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The intrigue continues....

EDIT: Incomplete chapter was uploaded in error

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Sunny

Nice of you to add a hat-trick of references, but I'm guessing it would've been a bit too far for Arcturus to say "hey, weren't you the guy that killed a dragon with a broom and sword", haha. Anyway, thanks for the chapter Mr McCusker and I look forward to the next one.

Steven Clark Moss

Enjoyed the chapter. The investigation into Amelia’s parent’s death is interesting. The only thing I questioned is the concept of ‘toying’ with your opponent. It’s bad tactics, not matter the skill, size, speed, or strength disparity. It creates time for a lucky shot, and even the best fighters are not immune to bad luck, which is something Harry should be familiar with. Hit them hard, hit them fast, and keep hitting until the threat is over.