Pulse 382 WIP 3 (Patreon)
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2020-05-18 08:07:40
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I think a new rule is that if a page is late, all Patreons can see the WIPs of that page until it's complete.
Part of me thinks the last panel should have been Charlotte just seeing Annie's chest, but it didn't seem possible because Charlotte is almost a foot taller than Annie. I'm also considering that Lucy is holding out of hands in the second to last panel as if to indicate Annie's chest, but Charlotte doesn't understand.
In the third panel, that was originally going to connect to the long flashback about Thomas. Originally Lucy would have also been at the memorial, but she would have needed some assistance to walk through a cane or more. To imply she hadn't had the legs all that long at that point.
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