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From her hill, Mirian watched the Akanan air yacht approach. In the end, it would be Troytin’s predictability and inflexibility that would do him in. And his inability to conceive of a world where allies are better than underlings.

Well, no sense ruminating on his deficiencies. Whatever they were, he had to go. Mirian waited for the airship to grow closer, then cast total camouflage and levitation. She rapidly rose up to meet the yacht, adjusting her course slightly as it approached.

She waited, just above where it would pass, then embraced the Dusk Waves dervish stance for the extra reaction time. As soon as the deck was below her, she dropped down. The watchman on the deck heard the thud and turned, but she held still until he turned back. Then Mirian headed below decks.

A carpeted spiral staircase brought her down to the first level. There, in the narrow hall, was Marshal Cearsia. She either noticed the distortion in the air or felt Mirian’s aura, because her spellbook was in her hand in an instant.

First, she’ll try the shackle spell, Mirian knew, and sure enough, she did. The force shackles disintegrated against her spell resistance. Mirian summoned Eclipse to her hand and gave a downward slice through the Marshal’s spellbook, which let out a burst of flame, then lunged, piercing her gut.

Cearsia grunted, then tried to blast Mirian with a raw heat spell as she staggered back. Mirian blocked it with a prismatic shield, then used a force blade spell to cut off her head. The woman dropped to the ground. Mirian opened the first cabin door. One of the agents. She sent force blades through him, slicing his bed to ribbons, then moved to the next cabin. 

Troytin was sitting up in alarm. He reached for his spellbook.

Too late, Mirian thought with a snarl. She used a blast of raw force to knock it out of his reach, then used total hold person. That would prevent him from moving, biting down, or even breathing too hard. She used force blast on the wall. The warded wooden hull cracked. She used disintegration ray to knock out the easiest-to-reach reinforcing glyphs. Behind her, she could hear commotion. She used force blast again, and this time the hull buckled. A third time, and she burst a hole in the wall. Troytin’s eyes widened in alarm as the hull opened up into the open air, wind screaming by them.

Mirian continued to hold him with the spell, dragging him out into the air with her. She switched to the Lone Pine stance for endurance, and used force grapple to give herself the pushes she needed to stay the same speed as the ship. Then, she took aim at the stabilizing wings with magnetic detonation, enhancing it with her full power.

The metal anchoring the port wing shrieked as it was twisted. The ship began to list. She could just make out shouting over the roar of the wind. Mirian circled them under the ship, using more force grapples to keep them alongside it, then took aim at the second wing. With a gesture, it too exploded, ripping off entirely and shooting off behind them. Mirian used lift object to push the rear of the ship up, bringing the nose beyond any safe angle. With no stability, the airship began to spin, diving down as it did. Mirian used another magnetic explosion, this time aiming for the inside of the ship where she knew the primary spell engine was. The ship shuddered.

Mirian cut her inertia with levitation and descended straight down, Troytin in tow. The skiff continued forward, plummeting faster and faster until it hit the ground and erupted in flames. Mirian watched the wreckage to make sure there were no survivors as she continued her descent. Satisfied, she brought the two of them to the top of a hill where her myrvite-repelling wards were still in place. She used detect myrvite to double check nothing would bother them.

Troytin was looking at her, eyes watering because the total hold person spell was making it hard for him to blink. She used careful force blades to cut apart his clothing, leaving him only in his underwear. Sure enough, he had an arcane catalyst hidden in his boot. Mirian brought Troytin down so he was at eye level with her, then forced his mouth open, checking for any poison pills like Specter had. Nothing. She circled around him. Nothing. She checked his ears for any miniature devices, then used a series of divination spells to make sure she hadn’t missed anything.

Satisfied, she released total hold person and switched it to hold person, which would just keep his limbs and body immobile.

“Got you,” she said, giving him a fake smile.

“Fuck you,” Troytin said in Eskanar, and spat at her.

Mirian blocked it with a raw burst of force, sending the spittle back into his face. “That’s not really endearing you to me. Not that it matters. In the end, I’m only talking to you because I want one thing from you.”

Troytin gave Mirian a condescending smirk. “You’ll get nothing from me. You might as well kill me. But whatever you try, it won’t work. See, there’s no way to pin me down. If you curse me, a priest will just break the curse. There’s no way for you to reach me, because your primitive little country doesn’t have airships. In the end, you are at my mercy. This little setback means nothing.”

Mirian looked bored. “You still think this about you. Do you know anything meaningful about the time loop? About the leylines? The Divine Monument? The Ominian? About the apocalypse?”

“Wouldn’t you like to know?” Troytin said smugly.

Mirian sighed. “Have you figured out that we were supposed to work together yet? Imagine. If you collected data on the leylines in Akana Praediar, I collected it here, and Ibrahim collected it in Persama, we could figure out what’s disrupting them. You could mobilize the resources of the Akanans, building great spell engines. Ibrahim would be able to unite all the warlords in Persama and provide the fuel. I could get Baracuel under my thumb, bringing together its researchers and unlocking the secrets of the Monument. Together, we might have actually been able to stabilize the leylines and stop the moonfall by now.”

Troytin laughed at her. “You’re a fool, and so is that Persaman rat. After you, he’s next. There’s only one Ominian. There is only ever one Prophet. And it will be me.”

Mirian looked him over. “Huh. You sure about that? You might want to… lift weights, maybe? Learn a few more spells? Grow a few inches?”

The other time traveler glared at her. She’d broached a sensitive subject for him. She knew from his illusion spells he liked to present himself as taller and more muscular. “The others underestimated me too,” he snapped. “And one by one, I ended them. Jherica will never wake up now. Celen succumbed to despair.” He laughed. “I didn’t even learn the others’ names. My little agents took care of them for me. The Ominian can see they were unworthy. After you all fall to me, the true trial will begin.”

Mirian froze. Had he really just let that slip? Or was he playing a game with her? “Where are they?” she asked.

“Wouldn’t you like to know?”

That wasn’t going to work. “Did you know Specter was writing notes for herself all over your soul?” she asked.

That gave him pause. “Only a select few are blessed by the Ominian to be born with…” he started, but trailed off.

“Yeah, you really think the Ominian chose you as a Prophet, but wouldn’t bless you with soul magic? Look, you’ve been lied to by a lot of people, and you believe it because it feeds your ego. But the truth is a harder thing to face. Specter was manipulating you. Did you ever figure out where the hole above your bed came from?”

Troytin strained against his bonds.

Mirian rolled her eyes. “For all intents and purposes, I can hold you indefinitely. I just stood against Apophagorga, a cataclysm beast. Do you really think you stand a fucking chance against me?”

The other time traveler looked down, seeing her spellbook—really seeing it—for the first time. The ethereal shimmer of the Holy Pages. The adamantium and mythril frame.

“Now you’re starting to understand. I wasn’t running from you because I was weak. Unlike you, I actually have a plan to solve this.” Sort of. “Now are you going to tell me anything useful? Do you actually know anything useful?”

The man was silent. She could see his eyes darting around. Perhaps he didn’t quite realize what was about to happen to him, but he knew it wouldn’t be good.

“Behind you!” Troytin said.

Mirian burst out laughing. “There’s no one around for miles. And if you didn’t notice, Tyrcast and the other arcanists you brought along don’t carry levitation wands. Bit of a problem if their airship malfunctions, don’t you agree? I chose a place I was sure we wouldn’t be disturbed. Unless you think the stone moles will save you?”

Troytin struggled against the spell again, but it would do nothing. Even without her soul repositories, his spell resistance was too feeble to be a problem for her anymore.

“I know your measure too well. See, you could have apologized to me at any time. Tried to make amends. The thing is, you showed your true character when you had the upper hand. There’s an old quote about that, I think. ‘Power doesn’t corrupt, it reveals.’ Would you like to apologize? Finally do something to help stop these endless years of apocalypse? This is your last chance.”

The Akanan was silent. His eyes were darting around, still looking for some way out. “Fuck you,” he said.

“Very well. Those can be your last words as ‘Prophet.’” She said the last word with scorn. Then she began to cast.

There was another spell she’d been developing in Endresen’s lab. A mixed celestial-arcane spell that required several tri-bonded sequences and a great deal of precision and control. Mirian closed her eyes and began to cast remove temporal anchor.

Tiny prongs of arcane-celestial force entered the void in Troytin’s soul. With her eyes closed, it was easier to imagine them moving into that four-dimensional space. She couldn’t describe the image, but with the coordinates in her mind, she could see it. Gradually, she brought the force into contact with the four-dimensional blade wedged in his soul. She transmuted the energy from arcane to physical force and gently folded the first anchor blade.

Troytin’s soul roiled. He strained again, this time shouting out. “What the fuck are you doing? Let me go! I’m a Prophet! We—you said it yourself. We need to work together!”

Mirian ignored him and concentrated. Another arcane tendril wove its way around the anchor. She pushed, and another blade folded in. She maintained the pressure, careful to keep the device steady.

The other time traveler, at last, was starting to figure it out. For someone unaccustomed to soul magic, it might feel like something was crawling around his insides. A terribly unnerving feeling. “Wait! Wait! Celen is in Mercanton, on Merchant’s Avenue, above the wainwright shop. Jherica is in Vadriach, in the… the University! I—I don’t remember where, but you can find him. Fuck, what are you doing? I c-can—feel it. A pressure. P-please stop.”

Mirian folded the third prong up back into the device. Her brow furrowed as she strained with the effort. The device was trying to move, but she had to keep it steady. If she or it brushed the inside of the dimensional container it had created for itself—or whatever it was—Troytin would find himself removed from this cycle. If that happened, only the Ominian knew how long it would be before she got another chance.

Troytin had gone pale and clammy. His voice had a tremor in it, and he was starting to slur his words. “W-was lying about the o-other travelers… w-wait… was I? Whatever… whatever you’re doing… y-you have t-to… have to stop….” He let in a sharp intake of breath. There were distortions in his soul like she’d never seen before, originating from the last arm of the Elder device. “C-can’t r-remember. Never could figure out the… the Monument. C-can’t stop me… too safe at Arborholm… c-can’t… can’t…”

With the precision of a surgeon, Mirian folded the last prong down, wrapping the entire thing with stabilizing force. She wanted to keep the anchor, study it. Perhaps it could be implanted in someone more worthy. It would be her choice this time. She’d finally have an ally, a friend, could stop being so lonely—

The last arm of the anchor clicked back into the main body. She gently applied force to remove it, but suddenly the thing shot out, sending Mirian stumbling backward. There was a crack! in the air as it sped past her, then a gentle rumble like distant thunder, then it was gone. Damnit! Mirian thought. It could have been Jei. It could have been Lily. Or Lecne. Or—damn!

She looked longingly to the southeast. She couldn’t tell exactly where it had gone, it had been moving too fast. She could stop a moving bullet with ease, but the anchor had moved with far more force than should have been possible. That should do it, though, she thought. She released the holding spell on Troytin. The hole in his soul was gone. 

“W-what… what have you done to me?” Troytin gasped, clutching his chest. He was covered in sweat and still pale.

“I’ve removed you from the time loop,” she said. “You’re no longer a Prophet. You were never worthy of the name.” She burned his pile of clothes with a bit of raw magic and telekinetically flung the extra catalyst, his pistol, and his dagger off into the distance.

Troytin let out a shriek and fell to his knees. “No… no! You can’t… the Ominian chose me! The Ominian chose me!

She had wanted to return to Torrviol with the anchor, but with that out of reach, she needed to see what she could learn from him. She looked down at him with disgust. Enteria comes first, she decided. “For the rest of the cycle, we will live in the remote wilderness. After all, I can’t risk you telling any of the other time travelers what I can do. If they realize the capability exists, they might try to learn it. And I don’t want anyone like you learning to do what I’ve just done. This cycle, you may redeem yourself by telling me about the Deeps. About Akana Praediar and the little conspiracy over there. Operation Zenith. Specter. The networks in Baracuel. What you know of Ibrahim. Anything you learned about the Monument. Or…” She hesitated. He had grown desperate at the end. She didn’t think he’d been lying, though the implications already disrubed her. “Or Celen or Jherica. Tell me everything.”

“Fuck you!” he screamed. “I’ll tell you nothing! The Ominian… He’ll smite you. And restore me to my rightful place. You’ll burn in the last layer of hell for what you’ve done!” Tears streaked his face. He stood and charged at Mirian, though it was more stumbling than anything worrisome. Mirian stepped to the side and threw him like Rostal had taught her and he fell, sprawled out on the cold grass. He spit out a mouthful of dirt.

Mirian sighed, then started dragging him north by his leg until he tired of having his face dragged about in the grass and rose to his feet.


***


During the day, when she wasn’t interrogating Troytin, Mirian hunted, practiced spells, or just spent time relaxing. Without clothes, shoes, or any weapon, Troytin wasn’t going anywhere in the cold wilderness. At night, she used shape stone to trap his arms and feet, then set up anti-myrvite wards. Then they’d pack up camp and move north again. 

By the time the Akanans invaded, they were miles and miles from the line of attack. Too far for any divination to catch them.

In the end, she learned little. Troytin spent most of his last days cursing or begging. Occasionally, he’d tell her tidbits of information as part of his pleading. Between the rants, lies, and bargaining, she picked up a few things. A bit about security operations in Akana Praediar. A few tidbits about the conspiracy and its leaders. Some more about the Deeps and the coup. 

Her nemesis’s end was a pathetic sight. He begged and pleaded with her to restore the temporal anchor, as if it was even in her power to do so once it was gone. By the time the end came, he’d stopped doing that. Wouldn’t answer questions, wouldn’t beg, wouldn’t even speak. Just sat there, listlessly, staring at the ground, eyes red from crying.

Mirian had little pity for him. He never tried to redeem himself. Redemption isn’t for everyone, she heard Arenthia say.

As Troytin watched the moon grow large as it came down somewhere over Persama, trembling in terror, Mirian knew, certainly, it wasn’t for him.

Comments

Clara

Ah oops!... Teehee

Satya Prateek

Holy fucking shit. So good. I still remember royalroad commenter's freaking out about troytin first sabotaging mirian. The arc you've written from there till here has been phenomenal

buca117

Niiiice. Now it’s time to find the others and start working on resolving the problem for real. Should have known there were more prophets in Akana.

Robert Mullins

Shame she lost the anchor but maybe it will find a new host on its own. Or ominian reclaimed it and will send it back out.

Clara

I hope she can help the other prophets heal.... Also since the loop device was implanted the moment before the loop. If the device she just took off Troytin attached to someone else, I wonder if their loop will start a few days later to match when it's implanted?

RainbowCatTopHat

Painful that she can't give the anchor to whoever she wants, but I wonder if we'll be seeing a new time traveler make themself known in the future. I also wonder how much truth there was to his claims about other time travelers or if even to the very end it was all lies.

SinfulCow

Good freaking riddance to that recalcitrant stain on this wonderful story. Looking forward to seeing where Mirian goes from here.

Kaelik

Would be extremely funny if troytkin did actually have way more time then Miriam and that there are three temporal anchors and both of those people relinquished theirs when they gave up.

ben

Hopefully the soul anchor didn’t choose someone competent like a deeps agent!

Robert Mullins

Ideally it did choose someone competent but this time someone who actually cares more about saving the world than whatever their local problem is.

ActionKermit

Damn, that was as brutal as it was deserved

Ahppy

That was cathartic. Especially how she casually grabbed him at a time when he was safest.

Seri

Huh that's interesting theres two other travelers that troytin had foibled. Certainly makes more sense why Mirian went through so many loops unopposed, although did troytin really have time every loop to deal with the other two as well?

Xeophyn

I wonder if Troytin will revert to how he was before the loops or if he will relive this last one repeatedly

Emma Mass

He could have dealt with them one by one. And he permanently disabled them so they would no longer be a concern, like what he attempted to to with Mirian

FuriousDee

If they are still in the loops Mirian might be able to undo what he did

Touch

Aw man, imagine it got into the legendary necromancer

David Brims

There's no indication the anchors can be voluntarily or involuntarily relinquished. Even changes to the soul weren't enough

Orion Fritz

It'd be kinda funny if the ancor went back to troytin next loop, with the difference being that he's starting his first loop again. Or potentially, he isn't removed from the loop at all, with the difference being that he can't remember anything from after the ancor was removed.

Kaelik

Okay but there was no indication that the sould anchors existed until there was. I am perfectly happy to find out that Miriam has always been a prophet candidate, but i would not be surprised if the temporal anchors had some way of moving on based on some set of conditions which where triggered by the previous time travelers giving up, and it would make it very funny if troytkin created Miriam by breaking others. I don't even think it's that likely! One near each divine monument fits well and maybe troytkin was just broken or lying. But we don't currently know if the other referenced time travleres are still to time travelers or ever really existed.

Kaelik

I think it will he fun to have her trying to hunt down the next time traveller. Making spells to analyze buildings for holes.

Emma Mass

They should be, as far as we know, Mirian should be the only one who's learned how to remove the anchors. The other loopers all seem to have different specialities and fields of interest. Perhaps the only other one I could think of is the person vadriach university. Whether they are a student or staff, they have more and easier access to this type of information. I don't think Mirians background as a student was an accident, it probably played a major role in the direction she decided to take with her ability as a looper, and her exponential growth in power as a mage. My bad, archmage ;)

David Brims

As horrifying as it would be if it went back to Troytin, for starters he was there not somewhere else, and the anchor went South-East. Which from the map would be Eastern Baracuel such as Alkazaria, Persama, or far off Zhighua

DrSubterfuge

For what it's worth the anchor was hinted at in a prophet dream in volume one, though it was clearly metaphorical to some degree and so full of other people it wasn't clear how literally to take it. Since, after all, she was still knee deep in the influence of propaganda and there was only history of one prophet at a time. But in the dream a whole bunch of people (including Mirian) all had something that was related to time and anchors fall from the sky and pierce their chests. The fact that it really was quasi-physical and hard but not impossible to remove if you know what you're doing was the revelation.

Kaelik

Even it's physicality was at least inferred from the hole in the ceiling, but it could have stopped being physical at point of soul impact. My point is just that there not being indications of things is not evidence that they aren't true when they haven't been investigated yet. Maybe the anchors can reject a host for reasons maybe not, but we can't currently foreclose that possibility just because we don't have physical proof for it yet.

AntiClimax she her

As Mountainking said, likely had them cursed like he had done to Mirian, or terrorized them until they gave up to hide, like he tried to do to Mirian. Another alternative is that he has contacts that can kill them almost immediately at the start of a cycle, like Mirian did to spectre. I'm assuming a mix of the first 2 from his words. "Jherica will never wake up now. Celen succumbed to despair." Good news is that if Mirian can get to them before the end of a cycle she can remove Jehrica's curse, and give Celen hope now that the prick has been removed.

Enthernal

I like the development she didn't get the anchor, I do hope it picks a new host, and she should actively keep an eye and ear out for a new time traveller. I also like the theory of the anchors selecting new hosts, it would fit with the theory miriam may not have started at the very beginning of the loops. It might be possible to willingly give up an anchor, for example if the candidate abandons hope/conviction.

Aesoir

The one thing that might have been nice, is for Mirian to threaten Troytin to cooperate or share specter’s fate. That if he proves irredeemable, then he’ll be among the dead when the final loop ends.

Jonas

Damn. It was a smart thing to stockpile these last two loops. I have no idea how you all got through this being drop fed... But honestly, this elimination of troytin was more merciful/peaceful than I expected. Ultimately, I think it's best If she tried to preserve as much of her humanity as possible. If she refuses to do things the easy way, it also makes future disputes with opponents more interesting, as she is basically now unparalleled. Only the old necromancer might still be a big hurdle, and that also only If he can threathen her time-anchor as she can

Jonas

I think the Idea that the Omnian created the set of time anchors in a way that they will target candidates, start the loop for them from the time of contact, and are reusable as long as the end of the world is not prevented, could be a working concept in this world. But based on the reports on the rebellion I think it's quite certain, that the rebellion prophet (Ibrahim?) starts the timeloop at basically the same time as Miriam, and while Troytin is pretty fast in consolidating Power and traveling continents, If he would start multiple days before Miriam, he should have tried to be in torviol bevor her reset. So If 3 out of 3 of our currently know prophets share the same reset day, it's very unlikely that the anchors have individually searched for them after three others have released them at (basically) the same time

Jonas

I agree. Imagine If she waited with the removal until Just before the apocalypse and you were chosen to repeat the last 1-2 days, with hardly any time to do anything or get any rest. That would be more curse than godly blessing

Kaelik

I meant "more time" like he had a bunch of loops before she did and then someone else he traumatized gave up their anchor so Miriam has had fewer loops. I think it's most likely that before today's chapter everyone has the same number of loops, but the possibility is funny.

marten

Oh My God. The beginning was so absolutely awesome with how Mirian overcame all those pesky Akanians which had been so dangerous the last time she encountered them. And then that. I have to say, Troytin's character didn't make sense to me before. But it seems like he was indoctrinated to see himself as the prophet? Or maybe he starts his loop together with one of the other loopers and spent ages watching them, being jealous, until he found a way to dispose of them. And they justified it with a grandiose self delusion. All in all: what an epic showdown.

marten

Oh come on! Troytin was a cool villain. A good starter boss ;)

marten

Just thought of this: Why would Troytin react to Mirian talking about the hole in his roof at the start of the loop when he knows two other time travelers? Are those wrong leads?

Michael Neal

Finally! Eff Troytin! Good riddance.

Joseph Berry

Yeah, assuming the anchor is the thing that carries their soul intact across the resets it's removal means he'll just be the same as everyone else.

The Ox

How to do that though? He's in Akana Prediar at the start of the loop. She'd need to have an airship made of relicarium (sp?) stored in her soul so she could zoom over the sea to get him at the beginning of the loop which seems like a waste of time and resources. Just leave him to be a pathetic little loser he always used to be. I assume he loses his memories without the anchor? Not that we have confirmation of that?

Xeophyn

Doesn't that depend on what the loop considers the 'base state'? If it took a single snap shot at the very beginning, then Troytin would be reset entirely. But if it just sets things to what they were at the start of the current loop, then he'd be this Troytin forever. Which would provide interesting opportunities for Mirian to interrogate him repeatedly, or use the airships he always brings over.

Milo

FET GUCKED TROYTIN

Sebastian Prue

Yes! God I wish this was animated or illustrated. A very satisfying end to an evil bastard

FuriousDee

She can just kill him after the loop though honestly I don't think that would be a particularly effective threat at this point

puppy0cam

there's a couple possibilities here: either troytin is fully out of the loop or his memories have just been reset and he's about to experience his first loop again. I reckon it's the latter but I would love to be proven wrong. but something more interesting in the former case is the temporal anchor that shot off. did it go to a new host? if so, will they start each cycle at a later point than mirian does or will they come back at the start of the cycle?

puppy0cam

even if he starts again, he's unlikely to rise to be as large a threat as he used to be. He won't have the practise (read: begging specter to pretty please help) he had of subduing other loopers in order to remove mirian.

Raivshard

Or since it's a temporal anchor that literally induces time travel, it just goes back to the exact same date as everyone else before implanting. Seems like that might be part of its wheelhouse.

David Brims

Troytin would immediately have noticed if the guy who gave in to despair - Celen - suddenly stopped despairing because he lost the anchor. Troytin is a paranoid sadistic SOB who would be watching like a hawk and tormenting the guy every cycle.

FuriousDee

He can’t just relive this loop again unless Mirian acts the same way each time

luxrus

Goddamn

DrSubterfuge

I don't think struggling with the bonds is all that much of a reaction. But maybe it's an indication he has some vague ideas about what she's planning? He's seen the hole and the vision that attempts to explain the anchor just as she has

Nick

Tftc

Draddock

If Mirian has the holy pages - now she can take notes for Jei or Lecne, right? :O

DrSubterfuge

I dunno, she could have been much worse to him, but making him wait out the whole month in his underwear for the moon to fall doesn't seem particularly merciful to me. I wouldn't go as far as calling it psychological torture, but it definitely had it's own brutality.

chumponimys

Troytin is reacting because Mirian is implying she dug into--and has uncovered--the secrets of the mechanism of the loops. He's realizing that maybe, just maaaybe, he's in a more dangerous situation than he thought.

sparkc

Good choice not belabouring Troytin’s downfall any further. This was a good place for his story to end and the speed at which happens helps emphasise how far Mirian has come. I do dislike how much of a caricature troytin (and spectre) was and do hope Ibrahim or any future antagonists have some more nuance to them.

Elaine

good chappie

Draddock

Would just like to share a song titled "Honor Thy Prophet" https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=TZn2qmGpG30

Cameron Earl

I wondered if Troytin would continue reliving his last cycle - coming back with no memory of having the nail removed, but remembering all the loops up till then. Perhaps acting differently because the feeling of the missing nail. Might give some more complications or opportunities to interrogate him.

DrSubterfuge

I see Troytin as a kid with an inferiority complex who never grew up because his actions stopped feeling like they had any negative consequences that mattered. The fact that he apparently did some pretty horrible stuff to two other loopers and “won” can’t have helped.

Morog T Tiny

good chapter, good riddance.

Matthew Brinicombe

(Cheeky Hamster, from Royal Road) So satisfying, I’m glad I shelled out for a month when I did, to show my gratitude, and these were the 25 chapters I got - so much to digest and I was glad to not have to wait for these chapters to be drip fed as they were so intense! 5/5

Xeophyn

I think it's interesting characterization that Mirian doesn't even think to pretend that she can reinstate his anchor. Even if it would help to pump him for information. Like the concept of lying is something she is aware of, but doesn't come readily to her.

Luna

Can't wait to see what she does next!

The Ox

It still is totally unclear what the anchor actually does. It seems like memories and the soul are separate. So maybe Troytin would have all his memories of the loops still? But all of Spectre's notes and other soul modificaitons etc would be gone. I think?

Orion Fritz

I mean, worst case, she just kills him a few months after the loops end. But even if not, she probably has decades worth of repition to work with still. maybe she creates a super speed flying spell. maybe she invents a witch's broom spell engine. Maybe she even invents a teleportation spell (which I personally think will eventually happen considering how often the book mentions it being "impossible"). Sure, she can't get there easily now, but who's to say what will happen by the end.

DrSubterfuge

Good call. Though I can imagine the page requirements quickly getting out of control and prompting a whole new branch of research into new ways to encode information

DrSubterfuge

I don’t think anything in the body can be said to be separate from the soul. Considering a curse can modify memory they very much seem linked. I think at minimum we can say the anchor contains information about the state of the soul at the end of the loop (including memory) and facilitates the transfer of that information to the beginning, including failsafe reset protocols to protect the loopers.

DrSubterfuge

The revelation about the two other loopers very much feels like setup for an arc in Akana Prediar. Arduously crossing the strait and healing even one of the other loopers opens up the possibility of them being able to fly an airship over early in the month and bring Mirian back with them. Longer term, teleportation definitely feels like it’s in the cards. We already know a short range blink through extradimensional space is possible, and that can theoretically be extended with enough spell power. Next step is maybe more stone mole research to figure out how to blink herself? Of course, there might also be an explicit teleport glyph, like how kinetic force glyphs can cause flight but are way less efficient than the purpose built levitation glyph. Discovering an explicit teleport glyph feels like it would take getting lucky in the Labyrinth though.

DrSubterfuge

I like how the three people Mirian thinks about adding to the loop are the three people we collectively suggested to each other in the comments. At first I assumed that was a reflection of our comments, but now that I’m writing this part of me hopes Phoenix had that there days before the previous chapter was posted.

Aesoir

Teleportation or some sort of 4th dimensional travel is all but guaranteed to eventually happen. Too much needs to happen all over the world for it not to. Mirian wouldn’t have to “do” much of anything, other than save one of the other loopers (I’m sure they’ll perma-death him). I didn’t say Mirian should necessarily go out of her way to do so, instead merely to “threaten” as part of her interrogation.

Aesoir

The author here is correct, in that most times forced interrogations don’t result in a lot of useful information. Especially with a “have nothing to loose” person. While Mirian will have another crack at an anchor if/when she offers Celen salvation from the loop, the other looper(s) will have a massive vendetta against Troytin, all she has to do is save them and “not” try to convince them away from revenge, to fulfill the threat.

luxrus

This is loop 160 or something right? In Mother of Learning we meet Zach at loop 200… crazy to imagine

Allora Lee

Finally the worm is gone!!! Can’t wait to see what the loop looks like without him!

Isaac Boyles

Finally rid of that bastard

Andrei

It feels quite weird though that removing the time travel anchor designed and implanted by a God was so easy, without any additional protections (such as a check on whether the attacker is also a Prophet). While the skill level required to do so is clearly high, it's not above the level of any extremely competent soul mage (see for example the Necromancer that keeps getting mentioned), and it feels weird that the Ominian would allow their champion to be permanently killed during their "holy mission" by anyone other than another Prophet.

Emma Mass

It's actually incredibly difficult. Mirian is not just an archmage in power output but is an expert in knowledge in many feilds. Further there are very few with her ability and control with mana let alone soul energy, she's probably up there with the necromancer. Nevermind that she's probably the only person who can manage tribonded glyphs, add on her expertise in mathematics and the fourth spacial dimension and the only one with an equivalent soul anchor to even do experiment with and it's a pretty impossible task. Yes there are archmages, can they also control soul energy? The priest are hardly archmages and arcane pretorians are combat specialists. How many of them are even aware of the dervish stances? I can't say with certainty, but although the necromancer may have the prerequisite power and control in both mana and celestial magic I highly doubt he has such involved and in depth knowledge of mathematics, artificery, glyph formation and the fourth spacial dimension. It's a confluence of things that took Mirian nearly ten years to acquire. It's definitely not easy.

antpocas

Isn't the necromancer hundreds of years old? 10 years is not that long from his perspective.