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I think some of the panels need to be reworked a little.  Maybe put Mira's smile and comment into the first panel.  Then show her walking to the door in panel three, then make a new panel five in-between the current panel four and five that shows someone exiting the door with a bright light behind them.

What happens is that Mira starts towards the door, overly confident, and someone comes out of the door to greet her.

This is "Mastermind".  And--

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It's Annie's Mom, Jessica Chang.

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