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Ben is big

Might have to adjust Ben's face in that fourth panel; I think I want his head inclined more towards Tyler, and the expression doesn't sit quite right with me. It's difficult to make someone look handsome from that angle!

Pretty substantial change from the draft. I want Ben to come across as singling Tyler out a bit, and also being considerate of Tyler's nervousness