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Here's the stage of the process I like to call the "Splatoon". 13 shots done and that's just half of the animation

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HornyMossy

Oh that's fucking incredible... only feedback I could possibly have is for you to delay the shots slightly and let that jerkoff motion of for a good bit... give it a bit more buildup, you know?

vkid

Thanks! I tried it before, but the result didn't convince me too much. Might give it another try on the final fixes, either that or make him start shooting from before while he was still inside

GetRekdm8

I'm usually not a fan of pulling out from paizuri to finish, but this is looking pretty nice! Can't go wrong with the experimenting you brought up to BoobAppreciator either, like that " make him start shooting from before while he was still inside" part. I'd gladly wait a bit more if you thought tweaking or adding stuff would result in a better end product.

BoobAppreciator

Perhaps to add to that, make the cock like an "unlimited fountain of lust", who's to say they can't shoot both outside and inside?

HornyMossy

maybe combine both inside and outside? Like have him cum a bit inside, reveal that he's still VERY hard and has a lot in him, and then have him excitedly pull out, with that bounce and all, and have him passionately jerk off for at least a bit of it, before absolutely erupting with cum, how does that sound?

vkid

If I make him start pumping inside, it shouldn't be for too long, just to not make the transition too artificial, but overall, I'm not too fond of the pause after pulling out. It does makes sense of paper but it didn't look as good as it sounds when I tried it.

HornyMossy

Hm, can I get an example of this "pause" that you're describing, to get a better sense?

HornyMossy

Just doesn't give off the idea you're looking for then, huh? Still curious how it would look though...

BoobAppreciator

I see it now, yeah I understand the creative vision here and can't wait for what you cook up! With Elphelt and Baiken animations, you're making dreams come true!!!