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Whew, reworked the dialogue to be more explicit, and refactored the layout a bit! It's amazing what an extra reaction panel can do for the pacing

Oidecalla's reaction ought to read as ambiguous here, though the clever reader may infer that Oidecalla was asking about Avalon's presence in the last page, calling it a threat, and that "the final challenge to the reign of gold" implies there was a previous challenge

Roshim, of course, does not understand this in the moment, thus neither should the reader

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