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Apologies for the delay.

Whilst I was editing, I had many other ideas come to me with how this story could go, but I noted them down for use in other stories.

A very pivotal chapter here...

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thevolunteer

Harry really needs to start erecting anti portkey wards. Also, did Harry show up as Serpent to protect the Flamels? Or as Harry? Because Cassiopeia is either going to figure it out, or her Hate Boner for Harry is going to reach new heights.

Silens Maelstrom

I believe it was Harry based on her reaction alone. But also, “Nick” saw him as Harry and Cassiopeia yelled “You” at him instead of fleeing if he was The Serpent. He’s known as their nephew but Serpent shouldn’t have any connection with the Flamels.

Kiran Sreekantham

This was unclear to me too. Also in the meeting with the Russian he talks about seeing Harry’s eyes. I figured, eh, it’s fiction!

Zach B

It's so funny to me that people really hate Cassiopeia here because she is a really well written villain, but it seems like your next story will have her as one of our main good guys as the person who raises Harry. It's a testament to your writing skill

Calagon

Harry’s face and eyes aren’t truly concealed. He wears glamours to prevent people knowing his real identity. Those glamours may not conceal emotions or experience in them.

Kevin

Cassie is a good guy in TBR’s bellatrix story. Cassie gets just way too much leeway, as do most enemies… harry/the serpent needs to start dishing out some serious vengeance now. I’d love to see him go after gaulitier or weber…