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Avalon - Chapter 2 - The Trees (Patreon)

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2024-07-07 13:00:10
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Our next instalment of this little adventure...

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Jeff Burch

Great chapter! Eager for more

Kevin Henderson

I am looking forward to getting into this story.

barrett fitzgibbon ockenden

I love the building up, getting harry to let go of his past, to actually deal with his emotions, and then as Salazar said his greatness will show in full force. Love it. Keep up the good work man!!

Kevin

Ngl, i was very critical of the story at first but its fast growing on me!!! Great beginning :)

Hannibal St.Michael

I'm waiting for the basilisk and Chamber of Secrets reveal. I wonder how Salazar and Helga will respond to it. Thanks for the update.

Sunny

Still unsure why Merlin is the enemy, seems to be doing what the stories say, that being making Arthur the King. I find it kinda funny that Harry had Draco - albeit a verbal bully - in a list with Voldemort & Wormtail. It'd be good to see the Horcrux be used as to what u did in Honour thy Blood, a Flower for the Soul & Whispers of a Raven, i.e. possible safeguard to death & no knowledge/power boost besides the retention of Parsel tongue. Anyway, thanks for the chapter and I look forward to the next one.

itsblue718
>>142983021

I think the Draco thing is just because in this Harry is still a 14 year old so very much a child so to him Draco probably seemed like as big of a evil as the other two

Sam Payne

I just had a funny thought that for the first time in who knows how many stories, there is 0% chance of Arcturus Black appearing lol

odzoo

I see your point, but I'm not sure that we can say 0%. I'm sure Harry will go back at some point and who knows when The Lady of the Lake brings him back to. It would seem logical that it would be during the 2nd Task, but that brings up other problems. Does Harry enter the lake as a scrawny 14-year-old and come out with his hostage as an adult with the body Godric's lessons have given him? With his return being an issue, does she decide to bring him back earlier when he can do more good? Now Arcturus would be alive. Can Lee resist the temptation of including Arcturus in the story, if he is alive during part of it? I have my doubts.

JustABloke

I honestly can't wait for Merlin to get his arse handed to him by Harry. Kudos to you Lee for already making Merlin insufferable this early. There's something about delusional and adamant characters that honestly grates my nerves.

Sunny
>>142983021

Do you think? Honestly, I always saw Harry as someone who had to grow up quickly - the lack of love from the Dursleys & facing Voldemort in Yrs 1 & 2 - and so personally, I would think he would say Draco as kinda annoying really

Jim Bob

damn dude this level of writing just hit of the bat hard! wasn't sure on the premise but you made it work!

Demitas

Found a typo: "A healthy body helps a healthy, and if both are healthy, your magic will be too."

David Karlsson
>>143002511

I wouldn't mind if there's no Voldemort segment at the end of this. Having 2 villains where Harry becomes significantly stronger than voldemort after defeating his first was anticlimactic in the Grindelwald fic to me. Then there's the question whether Harry is in an alternate timeline now or has overwritten his original one considering even Merlins fate has changed. It seems he only has Sirius to rely on fully in this timeline, Hermione being less loyal... So there's even less reason to timetravel back when he has stronger ties in the past, unless he does so at an old age to fulfil the prophecy at the very end.

David Karlsson
>>142987295

Someone will surely show up with the same character template. ngl expected it to be Slytherin but he seems like more of a gentle mentor here.

David Karlsson
>>142983021

Seems he was more ostracised here. Draco's annoying taunts would be annoying but if he's without support when the school turns on him, then Draco would be a more constant harassment in his life on par with Snape. Like summer after first year and before 5 it might get to him more, Harry doesn't deal well with the lack of support.

El Escobeezy

Didn’t Harry speak in Snake when he first awoke? Why is Salazar surprised all of a sudden?

El Escobeezy
>>143540874

I had to go back to reread it. You’re right, no idea how I missed that. Must’ve been more tired than I thought.

Awesomeace18

Little confused by Harry just accepting he has to stop Myrddin when he hasn’t even heard the issue yet. If he knows Myrddin is Merlin won’t be more inclined to trust Merlin? Rather than blindly trust the Lady of the Lake who just told him one thing and sent him to the past?