The Dropouts | Page 22 | Draft + page 21 timelapse (Patreon)

Who the hell is Kevin??

This is part of an old draft which should definitely get smushed together with the next page to make the dialogue proceed faster! I might draw a big stunner panel there though... gotta let that first panel breathe!

I'm decent at drafting, but one thing I still gotta work on is space economy during dialogue. Heads and text don't have to take up as much room as they usually do during my first draft!