Pulse 410 WIP 3 (Patreon)

Making progress.  Not sure I like panel 6, the one where she's trying to zip up the top.  I might erase and redraw something similar.  The proportions aren't great, and I feel like it's missing the energy of the previous panel, and seems too similar to the seventh and final panel of the page.

I need to review all of the dialog and add both tailor the dialog to be a little more specific to the character, and also add some more little jokes or funny comments.