Pulse 407 WIP 1 (Patreon)

What I'm trying to do here is humanize Mira a bit.  She's used to being cold and strong, so any breaks in that mask must be something huge.  A lot of huge things have happened while she was gone.  I also want to show that she's more mature than Arim.  She's the leader of their team, she has to be smart.  She was also the leader of a team were both of the other members had huge weaknesses.

I need to alter the transition in-between the last two panels a bit.  Maybe add a speak bubble to the beginning of the last panel that says something like "everything falls apart when I'm not around".  The wording in that last panel needs adjusting.  It sounds a little different than I intended.

The person she's about to visit is her future love interest.  I thought Mira's lover would be someone sort of submissive, and she'd at least seem like the aggressive one.