Pulse 379 WIP 1 (Patreon)
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A pretty early version of the page, but it's as far as I'll be able to get today. It's mostly visual-driven, so I haven't added the dialog yet.
I don't know if it's hard to follow. In the upper panels, Zane has given Connor the part from the Silver Dragon's suit that allows him to teleport. Connor then teleports to the valley with all of the petrified heroes. Trying to avoid people with flashlights searching, he makes his way to Delphi. But once there, he notices a different petrified person nearby.
He's noticing Charlotte, but it might not be obvious yet. She'll be shown better on the next page, along with Connor's choice between them.
Any thoughts welcome. My original plan was to set this up and reveal who was picked in one page, but in planning it out, it was obvious two pages where needed.
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