Beach Bitch House Chapter 2 (Patreon)

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Hey-hey guys. I’m very happy to roll out today’s update, part 2 of Beach Bitch House. With Lazuli all taken care of in chapter 1, Mark can now focus on calming down an irritable Laura.  Every once in a while it’s nice to write something featuring original characters like this.

Anyway, since I like using this Patreon page as a way to talk about trivia and the like relating to my stories, here’s something for this one: the original outline for this story as commission was supposed to just be the Lazuli chapter and then the conclusion with both girls at the end, so that ended up being all that was included in the original outline. The commissioner was happy with it, but upon reviewing the story myself I thought it was a little too jarring to not have any real build-up for Laura... which led to me writing this big extension in the middle just to satisfy my concerns about it. It ended up adding a lot of bulk to the overall story, so we’ll see if it worked out or not.