Pulse 411 WIP 1 (Patreon)
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2020-12-15 13:54:25
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I think some of the panels need to be reworked a little. Maybe put Mira's smile and comment into the first panel. Then show her walking to the door in panel three, then make a new panel five in-between the current panel four and five that shows someone exiting the door with a bright light behind them.
What happens is that Mira starts towards the door, overly confident, and someone comes out of the door to greet her.
This is "Mastermind". And--
<spoiler alert>
It's Annie's Mom, Jessica Chang.
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