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APOLOGIES CHAPTER WAS INCOMPLETE FOR FIRST UPLOAD!!

This may feel a little disjointed in places, but I kept it as chronological as possible. Between the beginning and end of the chapter, a period of around two months passes...

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Preboo

Amazing as always. Can’t help but wanting MORE!!!

Jeromey Johnson

I hope another chapter comes soon! This is fantastic

Frodran

This is amazing!!

AlexanderR

That's incredible, them deciding to come just as Jon is leaving. What a coincidence. Is there a way for Jon to make it beyond the wall without having to go through the watch? Will they let him go through? I can't remember from the show or books whether someone had to approve you going from south of the wall to north of it.

Steven Clark Moss

Outstanding chapter. Very engaging. Aerys is a lunatic but he’s isn’t completely stupid. Jon and Ashara need to be locked in a room. Varys is a rat. Looking forward to more.

Chad Snider

Love it. Congrats on another stellar chap.

bart rijnhart

Chapter is gone cant see it any more did something go wrong

bart rijnhart

Now its back that was a bit weird

Ryan

Genuinely incredible writing, you need to prioritize this story for a while because you have done a great job in building something perfect. I need to see more

Don Ours

I've never been a fan of GoT but this story is amazing and as always, leaves me eagerly awaiting more

Thor

So good, what a shame Jon will not be at home, Ashara will be very disturbed. And to go north of the wall without the Ghost? Blasphemy :D

Joshua Nichols

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