respond that power is on a spectrum. But what aeon just did. Shows that there are different tiers to he spectrum of power. Just his shadow cause the world to tremble. Aeon damn. Good job auther

Arcanum

Tftc! We all loved Aeon throwing his weight around on something other than demon's for once. Wonder what world Aeon will move into his solar system and if those worlds will enhance his power in the void

Alex

It's not a power fantasy, it's the result of power earned after along time. If it was Aeon would have been able to this in book 1 or would have killed the demon kings with no lose.

Jeremiah

Really good chapter thank u

Eduardo Melin

Loved the chapter, it was really well done, and I don't think it's a power fantasy, after all Aeon is a deity with a long journy already.

Tejing

Yeah, it's different when the power has been earned through long-term struggling.

Marwolaeth

This was the single GREATEST thing I've read so far 😂😂😂, I absolutely love LOVE seeing how powerful Aeon is to a normal person 💀

Alexander Belousov

Dude, it is good. Basically, once you are a stronger by a certain level, and need to deliver psychological method, any effective tactic will look like "power fantasy". I mean, that is the point. To show people the level of power you have, and let them fantasize about it.

Etez

It's good that u wrote it. Some fucking hard headed violence for once. Can't tolerate flies and mosquitos forever

Lictor Magnus

100 years is enough time for generations of humans to not grow up under the crystal king. No one will want him back by the time his sentence is done 😂

Swinter

You don't need to feel bad about this chapter. He's been established as powerful. It's about time he got to personally show it.

Balocka

At this point Aeon has to be a true god. His new powers are broken. And he’s semi-omnipresent with his node trees that also gather mana which also means he’s semi-omnipotent.

Balocka

Ideas for possible domains: Heir to Yggdrasil Heir to demon

Szymon Szczełkun

Thanks for chapter i think that imprisonment is quite fitting punishment given that his plot didn't succed and 100 years while not very significant to those creatures with nigh immortal lifespans is just about enough for his current belivers and followers to expirience generations change and faith collaps due to lack of his presence , so yeah the duration seems quite fitting but what about hero summoning ? Wasn't there talk that in few decades (probably i don't really remember ) it won't be possible to summon new heroes ? or does that only aply to treehome ? And if not won't this pact of three collapse by itself ?

Tori

Huh I wonder will aeon always be a tree? Like he won’t have any other form?

Zarik0

I don't think so, with power they live more longer so quite a few (and people in/with power) will stay and remember when these 100 years will pass, just 100 years seem not enough, 200 years seem way better to have a real and truly generation shift happen

Zarik0

Quite a good chapter, i enjoyed it and i don't see it at all wanky and to much power fantasy, its quite perfect for this type of part and for this story :) Though 100 years seem real to few, people with power live more longer so quite a few (and people in/with power) will be still alive and remember when these 100 years will pass, (so he can rebuild and done some reists/schem easely) just 100 years seem not enough, 200 years minimum seem way better to have a real and truly generation shift happen (as it seem the goal is for punishment and real empire and his base follower dissapearing) Also particulary when he said a line like “May this pain be eternal.” xDD Would liked too that he is way more CLEAR in his line about that ITS the Crystal King own action who bring these consequence to himself and this 'invaders acts' Something like “-you once said we would come as invaders. as you said your interactions with others has alway ended in fight and "invaders acts" in the end” “With how you acts and interact with others seem that Your prediction on this will be alway correct.” Their is always Consequence for our own act, hardheaded fool "I was keen to let you be. But here we are. Do you feel delighted that you predicted correctly?"

Asekhan

Amazing chapter, finally aeon's get pissed

Dan K

Vibrating with excitement. Loved this chapter. Aeon is usually so reserved with his power or fighting things still above him so it’s entertaining for him to finally punch down a bit after so much punching up.

Ethan Barrow

This slides, this was awesome! And he really had it coming so it's definitely cool with me.

Destrucktoid

Definitely cool with me

Marwolaeth

Hopefully, I wouldn't want it any other way tbh. I like the unique twist that him being a tree provides his mobility and world building issues

Roombot

Too much power fantasy? This was awesome! I want more! We often forget, reading from Aeon's POV, just how powerful and intimidating he's become. The occasional glimpse from a third-person POV, especially when Aeon is rightfully pissed off, is EPIC.

Roombot

Seriously. Id love to have another chapter where someone encounters his true body in the Valley again. It's been awhile, and if even his SHADOW appearing shakes the world shake, what does the Valley look like these days? It must be truly terrifying.

Roombot

Apparently not quite yet, as the System hasn't offered him the choice of ascension/joining the pact

J. R.

Phenomenal, absolutely loved to see Aeon truly at work again.

Sean Hibbitt

Honestly loved this piece of writing!!