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Chapter 15C: Day 233 – Port Anell

The enormous black polyhedron hovering in the sky seemed to press down on the city, people hurrying just a bit more than usual as they went about their business. The two pulses of mana had been barely felt by most, but even for those who had noticed, nothing else had happened. Intimidating as it was, it didn’t seem to be too threatening.

“Are you sure that was a good idea?” Toreq asked, swallowing chilled wine and frowning at Risu.

“It was obvious she wasn’t going to let us keep them, no matter what,” Risu said. “I am not going to let a fourth-tier void user be brought to the side of our enemies, so better to let the two of them fight it out. It doesn’t involve us.”

“I can’t believe how rude she was,” Molen grumbled. “To us!”

“We can hardly complain to anyone about it, and it’s not like we have much leverage in Tarnil or Orn in general.” Toreq replied. “Though in truth my concern is more with that than anything else.” He waved at the rock floating in the sky.

“You did send a runner for our Earth Corps, yes?”  Risu dismissed the matter with a negligent wave of her kiseru. “In the end, it’s just rock, so they should be able to take it apart easily enough. Or even catch it, if for some reason it comes crashing down.”

“Yes, get it out of our skies.” Molen frowned up at it. “I’m sure it’s already scared off some of the cargo ships that were supposed to arrive today.”

“I’m a little worried about that mana wave. It might have some defenses and with that much mana they could be nasty,” Toreq pointed out.

“If it had any real weapons she would have threatened us with them. Instead she had to use that whatever-it-was personally.” Risu took a draw on her kiseru. “Besides, it probably requires someone to steer that thing, and it hasn’t moved since she arrived.”

“Perhaps, but Blue is supposed to be a Power, so you’d expect—”

A massive weight of mana spilled out over them, stifling and suppressing, like the world collapsing. Everything stilled, sound and movement trailing off from the force of that great unyielding pressure. Breath stopped. Time slowed.

A star lit on the underside of the Fortress.

Comments

Seadrake

Ha, serves then right

Zeruke

bruh my heart can only take so many cliffs

Munirah Hutchinson

I thought we were being spoiled with a long 3 part chapter. But I see it was actually to torture us with cliffs 😭

Sean Coker

WHAT A CLIFF. Damn.

karols

Clifftopia

Dahak

The Cliffs of Insanity here in these chapters

RottenTangerine

So it sounds like Blue may be nuking a city in revenge... I'm very interested to see the next chapter. Those cliffs tho....

Katherine

Genocidal rampage with gamma ray bursts. About how I expected this to end, that last chapter though was....

RottenTangerine

At the same time though, doesn't Blue own Shayma's soul? Can't he just revive her as something? Or put her soul in a dungeon creature? Idk

Storyhunter

A yes exactly this kind of... ( I had a bad day.... So everyone else has a bad day)

Andrew

Thank you!

Matthias

holy moly, what a cliff! the next chapter is gonna be a doozy! "I went mad for a time." though? understatement of the year, when it comes to powers

Dietz

.......Wanna hear something funny? When I saw my notification that this updated, I remembered it was Friday, and mused to myself that I can't remember the last time I had a bad Friday. I planned to make a cheeky post about it. While this is in no way makes this a bad friday, I don't find myself in the mood for such a post now. Thanks for the chapters though.

CyclopsSlayer

Holy understatement... "I went mad for a time"

David Hall

So short. Like I know I’m spoiled by your long chapters, and these short chapters are quite obviously on purpose, for dramatic effect, but still. Thanks for the chapters

RageBone

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Storyhunter

I see ....hhmmmm.. yes that right...... You have it exactly.... Splendid.

Lictor Magnus

The worst part is that if he's not thinking straight his instincts will kick in and the Anells are his anathema right now. He'll probably auto bombard any place they are.

karols

Im torn if i would prefer ending where shayma is perma dead, vs one where blue can revive her... since she is part of him strictly speaking

Klever Kilvanya

I have to wonder why exactly this chapter was split into 1 large and 2 tiny segments?

Raidanzoup

Doesn't this series always end chapters to change POV? The titles are always [DAY] - [POV]

Raidanzoup

I... love cliffhangers, I... brush my teeth to cliffhangers... (Man, oh man, oh man. But Shayma being part of Blue aside, what's going to happen to Keri since she failed?!)

Zerith

Now to find out her re-spawn time, or is she dead dead because void deletes and dos not simple kill things? While I put my money on Re-spawn, this is the kind of thing that allows future threats to feel real to us as it shows that the, arguably, most impossible to kill lead is in fact mortal (Miss Woe can be KOed my any corruption, she is basically made out of glass to a mage king, not that they know this) and so it could be very good for the story to do it. Flip side is blue nuking the Anells (the city happened to be in the way of the, I assume, Full star lance) with such furry makes it clear he is one, a Full Power, and two, A World Super Power who stands beside The Silver Woe, as an equal. An equal Who is Very active. An equal Who is Very Wrothful. (Yes! Wroth! the olden form of Wrath!) And who did not want to see it act as a fully operatically battle station?

Nick Rodriquez

Idk if this makes me a bad person or something but I absolutely do not care what happens to Port Anell. I hope we get to see a really enraged Blue totally flatten a city without an Anathema blackout. You play stupid games with a Power and you win all the prizes you can handle.

Katherine

To be fair, this isn't just a standard gamma ray burst. This is one very close to the ground, directed one way, and explicitly enhanced. The last time it was used in war it vaporized a flying fortress and shattered windows at depths unimaginable /underwater/. This likely just wiped out the continent the city was on, much less the city its self.

ShadeByTheSea

Eh, Shayma is immortal as long as Blue exists. If she's not I've been betrayed by another author, starting to get used to it.

Anonymous

I think the entire city might be vaporized now.

taukid

Is this your way to get people to sign up for you patreon in 2 weeks?

Faruel

I honestly don't see a problem with him blasting the Anells with a contained star. hopefully, it will make everyone stop dismissing our odd coloured dungeon core because so far he has been friendly to the point they don't even care when his floating island is hovering over their city.

Jon Coates

I can't see her being permanently gone, this wouldn't be the same story without her. I'm guessing there is going to some sort of plot twist that brings her back. Though right now I really need to see some consequences hit port anell! Can't believe we have to wait a week for the next one!!!

Jon Coates

This many twists and cliffs should be considered abuse!

Some BS Deity

At first I was like YAY three chapters, now I just feel robbed.

TargetDrone

hopefully his next voice has more brains and survival instict.... i kinda liked shayma , but well, bleeding hearts and deadly magics usually lead to a forgone conclusion.

Vyktor

3 chapters, 3 cliffhanger... You are a mad monster! 😭 Starting the 2nd chapter thinking "the cliff is just for the POV change" and then... 😩

Swordofmytriumph

Well blue owns shayma’s soul, so can probably respawn her. I doubt she’s truly dead, there wasn’t enough buildup for that. My guess is that in bringing her back it will give him yet another piece of the puzzle that he needs to understand how souls work.

Carl Mason

"What!?" (Insistently scrolls down.) (Page: -doesn't move-) "Oh come on!" What a way to leave us on edge for another week . That was excellent and engaging, and an I credible display of the sadism of authors online who enjoy watching their readers freak out as they fall over cliffs, repeatedly. Thank you for writing this horrible, delectable torture.

Ranzbart

damn i didnt think of that. all i thought was that im glad this cliff didnt come at the end of the month

Drakenclaw

A soul is only the connection between a classer and the system. Yamal got his soul basically destroyed but he is still the same person with the same memories.

Matthew Dennis

ok so... now would be a great time for a surprise early chapter....

Black Unicorn

Yes that is a good way to describe it. Horrible, delectable torture. I just hope Shayma isn't fully dead as she is in a real way the second main character. the story wouldn't be the same without her, heck I don't think it would even be close to the same without her.

Minitiative

I only wish they could live a bit longer to see the destruction. Or at least, the 4th tier lives somehow and she lives long enough to have it explained to her that when Shayma said Blue wouldn't like it, this is what she meant.

Joel Bullock

Oh shit now they really fucked up

Joel Bullock

Also since she's just a manifestation of his will due to being his in mind, body and soul he can just recreate her

Alexandria Clarke

FUUUUUUUUUUUUUCK. Time for the world to end.

war doggle

Now that his voice is dead Blue has only actions with which to speak. I have a feeling flying Port Anell colors just became a creative way to commit suicide.

Nairne

I agree wholeheartedly. Just tell me Shayma is coming back.

J B

He can also speak with Taelah & the dragon

Max Lopo

He kinda deserves it for screwing around. Respect people, give them option, but stop playing the "good guy", it's childish. The instant it was clear she was uncooperative, remove the treath. Lethally, non Lethally, irrelevant. Guess some people need to get third grade burns before they realize fire burns.

Dahak

He tried but her Persistant Void skill prevented the teleport. Given the goal was to rescue the people in the house he couldnt really flatten that until they were all out either, which means he didnt have many options to deal with someone that strong. Blue doesnt have a lot in the way of high powered precision attacks. That said, he should have been less complacent and just teleported them out of the house and THEN flattened it.

Max Lopo

Dude, just bash her into the ground with authority. Done. You don't move until everyone is done. Teleport your girl out, and it's done. To be sure, just nuke the place.

RedFaux

Now. I'm going to honest and say these where annoyingly short. Even together, these two hardly make the usual length. I'd have rather waited and got a full chapter if I'm honest. The one was enough

Dahak

That would be Shayma's failure. Blue can't weild his authority with the same finesse Shayma did. Even if he could project it strongly enough (which he hasn't shown he can) he would just flatten everyone there, and authority strong enough to flatten a 4th tier would kill all the 1st tier and below (this issue was shown before). Blue's biggest weakness is his lack of precise power and always has been. He can munch scrubs all day, but against anyone 4th tier and up he only has massive over-attack options if he cant just teleport them away.

Alexandria Clarke

Incorrect. Chapter 14: Day 233 – Blue pdf is 9 and a half pages and Chapter 15A: Day 233 – Shayma (Which is part of this set) is the exact same. 9 and a half pages in the PDF. Then you have B and C for the added cliff. All in all, it's the same as usual, but if anything it feels meatier and weightier.

ShadeByTheSea

In general cliffhangers are just bad writing. Their only purpose is to entice the reader to read the next chapter, something a good story already does. One could say it builds suspense, but that only works for the people reading it as it comes out, since everyone else will be able to read pass the clift without waiting. Cliffs that are there simply because the author needs two chapters to describe a scene are ok though.

ShadeByTheSea

To clarify I feel overuse of cliffhangers is bad writing/storytelling. It is not a bad business/marketing decision though.

matthew gilley

And port snell was wiped off the map

Dwight Brown

I think that Blue found a name and title for his Fortress. Shayma The Voice of Blue