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Orchamus

Hoping for a good end result with Papa Sung, also sweet fuck Miho, what a physical beasty she be😯 Also ROFL Joohee and Soohyn both have minions now too. Gotta love minions, even if Jin Woo still minion master

Cody

This story continues to be amazing! I also loved the twist that Jinwoo's dad is also a player and cannot wait to see how that factors into the story going forward and of course the girls are all steadily getting stronger :) I too wanted to see best girl Esil but alas soon I hope and that she will eventually join the harem along with Song Yi.

Damon Morado

The original architect would never help the brilliant light forces so it must be a different architect 🤔

GoBigBlue357

when the deviljho first showed up, i could almost HEAR the music from MHW

Craig Jacks

I'm so glad they included Jinho on the Player gains, and happier that they also explained why Songyi was so much closer to the Players than before. He's more likely to become a respected Guild Master now that he can level up. Sung Il-Hwan showed up, so now things will escalate since he knows what's coming, and hopefully he doesn't need to deal with a S-Rank moron like Hwang Dongsoo, who just makes every situation worse. Jinwoo cleared the Demon's Castle SO much more efficiently when he got those 2 swords (killed Vulcan so quick he was disappointed), and I'm excited that he'll meet Esil next time! Also him telling Jinah what he's doing and why, since she really deserves to know. I feel for Soohyun when she had to deal with Aes Sidhe again, but I'm glad she got something so good out of beating it. Joohee got genuinely mad at that Joy angel for changing into Miho and stabbing her, but she handled things as best she could before she had to leave. But that weapon, Blood of Ashborn... If only she knew the history behind that name. And then Miho learned why Deviljho are such literal monsters to deal with. I'd be worried if she absorbed its powers. I can't decide who got the best gear/experience out of this, but I'm looking forward to round 2, Electric Boogaloo . :)

Craig Jacks

Hopefully Sung Il-Hwan will survive since being a Player should help his body adapt to his power, and hopefully he won't need to deal with DumbShit saying "He's just a magic beast and he's gonna attack us" out of his personal beef with Jinwoo. And I hope Jinwoo meets Esil soon, and brings her with him to the human world. :)

savitar

I was left wanting more. Every time I read a chapter of one of your stories, I'm left wanting more because they're so incredible. I'm glad Jinwoo opened up to his sister; she was always worried about him. Super Dad appears—oh yeah, he has a system. Something tells me Kandairu is going to get a very unpleasant surprise, hahaha. We're getting closer to many interesting things: Esill, the first battle against a monarch, the orcs, the appearance of Cha Hae In, and of course, Jeju Island. I wonder if he could turn Goto into a shadow; it would certainly be useful. Thanks for another great chapter; I'll be waiting for the next ones with bated breath.

Michael Friede

First, fantastic chapter, very glad that Dad Sun is a player too, much better than canon. Love the 'totally useless' chunks of metal, cuz that screams crafting materials for Mythic Gear. Got a question though, do MH and Bleach exist in universe? For Miho to recognize the creatures?

Kadrym

Is there a plan for cha hae-in? Just wondering.

Rodrigus

Jinwoo is a very lucky man. Quote{ “Never mind that!” Jinho grinned as he patted the van Miho had bought for their raids. “Your chariot awaits!”} So, why is Jinho the one driving if Miho is the one who bought the van, and when did he get the key? That aside, I am glad that Jinho got his invite and can now become stronger himself. I wonder if he, Heejin and Songyi will also get the ability to invite one person after doing their Job change quests or maybe the original system holders will get another minion slot after their current ones reach that or another milestone. Interesting that you made Jinwoo's dad a Player and that this time around he's able to communicate with the locals more easily, probably due to the system. I look forward to see how this will change things. I hate the fact that in canon they called in Dongsoo instead of just hiring an actual interpreter or at least having one on hand to monitor the interview, it felt forced as hell. Quote{ She smiled slightly as she walked to the golden gates the unicorn had guarded and slowly pulled them open.} Shouldn't she need to use the "Heaven's key" she got from the unicorn to open the gates? Thinking about it Soohyun's "Dungeon Pass" to the second floor also went unmentioned. Quote{ It was difficult to tell with the featureless white void around them.} Should be "around her" as she is alone. Quote { “Damn, this thing is good.” He equipped it immediately before looking at the orb. His eyes widened, “Doubles magic damage? Damn! Soohyun would love this if [he] could give it to her.” } Should be "I". Quote { Her eyes caught the flash from a portal, and she turned a little blue as an absolutely gigantic version of Aes Sidhe appeared from one of them. It was bigger than most of the statues as it uncrossed its arms.} What statues is she referring to here? The Cartenon Temple ones? On another note, Soohyun didn't receive the quest completion notice after defeating Aes Sidhe nor was it mentioned that she completed the quest before this point but she still opened the Cursed Lootbox Reward. Quote { [Quest Complete! 10,000/100,000 Fragments of Brilliant Light collected.]} Missing a "0". I don't know much about Bayonetta but the angels from there seem fitting, is Joohee's halo design also from there? Actually do you have any reference images for Joohee's and Miho's transformations? Miho's new skills are also completely busted, Draconic Absorption in particular sounds strong as hell specially after she makes her next trip to this dungeon and if she gets the chance to absorb Kamish's magic remnants. Also, I laughed at both Soohyun and Miho trying to get rid of what's probably their pieces of the Cartenon Dungeon key due to them being seemingly useless. Thanks for the chapter! I really enjoy this story and hope you get inspiration for it again soon.

Rodrigus

I only remembered after posting but I noticed that Jinwoo already has the "Demon Hunter" title that he originally only gained after killing Baran and completing the Demon's castle dungeon if I am not mistaken. Did you decide to change the method of acquisition? Because if so, it went completely unremarked in the story and the same can be said about the girls' new titles too.

Nikolaas Bedeur

I just gotta say that this. "Thunderlord Zinogre: 0/10 Scorned Magnamalo: 0/10 Ebony Odogaron: 0/10 Jade Barroth: 0/5 Glavenus: 0/5 Deviljho: 0/1 Black Diablos: 0/1 Grimclaw Tigrex: 0/1" Silver Rathalos: 0/1] is not at all accurate to the strength of the monsters you chose unless u meant it as the amount there are in the dungeon and not amount equals strength cause if it's amount equals strength like 10 of this one monster means it's weaker then this monster that is only 1 in the area then it should be more like this "Thunderlord Zinogre: 0/1 Scorned Magnamalo: 0/1 Ebony Odogaron: 0/10 Jade Barroth: 0/10 Glavenus: 0/5 Deviljho: 0/5 Black Diablos: 0/10 Grimclaw Tigrex: 0/1 Silver Rathalos: 0/1]" and it should be this way because Jade Barroth and Ebony Odogaron are subspecies and that means they are stronger then there base species but compared to the other stuff you have on this list it's not much compared to them. I put Black Diablos at 10 cause it is literally just a female Diablos in heat and therfore only slightly stronger then normal Diablos(i still strugle to this day with Diablos and Black Diablos. Its literally just charge simulator and so annoying) srry bout the rant there. I have Glavenus at 5 cause I love it and I personally think it's stronger than Diablos/Black Diablos. Deviljho is Deviljho he is called the world eater for a reason and can sometimes fight on par with the weaker Elder Dragons but still compared to the rest are weaker. The rest are Deviants while Silver Rath is a rare species and they all are extremely powerful and can fight on par with Elder Dragons Regularly as well as really really rare as in Deviants are maybe a really rare mutation or living to an old age or surviving a near death experience and coming out of it changed and rare species are as the name suggests rare. To give an example for maybe every 100 of the base species you have a subspecies and then maybe for every 1000 of the subspecies u get a rare species. Sorry if this sounds preachy but I really love monster hunter and I love your stories so I want you more informed about this. And also if you don't know too much about something and aren't sure please research it. Again I'm really sorry if this seems preachy to you. Just had to say my mind. But hey ur the author and u control the story so u do. *Edit. forgot about Scorned Magnamalo and I can't remember what he's classified as I think he's a variant but I'm not sure but yah he's up there purely for how hard his fight is from what I can remember of it. *Second Edit. Hellblade Glavenus is also a deviant. And I forgot to mention but just because Rare Species and Deviants can fight on par with Elder Dragons doesn't mean they are on the same tier. Elder Dragons are still alot stronger purely because they are essentially walking living breathing natural disasters they effect the world and nature around them.