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Lo everyone. Bit late on this. My bad.

https://www.patreon.com/posts/124396271 is now available for everyone as next month's post. Hope you all enjoy! I deleted the text for the lemon, but you can still find it on the PDF I uploaded. I hope I got to it in time so that the cunts don't restrict the post.

The first chapter of the solo leveling fic is also up, for vice captains and above. Not much else to say tonight, other than apologizing for my utter failure to write the next chapter for Emerald Phoenix. You can see THAT rant on the solo leveling author's notes.

Toodles!

Comments

twilightwanderer

I'm glad you were able to build up a couple chapters of buffer on the Solo Leveling story, hopefully that can take a bit of stress off. As far as EP goes, you're in a tough spot from a writing perspective: near the end of a tournament arc where everyone's had the chance to show off and most if not all of the major emotional payoffs and character interactions have already happened. (if you want to avoid my unsolicited brainstorming/spitballing, ignore the rest of my comment knowing I appreciate the difficulty and wish you success in working through it) Personally, I wouldn't mind too much if the rest of the fights are more skimmed over or told from an outside perspective (a la the Quantity of Quirks with Mirko and Ryukyu watching Izuku vs Shoto). Even just jump to the next arc opening and cover any critical bits in flashbacks. Another take I like that I don't see too often is the fights getting less dramatic and spectacular as the students go up the brackets, since they've been pushing themselves and are getting tired. There's also always the old (pre-enshitified) NaNoWriMo standby of "suddenly AfO/ninjas/the Fire Nation attacks" (although that *does* depend on what you had planned next). That's all assuming that tournament arc fatigue is the major culprit at play, I could be off-base and it's something else completely, and obviously I don't know what you had planned. I do think you set a high bar for yourself in choosing to go full send on the Sports Festival _after_ doing both a fully fleshed out, everyone fights, USJ, AND the I-Island tower climb, there's not a whole lot left to introduce or expand on here and now, and canon doesn't give much to work with either (hell, half the reason the Sports Festival worked in canon was that it was short and ultimately subverted a lot of standard tournament tropes). I've seen it done well in fanfic, and I believe you certainly could do it, but it's definitely a hard task to take on, and (if accurate) I'd hate to see it kill your love for the story. I hope you'll find your inspiration again, and either way, I'm glad you seem to be enjoying Party Leveling (or whatever the title ends up as)

Travis Burgin

Thank you for being consistent with your double monthly uploads it is something I look forward to every 2-3 weeks. Current Fav has to be Thunderous and Red Hair GF close second. Also just want to say been a fan since about chapter 3 of Supernova all those years ago keep up the good writing