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Some Harry and Amelia interaction...

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stevem1

Harry and Amelia are bonding. Excellent set up for the battle to come. Voldemort is finally on screen. All in all, an enjoyable chapter.

george zuki

Hope you’re having a great day today guys

Harharryhar

This one is really shaping up to be good. Love the tone change from the previous ones

AlexanderR

We got the introduction to Voldemort, Harry and Amelia traveling through the forest, and Dumbledore outside of the forest thinking lol. Great chapter.

Sunny

I like how you've made Tom look similar to when he applied for the DADA job. I reckon, like when Harry Peverell faced him, this version will be a harder opponent to the one in Jameson's own time, which makes it all that exciting. It's also nice to see that Harry himself has grown up as a person and feels little need to enter shouting matches with people. Really shows where he's at personally. Lastly, I think this is the first time, or at least one of few times, where the in efficiency of scent masking charms has been called out, haha. Anyway, thank you for the chapter Mr McCusker and I look forward to the next one.

Sunny

Jakub Horehleď

Just 1 thing. If I remember correctly Harry mentioned to Amelia he is the new DADA professor in the last chapter but now she seemingly forgotten it when and Harry had to tell her again. Just something to check.