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  • PARADISE02_JP.zip
  • PARADISE02_EN.zip
  • PARADISE02_KR.zip
  • TXTLESS.zip

Missing 2 full-res photos, 4 files.

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This month, I’ve safely completed the work as well! Thank you for waiting.🙏 I hope you enjoy it despite its shortcomings! If you have any questions or feedback about the work, please leave them in the comments, and I’ll check and respond whenever I have time. Let’s keep going strong next month too. Thank you always!😘

이번달도 무사히 작업을 마쳤습니다! 기다려주셔서 감사합니다. 🙏아무쪼록 부족하지만 즐겨주셨으면 좋겠습니다! 작품에 대한 궁금한점이나 피드백은 댓글로 달아주시면 시간이 될때마다 확인후 답변드리겠습니다 그럼 다음달에도 쭉이어가보도록 하겠습니다 늘 감사합니다.😘

今月も無事に作業を終えたよ!待ってくれてありがとう。🙏足りないところもあるけど、楽しんでもらえたら嬉しいな!作品に関する質問やフィードバックはコメントに残してくれたら、時間があるときにチェックして返信するよ。それでは来月も引き続き頑張るね。いつもありがとう!😘

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Comments

Lisa B.

Nice

VOTRAN

❤️‍🔥

Neverole

Thanks. It was fast. I will read it tonight. 🤤

CrimsonX

Looking forward to reading this 🔥

Redninja32

Can't wait to check this out later

BD145DC

I was waiting for this. Didn't anticipate it before tomorrow. God it was beautiful. Gonna read it later, but I took 20 minutes off. You installed a nipple fetish in me bro. But since both first and second chapter ended with Yuka, I'm beginning to think the story is orienting around her. I want other girls to get involved too. Especially Ryoko. I got a thing against tomboys. And finally can't pass without say, as an anal freak I'd literally DIE to see all three of them lined up with gaping assholes. I've been fantasizing that idea since the beginning of the series. Now it's for the worst part. Waiting another whole month for the new chapter of this masterpiece.

divea

Great so far, like the facial expressions, mom didn‘t give in as fast as the previews might let one think (maybe still a little to fast but I understand there are limited chapters and two other women😊), my hopes for the next chapters are that the „corruptionpath“ of the other girls is different enough, keep up the good work some Edits now that i have some more time to write without interruptions: - with different pathes i hope they reflect somewhat what happened at school, the mom kind of fits the bill, kuroda got her through something he could describe as „negotiation and dealmaking“, so in his eyes he could say he beat yuuto with his own weapons - it is great that yuuto is still clueless about what is happening, but i hope he isn‘t to passive in the end - i like the contrast between text and action on Page 41 - like some others said Page 48 is great, but my favourite is Page 43

GuiltyKing

Spoiler Review Kinda ended abruptly but was very good 👍 Your composition and shots were better than usual which is great. You did a great job bringing out the appeal of her more mature and thicker body. Like I loved how she looked a tad older when she was sitting down next to the Bull, and how her breast tagged showing off their weigh during certain scenes. Overall you did an amazing job with the art on this one! Though, I did think the ending was pretty abrupted and the page count kinda small. As there wasn't as much sexual pacing as I'd have preferred. I won't get into heavy spoilers here, but I think more time and pages could have been spent fleshing out the early days and non-sex story (This will let the heroine stew in her horniness better and let us get into her mind better) better. The same with the ending not being as abrupt. My main concern is that some of the other heroine will equally be speedily corrupted and so I hope you take another month to complete chapter 4 or 5 to better flesh it out. But would understand if you ultimately don't wish to do that purely to make the pacing slower and to add some non-sex pages. Overall I think this is a good series but it could use some slower pacing in the future to better build sexual tension and set up the corruption. This fast speed mitigates the eros from these great scenes.

Skyeviam

Really great chapter, I'm happy with how much focus the Mom has been getting so far. Also interested to see when the other two will get involved, but I hope she stays involved too! The pose in pg48 is amazing, I'd love to see more poses like that, and poses that focus on different areas of the body. Excited to see next month! Also maybe not the main draw, but this story has had some really nice shot compositons of the island and the setting! 😄

Solvite Sekai

gotta have a faster pace with 3 girls like this. Cant do one doujin for years you'll end up like someone other ntr artists i wont name lol

leodo n

I like how she's more disobedient than Motherly's. She's a little cute, but she's very young and pretty. Next time, I want you to do a work that has a very very straightforward, rebellious mother like REVERSE.

Redninja32

This latest chapter was pretty good though I agree with others that it ended abruptly. Really looking forward to the next one though.

Footlongdong8D

This is great! I would say that for the next chapter, if you plan to corrupt the tomboy next, maybe you can do something similar to what you did in honeymoon where you have the bull saves the girl somehow. Also I’m happy that you are experimenting with new positions like you did on page 48, I’m looking forward to the next chapter 😍. Also do you plan on including a rimjob scene in this series?

pepper

Are you going to upload the textless version too? Or is it inside one of the other zips?

rainy

🔥🔥

laliberte

You're right, it was unavoidable due to the volume! Look forward to the next one too😍

laliberte

You're right, spot on! I wanted to show that kind of personality. I'll bring back something like Reverse someday

laliberte

Thanks for the detailed comments. I’ll try to draw more detailed sex scenes next time🔥🔥

laliberte

Awesome comments! I’ll keep them in mind. It seems a lot of people really like page 43. I think it’s a great scene for showing off body curves. I’m studying various poses, so stay tuned😄

laliberte

Haha, I can’t spill all the details about the scenes yet, but starting from the next part, other characters will join in too! Look forward to it🔥

Neverole

I really liked how the mother was corrupted. Reminding her that she is a woman before being a mother : 🔥. And the drawings are still as 👌🏻 as ever. Now I wonder how the others will be corrupted. 🔥🔥🔥 And how will the son find out about all this?! 😱

지봉식

그냥 GOAT임

HJ

Perfect Perfect Perfect💯, looking forward to seeing how son loses everyone on his side

m

amazing scenes, page 45 is really good! Did you plan for something like where yuuto is in need/danger while go having fun with the girls? Would love to see it

忍华 张

求中文真的!

laliberte

嘿,认识你真开心!如果中文需求多了,我会考虑看看!所以,麻烦多帮我宣传哈,哈哈!