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Thank you, sir CrazeBot!

Edit: CrazeBot has supplied an updated version, that has replaced the prior image.

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Jack Stiles

The detail on the clothes is really well done.

Tamás Gál

the shadows on her face make her look like a old lady, also her eyes are just weird one looking foward and the other upward

Zerith

Her Chin is nearing a full Jay Leno in mass and her nose, due to the intensity of the shading being unchanging, looks like the bridge pops out further then the end of it. Also, the shading of the face in general is Far to sharp, adding to the old lady effect And making it disjointed with what is other wise excellent work. I would harp and sing on the shading more but the work done on the cloths tells me that this is not a lake of ability, but i dare say a lake of confidence on the face, perhaps skin in general given the utter lake of definition of the sternocleidomastoid muscle(Google ftw :3) Her left hand looks like it barley got any attention at all, almost looks like someone rough sketched it, did lite color work and then called it good, a shame given the work on the glove. weird mix of soft and hard shading to boot. Also, her legs are mismatched, far to much difference in width, and the could have been better still with some seams, but not a focus here now are they? Great work, but I really have to dock it due to the head and hand. P.S: the cleavage line should be longer and slant to the side, looks like she has a but on her chest >_< 7/10, 9/10 if the fleshy bits were up to pare with the rest. ~Zerith

Incraze

Ah fair. Thats abit to take in but yeah i agree with your critique, not something thats unfixable either, probably need to reflect on my work before and look at it with fresh eyees instead of being so eagre to post 😅

Logan Vingris

The new photo looks great

Zerith

a good trick for digital is to flip it left to right, sadly I'm a pleb who has no clue how to photo shop, case in point the this avy is one of my better, most recent drawings, and a year or so old... I need to get back into drawing again... https://i46.photobucket.com/albums/f135/Forest_Herder/Drawings/Hero%20System%20Felix_zps1f0d6qu8.png so yes, you out do me, let me know if you want me to keep up the critique though ;3