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Hopper's | Page 7 | Lines (Patreon)

Published:
2024-12-17 20:00:06
Imported:
2026-06
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Tyler's ready to party

Not 100% sure if the time passage of panel 1 works, or if Ben's hand on Tyler's shoulder reads well. Let me know! Feedback always helps me with these sanity checks

Ben's got a business-as-usual smile that he's been wearing for most of this comic so far, but I want his REAL face and expressions to start coming through, and the reader should see that he's got a thing for Tyler

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Kyle B

The passing of time in panel 1 is fine and Ben's hand on Tyler's shoulder reads nice. Just a lite touch to show he's a open book. Can't weight to read the dialogue of Ben telling Tyler that he is not just a ordinary customer and he's got a hard spot for him. Haha

Kyle B

Ben's business-as-usual smile is vary nice by the way!

Kyle B

It would be funny if Tyler accidentally loses his phone and he has to come back the next day in the morning before the business is open. Ben lets him in to give him his phone and in the locker room he sees that Tsavo's character is relieving himself before work on Clyde, just like that wip you did!

Warren

yeah, hand on shoulder comes across as encouraging. I think it works.