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11037

It was clear before but it's even more obvious now: Blue is the world's worst negotiator. He has the only cure for a crippling illness, and he demands...a week of her time? You know, as long as it fits in her schedule. Wouldn't want to inconvenience her.

Nasa Wofford

Wow The Hurricane definitely going to regret that one, breaking a deal with a Power will definitely bite her in the ass when she least expects it. All so thanks for the chapter!

Swinter

I really don't get why Blue's talking of her breaking the deal yet. Because... She haven't. She's got her abilities back. She's flying on post coital bliss. Weird as it may have been. Her hopping out and taking a flight isn't breaking the agreement. If she's not back within, say, 24 hours then yeah. I could see how she could be considered an oath breaker. But this is Way premature. And I mean, what did he expect? That she'd rush out of the room naked to start teaching right after that? :D

RepossessedSoul

hanging her in the air while I forced himself-->myself into her

foldedcorners

Alright that's a feels bad, lol. I actually hope we get some insight as to why Hurricane is so fucked in the head. I assume most/all T4s are fucked up in someway to get to that point. And like previously mention *technically* she only needs to be back in a week, but the way it's worded makes that seem unlikely. It's not like it's a bargain that has dire consequences for reneging. Hopefully blue matures a bit as well from this... experience

Nematrec

Part of me is hoping she finds out that even if it wasn't a captial B Bargain, you still can't back out so easily on an agreement with a power. Another part of me is sad Blue didn't wake some BDSM part of himself, with The Hurricane being the only outlet.

Imp

That, was actually a pretty depressing chapter. I feel kind of sad now.