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Members of the Cabal had been hiding themselves for longer than humans — at least the ones from Earth — had been recording history. Some were reclusive, their glamours not holding up to close scrutiny. Others were capable shape-shifters, blending  unnoticed into human society.

Messengers were among the most capable in this regard. They could hide their wings, reduce their size and even diminish their natural beauty and compelling presence. Other inhuman traits, such as hair colour, could likewise be disguised. In this way, the messengers had hidden themselves for millennia. Even many amongst the Cabal had considered the angelic founders of their collective a myth.

Fifteen years past the revelation of their existence, many were more relaxed about masking their nature. The wider cabal was often doing much the same, from diminutive fairies to looming ogres. There were many advantages to the human form, however, even within Cabal facilities. When you were nine feet tall, with three-foot antlers, taking human form was just easier when you were in line for the handmade naan bread station at the cafeteria.

Boris Ket Lundi, or Boris Ketland, as he went by on Earth, had long been comfortable with human proportions. Those proportions had changed considerably over the years, his first visit to Earth predating the existence of humans on Earth by a considerable margin. He had once spent several millennia disguised as a celestine research assistant, studying the effect of magic on convergent evolution across universes. It had been a useful cover in scouting potential sites for hidden Unorthodoxy colonies.

Earth had been a bold choice for such a colony, being central to the scandal that saw the original Builder sanctioned. The gamble had paid off, however, as the Council of Kings saw no value in poking at the great astral beings and avoided the seemingly worthless world. It had been tricky to set up infrastructure to sustain gold and silver rankers on the low-magic world, but that was put in place before the rise of the early hominids. There was no way to allow diamond rankers to live there, but they were few in number anyway, and could take care of themselves.

Unlike the Council of Kings, Jason Asano was not afraid of jabbing transcendent beings and their interests. His ability to keep doing so without being spread across the concrete like an unfortunate jam spillage surprised even Boris, whose life experience spanned billions of years. He had marvelled at Jason, who had no concept of how often the hand of vengeance had been stayed by wildly unlikely circumstances or a bizarre confluence of transcendent agendas.

Even now, plans born long before Jason Asano were moving, unnoticed and unseen. Like the water of an underground river, few realising what was happening, right beneath their feet. The schemes set into motion by Jason’s outworlder predecessor, the Network founder, continued to play out. Boris had worked with the founder’s own familiar to betray him to early magic societies that would eventually become the Network.

That act had not stopped the clock the founder had set in motion, but it did allow them to accelerate the magical knowledge of Earth’s fledgeling essence users. Not enough, but the deficit of magic on Earth was always going to be the limiting factor. The rising magic of the last century or so, had led to the Network becoming fully established.

Noreth had always been an unstable element, and his increasingly extreme and isolationist approach to advancing Earth’s magic had been disastrous, in the end. His Engineers of Ascension had attempted to push magic forward through less conventional paths, but Boris had refused to participate. Noreth and his organisation’s research was dangerous enough, without access to the knowledge of the cosmos.

In the end, Noreth had failed to realise that Asano was an ally and not an enemy agent until too late. His drastic move of disabling the grid had created the transformation zone crisis, almost destroyed the planet and spiked the magic level of the Earth.

Boris had come to the brink of revealing his messengers to resolve the crisis, but Asano had managed it alone. Even so, the increased magic level and reduced stability of the Earth had accelerated the enemy timeline. The worst part was that Boris could do nothing, forced to let Jason play into enemy hands. The only alternative was to let the Earth be destroyed.

Ultimately, Jason’s efforts had allowed the messengers to remain hidden. The more Boris was forced to expose the presence of his people, the more likely they would be discovered by those out in the cosmos. Once revealed, the messengers would need to leave or bring the wrath of the Orthodox messengers down upon the Earth.

If Boris and his people had to leave, they would not be around for the war to come. That was an eventuality that he now accepted was more likely than not, after Noreth’s actions. The dimensional bridge had needed to be put in place decades before previously necessary.

The likelihood of the messengers being forced to leave and not be present for the war had pushed Boris to revisit an old decision. He had helped the Asano clan take up one of Noreth’s projects, something he would never have done if Noreth was still alive. He trusted the clan, under Jason and his grandmother, to act more responsibly than the rune spider would have. He doubted it would be enough, but it would give the Earth a chance, at least. If he and his messengers were not present to fight, they would desperately need it.

Asano’s detour with the Cosmic Throne had given them a precious fifteen extra years to prepare, but even that was pushing it. Much longer and signs of dimensional breakdown would have started to show. Now, the bridge was set in place. The Earth would heal over time, but was opened to a new threat. Within a decade at most, the bridge would become a true dimensional passage, no longer requiring sophisticated astral magic to cross.

Boris found himself forced to admire the plan. The World-Phoenix, Jason, Boris himself and many others played a part, each elegantly place to do their part. Some, like Jason, were oblivious to their role, while Boris had no choice but to go along, despite knowing the outcome. The World-Phoenix could not be forced, manipulated or deceived. It simply didn’t care what happened, so long as the Earth’s dimensional stability was ultimately restored. The enemy used that disinterest, relying on the World-Phoenix doing what it would have done anyway.

Dawn had been a surprise to Boris. He had not expected the World-Phoenix’s agent to form such a connection with Jason, although that seemed to be the man’s true talent. He made friends or enemies, and little in between, everyone either loving or hating him. Even Boris quite liked the man. He had an inkling that the enemy had been equally surprised by Dawn’s behaviour, and took hope in that. He didn’t know exactly what she had done for Jason, but was certain she’d taken actions beyond the mandate of her great astral being. It could be the thing that saved them all.

 Boris contemplated all of this from the Cabal main headquarters, in what was once the Democratic Republic of Congo. The Cabal’s influence in Africa was greater than that of the other magical factions, but the former DRC was one of the few regions where it had outright seized power. The Cabal preferred to operate in a supporting role with existing governments, but several areas had proven too unstable after the rise of magic.

He sat in a room that looked like a security office, with an array of monitors on one wall. Running on loops was all the footage of Asano’s return publicly available, and quite a few that weren’t. Boris sat at a desk where a computer held every document and report they could get on Asano and what the powers of Earth had done in preparation for his return.

The media had only just been cleared to announce that Jason was back. There had been some inevitable leaks, but Jason Asano was a name of the past. His name alone caused a stir, but no great waves. He was a name from the earliest days of magic, and the world had moved on. The interest in him was rising now, ramping up as footage of his dramatic arrival was released. Carefully curated, of course.

The public interest still wasn’t at the level that Boris knew would inevitably come. They didn’t understand the scale or context of what was happening, but that would change over time. The next fight would not be one of powers and violence but image and messaging. Whether to mobilise the world, or maintain the status quo, the key was controlling the narrative. He was frustrated at his inability to put his hand on that scale. He had already revealed himself more than was wise, especially with cosmic eyes now pointed at Earth.

Boris sighed, rubbing his hands over his face. He wondered yet again if it was the right move to let things play out, keeping Asano in the dark. And he came to the same conclusion as always, as much as he disliked it. Jason’s penchant for extreme-risk solutions would undoubtedly rear its head if he found out what was coming.

The only real tool Asano would have to fight the outcome was his connection to the dimensional bridge, and Boris was not the only one who wouldn’t allow it to be endangered. If something happened to it now, it would almost certainly undo the Earth, and possibly Pallimustus as well.

Boris looked up at the image of Jason fighting the cosmic invaders, knowing that Earth had to be ready for worse. They had to make the most of the next decade, and Jason had to be the catalyst. His unique position, hovering between protector and threat, was the exact motivation that the Earth needed.

He stood, just as the door opened. Tera Jun Casta entered, her eyes finding Asano’s image on the monitors. There was a lot of baggage there that needed to be carefully unpacked, now that Asano was back.

“Are you going to Australia?” she asked.

“Yes. Do you want to join me?”

She looked back at the screens.

“Yes. No.”

She bowed her head and mumbled at the floor.

“I don’t know.”

He reached up to give her a comforting pat on the shoulder. She was one of the few messengers who kept her wings and much of her size, even indoors. Her towering height of almost seven feet made life awkward, but little more than humans of similar stature. Her looming form was incongruous with her cute, rounded facial features and brassy-haired pixie cut.

“Maybe wait,” Boris suggested in a soft voice. “Things are hectic right now. Give them time to settle.”

She nodded. Boris patted her on the shoulder again and left her in the office, watching the recordings of Jason.

***

Colours swirled over the navigation table on the bridge of Admiral Jakaar’s flagship. Dimensional maps were abstract, shifting things, as traversing astral geography was wholly unlike navigating physical reality. Time and space became arguably and variably the same thing, wholly at odds with each other, or non-existent entirely.

One of the less discussed aspects of being a diamond-ranker was how approaching the peak of mortal power granted glimpses of what lay beyond. Jakaar could feel the flow of the cosmos, like a voice slightly too distant to make out clearly. When he nudged up against the higher rules of the cosmos, that voice became clearer, although he didn’t always like what it said.

In this case, he could feel the rules of intrusion. They were telling him that the fragile backwater universe containing Earth was still unavailable to him, even through gold-rank catspaws. Enough time had passed that his people should have either finished the job or reported their failure.

The link between this universe and the other was impossible to miss, to the point of almost blinding his vessel’s sensors to anything else. He had his fleet running patrols in case of ambush. He wouldn’t normally expect as much, out in this backward, cosmic crevice, but the continued silence from his most reliable gold rank agent spiked his instincts. He had the feeling that he was somehow being played, and he didn’t like it. Wishing he’d given more credence to Jota’s misgivings, he slapped a hand on the navigation table in frustration.

“Keeley?”

“Yes, Admiral?”

“Collect what we have about Earth. Scouting reports, transcripts of every communication when we were cutting the deal, everything. Send it to my stateroom.”

“Of course, Admiral.”

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Comments

Tyler S.

Them good biscuits

Brent

Tyftc

Heather White

“…when you were in line for the handmade naan bread station at the cafeteria.” This cracked me up so much. And made me hungry. I may need to find an Indian buffet (an American crime against Indian food. Many apologies.)

Bingus McCready

Oh my god, the suspense is killing me. This book is gonna be wild I feel like. TFTC!

mhaj58

Nice chapter, but I’m getting tired of seeing people saying that Jason’s better off being in the dark. How are you supposed to trust someone who doesn’t trust you? Even though he doesn’t lose against the GABs, people still think they know better

Hayden Leech

Was really hoping for a Zara chap or Danielle talking with Erika.

Mituindal

Thanks for the chapter!

Dylan Alexander

Worst think ever is when someone is left in the dark because there’s inevitably fallout. Even after he’s seen Jason do so much, he still refuses to tell him anything. So annoying.

Unwillingmainer

More edging with that mysterious threat that is coming. With how Boris put it, I doubt it will be Orthodox messengers. Probably some other Cosmic force of assholes. Also, I don't like Jason's chances of uniting Earth in a decade. Making his own Clan a powerhouse? Sure. Making the whole world hate and fear him? Very likely. Actually, that could work. Make everyone so invested in beating him and then turn that power on this threat when it shows up. After all, pissing people off and not staying dead are kinda his things.

Ben Barlow

From an editors point, very little of this chapter moved the story forward. Pretty much everything with Boris was already known, or did little to progress the story. Beach episode.

Chris Furry

On time chapter. Daylight savings in Australia was the first Sunday of October.

Chris Pollan

Currently re-listening to the whole series on audible... it's amazing how scenes from book 1 play so smoothly into where he is currently...

Izraifel

Right? I'm hoping this means we get a WHOLE CHAPTER for it later!! :D :D

Storm

Biscuits!

Joe Foreman

Even Dawn has told everyone that knows him not to tell him, or clive

Philipp Battenberg

Well, especially as he did see Jason do so much, he doesn't tell him anything. He is afraid that Jason will use a drastic solution to prevent the coming conflict that's even worse.

Heather White

Wow. Completely missing the import that the info that has been local, until now, is being loosed into the larger universe. What we & some of the locals have known a long time will be broadcast more broadly across the universe & will gain a wider interest. The dominos are falling.

Philipp Battenberg

Well, it will be interesting how Tera has changed in the last fifteen years. The reunion of her and her friend might be quite interesting as well.

Dylan Alexander

That’s literally what he does though. I guarantee that even if he doesn’t find out to the appropriate time, he’ll still do something drastic, it’s literally his character.

JonO

Well if edging is your problem, I think sir Anthony Hopkins and his confluence of essences are your solution lol

Soli116

They trust him to do something characteristically drastic. And the timing of that needs to be chosen carefully. If they tell him too early, he'll do something that will very likely make things worse. Image Jason taking on the GABs in his soul before he fought the Builder type of thing.

JonO

Yeah I am on book 10 and shortly after meeting the builder cultists and being called the "defiar" Jason comments on how he thinks it's a title better suited to someone else. Dun dun duuuuuuuuuunnnn...farrah

Tyler S.

Like if your not going to help you should tell him what is comming, the thinking that they know him so well yet havent truly been with him to see his growth and then to keep knowledge of a danger to him in hopes that the doesnt freak out worse when you must tell him as the threat is bearing down. But i guess thats the dramatic timing the astralverse wants for its Jason Chaotic Kook show

Chris Pollan

My fellow hardcores... any thoughts on this would be appreciated... https://discord.com/channels/614969767937441805/617512306691145741/1295512257538560031

John Durrett

Perspectives. Keeping him in dark may not further Jason’s plans, but it may further or protect others plans by him being uninformed. Everyone has their own objectives to achieve, that’s why their not sharing info

René Blaser

ihope this interlude will get us back to jason and his family. one chapter was not enough for meeting the two families! also, he needs to introduce arbour to his earth family and new gordon and colin! 🥰

ABTelford

This chapter…hm…if we don’t get a lot more from Boris’s point of view in the next little bit then I’m left feeling that a lot of this chapter was a re-summation of things that have been stated and summarized already, ultimately unnecessary UNless there’s lots more of Boris’s pov, then it would be appropriate. The added tidbits about a full blown war coming that he knows about and Jason possibly unraveling the bridge as a drastic solution to it - that was nice! I liked the tantalizing hints at the future conflict we haven’t had with such clarity yet. I liked that. Then the Admiral Jakaar section at the end left me with a little excitement, wondering what trouble he’ll cause. -it has been pointed out to me that this is the start of a new book and thus summarizing past info is totally appropriate. This is absolutely correct and I feel bad for not realizing it and venting impatience in my comment. So…yea. Oops.

BloodStorm

We the readers should’ve got a better hint to what the upcoming war will be. Another recap chapter

CritHappens

Tera June Casta. She’s the messenger who hates Jason right? Has she come around to the idea of being free.

ByLAWphoto

This is like watching a tornado form in real time. You know it's going to eventually be an f5, but right now, it's just swirling clouds and an eerie calm.

Teddy Torres

He did this a lot in the earlier books and it always frustrated me. Especially since we read one chapter at a time. Getting constant recaps every other chapter when the recap itself takes up half the chapter just to finally be "caught up" and ready for the new goodies only to have the chapter end after a paragraph. Drives. Me. Insane. Yet I've listened to the entire series at a minimum of 6 times straight through

Philipp Battenberg

My guess is she came around to the idea of being free but still hates Jason for how he freed her. She might intellectually understand that there was no other way, but that wouldn't stop her emotions.

Kelly

Didn’t Jason already tell them that the WP helped him set it up, or is he looking for something else?

Teddy Torres

And that's exactly why they aren't telling him. Whatever it is that's coming can only be prevented by destroying the bridge and Jason is dumb enough to think he can prevent or stop it out right so they aren't telling him until it's already too late for Jason to do irreversible damage

ByLAWphoto

She is. She hated him for breaking her connection. I guess we'll find out how much she's grown soon enough.

Philipp Battenberg

The story is written to be read in book form, as most will experience it that way, so we just have to bare with it. And it's not pure recap. It goes a bit more in depth about Boris, his motives and inner conflicts.

Teddy Torres

But they do trust him and know him which is exactly why he needs to be in the dark. 13 books and you're telling me you think he wouldn't do something stupid and potentially cause irreversible damage?

Malcolm Gray

Bruh who is this “enemy”????

Martin Tomsic

Thank you! Another great chapter. Interesting to get Boris's perspective on everything that has been, and is currently, going on. My mind is racing with all of the potential beings that could be at the heart of the next (and greatest?) catastrophe for Jason.

ByLAWphoto

Jason does have a rather "cut off my nose to spite my face" history. Two things though--first, how many times has he then met with a situation where he needed to be noseless (metaphorically speaking), and second, he's grown a LOT and why aren't people giving him credit for going through a journey that would give a Buddhist Monk PTSD without murdering everyone??

Martin Tomsic

Jota knows that the pirates were setup and that the WP had a hand in it. The admiral has no clue since he hasn't heard anything from them since before Jason arrived back on Earth.

Philipp Battenberg

@Dylan, yeah, essentially what Teddy said. There's a difference between "doing something drastic Jason *thinks* he understands to prevent the conflict" and "doing something drastic he *actually* kinda understands to win the conflict". The conflict seems to be linked to the bridge and Jason might be tempted to mess with it, if he knows. He and Clive might even be convinced that they'd know what they were doing.

Martin Tomsic

A piece of me is hoping that Jakaar will be ticked off at whoever is setting everything up and using so many people as pawns that he helps Earth out. Though not by trying to come to Earth, but by trying to do something elsewhere that gives a hint to what is coming and how to face it that will eventually make it back to Jason in time.

jeffrey niski

The enemy huh? The big fight dawn warned about is coming.

Matt Heineman

Yeah, but none of them could have predicted how his astral ascension would go, or that he'd rope a dope the world Phoenix into training him and all that. They're predicting this refusal to explain things on really nothing, because Jason in book 9 is not Jason now. And who even knows what he's got cooking in his astral realm these days? For all anyone knows, This doomsday is going to show up and Colin will win whatever bet they had going as Jason breaks out the burninator or something, you know?

chad osborn

That felt wasteful. Half was a data dump and the rest didn't add much at all

Scott McCarthy

Resetting to iron rank would make it unusable, no one at silver or above will accept going back to nameless goon status.

Martin Tomsic

Did her friend leave with Jason? I thought she had been on Earth the whole time as well. Wasn't she with the Messengers that had been freed and was trying to "raise" them without the indoctrination? I imagine that they could have met frequently, any time they wanted.

Soli116

It's really interesting to see things from the Cabal viewpoint. Also the balance of living somewhere and not bringing a hoard of Orthodox messengers down on the planet. I really hope Jason and Boris end out as good friends.

Martin Tomsic

Yeah, there have been all kinds of little nuggets that Shirt has called back to or made more relevant than previously thought with books 12 and 13. I had completely forgotten that he had called Shako a captain in an evil space pirate admiral's fleet. There are tons of little things like that which keep coming up as I proceed through my latest re-listen/read of the series.

Scott McCarthy

Still, he took the Jon without asking about the target from a non-biased source. Or at least a source that is not incompotent and narcissistic. You know what world he is from and there is a link to another world, follow the link and see if they know about Jason there. . . . . . . . The say no when the information is "cities keep being destroyed around him, and now he us off fighting GABs..."

oldntokn

Would rather have have seen more from from party. Been a long time since we have had much from Team Biscuit. Don't remember the last time Clive had a line.

Martin Tomsic

The tidbit about Boris and Noreth working together alone was a massive bombshell that cannot be just passed off as being part of a recap chapter. It also tells about how Earth is starting to learn of and react to Jason being back and having the fight, where the Cabal stronghold(s) is/are, how the Messengers have been able to survive and thrive for so long on a magic-desert. There was a lot of new stuff here that recontextualizes things we thought we knew.

JonO

I think jali stayed with the asanos. Terra went with boris as did Marek and his lot. So I think Terra is unsure how to move on concerning Jason specifically, not necessarily her lot in life as she has had 15 years to sort through and move on. Which says a lot about how losing control over your soul affects someone. He saved her but had to violate her to do it. Only to save everyone else without subjecting them to the same violation. Even just writing it and understanding as a reader leaves me questioning the rhetoric about it. It's truly a messed up situation and I don't blame her for feeling angst or confusion or whatever she's feeling about it.

JonO

Speaking of the burninator... since Jason has a d20 configuration to his cloud flask....I think a more aggressive form could in fact be the trogdor configuration. And if he needs a configuration based around escape... he should call it the homestar runner lol That or if stash finds the old strong bad videos.... he might turn into trogdor in order to burninate things mwahaha

Michael Hawkins

Some of you I don't think should follow chapters this way.

Daniel Wills

One chapter at a time is a horrible way to read a book. I would strongly suggest taking a break from Patreon and waiting a good bit until you can have a chunk of chapters at a time.

Brad Gammey

I'm getting the impression that this event coming for Earth is so far from Jason's norm that his only response can be interpreted as reckless and unpredictable. If it's already being played up as his "necessary evil", it has to be the antithesis to Jason in its entirety... which says a lot seeing as Jason is already a clash of ideals that somehow still work. The plot thickens, like a sauce left to reduce far too long... it's going to take an amazing chef to keep it going.

Tim

#WeNeedMoreBoris

Noah Hurley

I wonder if the enemy is the original builders cult. The old builder was sanctioned but the GABs always intended to being it back. What if the fixing of the original builders mistake is the catalyst for his return.

lockx

Honestly, I disagree. It was needed to set things up. It just doesn't fit the flow people expect from chapter based content in a webnovel, but it's key for longer stories and publishing

Attackins

Exactly my thoughts. I get wanting that info ASAP, but this self entitled expectation that some people have is kind of grating.

Michael Alpert-Appell

The difference between comments on Dungeon Crawler Carl and here is astounding. Carl's comments, after the first chapters in three weeks: "This is amazing, you're the best writer I've ever read." "So, so, so good." "I've got tears in my eyes. Thank you Matt, I've never read anything like this." Comments here, after waiting two days for a chapter: "I'm so sick of filler. When will you get back to [whatever thing I personally care about]?" "Omg another chapter about [whatever thing], this is just ridiculous." "I'm unsubbing unless you stop with all the filler and get back to [some nonsense]." Seriously, the comments here are the whingiest bullshit I've ever seen. If you don't like what's being posted, fuck right off. Nobody will miss you.

Donna

Tftc!

Heather White

Well, Noreth did say both he & Dawn weren’t giving Jason the full info because they knew he’d see the big picture & start screwing it up because he couldn’t accept the necessary evil…

Laura Hemly

I agree. People's expectations are often unrealistic when chapters are delivered one at a time. This style of reading isn't for everyone. I like it because I hate waiting for the next book, but I think some people are TOO impatient and want 20 chapters' worth of plot in each chapter. They should maybe wait for the complete book, or at least binge-read once a month!

Hunter

No way people are saying that about this chapter where Boris teased the reveal of the conflict dawn warned us about and the whole community has been speculating on for years.

Devin Rojas

Something i have been thinking for a few books now: an appropriately Jason-level of escalation would be that he sacrifice something important to get access to the cosmic throne again. The throne irrevocably has parts of him already and he is the Hegemon in addition to the system administrator. Some definitions of hegemon have it as the " processor of supreme authority " ," the source of lesser authority " or the " the predominant authority " if shirt uses one of these definitions i could see Jason getting some wild power to be a one-man sanction machine using a "higher " Authority ( whatever that means) or using the throne, shut off the creation of new Authority all together. Either of those scenarios being sufficient crush the opposition.

Martin Tomsic

Agreed. I've been wondering if the original Builder would have a hand in things for a while now. Ever since it was said that the other GABs could possibly bring it back I've been thinking it may have set up a way to regain Authority without them.

StarkRG

I couldn't agree more. It's tiresome and part of what makes me keep this community at arm's length.

Martin Tomsic

Yeah, they all but said that Jason would likely let the world end in order to prevent whatever is coming. So it has to be something major to make them think he would think that the Earth would be better off dead.

Laura Hemly

It was also backstory on the Messengers and the Cabal, and dropped some intriguing hints about what's coming. I thought it was useful in answering several important questions and posing a few more. Not every chapter advances the plot with action; in a book, there's lots of world building that makes the story and the world(s) it's set in richer and fuller.

StarkRG

Maybe wait until the book is finished and read it all at once rather than complain about how you're unable to take chapters as they come.

Laura Hemly

Plus he had to really hurt her to save both their lives. She may understand intellectually why he had to do it that way, but it's still hard to get over. Think of how long it took Jason to recover from the star seed, and she never got that kind of intensive therapy that we know of.

Hunter

Also is this the final conflict of the entire series? I know it’s run longer already than Shirt thought, but when Jason becomes fully Transcendent where can the story realistically go?

Hunter

It’s a race to transcendence for Jason. It is the only way he can combat what is coming because Dawn said him and all his friends reaching diamond rank would be the only realistic way to weather the storm that was coming, and nobody but Jason has a shot at reaching Diamond in 10 years. But once he is fully transcendent he will be able to squash anything below a great astral being.

Anthony Sebastian

I will say, Jason knows he's being kept in the dark about the threat and trusts Dawn enough not to pry -- iirc, he even passed up on asking/finding out more because he believes Dawn has a valid reason for not telling him everything.

Martin Tomsic

@Hunter - I'm guessing this is what Shirt had planned as the finale to the series, but I'm hoping like crazy that he will do more in this "universe" beyond this single series. There is so much that he has left as possible storylines after Jason reaches full transcendence

Laura Hemly

I'd lime to just go to a buffet and eat myself silly on fresh naan. Although I might even try making it myself. Maybe I can get some Cabal members over for dinner with fresh naan. 😉😆

Philipp Battenberg

@Martin: Totally forgot that she went to Earth, but as JonO said, she was with the Asano clan. Who 'lived in a hole' for ten years, so there's still some catching up to do. @JonO, yeah that's my point, the situation was messed up with no good options, so it's ok for her to to be of two minds about Jason. He tortured her soul, but saved her life. He took away her purpose, but gave her freedom. Edit: @JonO: Oops, I have not read my own comment properly. The conflicting feelings towards Jason, I had adressed in another comment.

Joanna

Since none of this chapter was directly about anybody in Australia, I'm holding out a flickering hope that Wednesday or Friday might go back to the party? Boris just got these recordings, it may well be the same day still. I know I'm probably wrong, but don't burst my bubble! Need more warm family time!!!

Philipp Battenberg

@Hunter: Well, it will be probably the final conflict, but we are not there yet and that conflict will probably span one or two books in and of itself. And IIRC Shirt said that he already had an idea what he'll writer after this and that it will not be a spin-off. I *think* he stated that it'll be another Cosmos altogether, but I might just be misremembering.

TechB

I wonder if the future event is the original builder returning. I'd expect they'll want to finish their experiment. If that's the case, I can't see either universe surviving. Unless...

Joanna

There was a great deal of re-summation in this chapter, but we're literally four chapters into a new book, and the information about the looming threat is scarce and scattered throughout the series. From a wider perspective it's a very good idea to lay out a bunch of this info again, especially if it's actually going to start being relevant later in this book

Philipp Battenberg

@Scott: Jakaar had spies on or around Earth. And according his information there everything looked fine. Even Jason's domains couldn't have given him away as they were powered off to fool the GABs. Also, he expected a normal gold ranker with maybe a team of four (Team Biscuit is quite large. Most other teams we have seen had 3-5 members and not 7+) and not an army of elite adventurers. Team Biscuit is an elite team in a generation of elites (due to monster surge, builder invasion and messenger invasion), so far outside expectations. And Jota didn't lead the pirates as was planned, so they fought a lot more inefficient than they should have.

Martin Tomsic

Maybe I'm misremembering, but I thought they said that Boris had been in and out of the astral spaces during the 15 years. Or maybe they just meant it as before Jason's domains went dark and after Jason was back. Even if it was only before and after the dark period, I'm sure she'd have gone to check on Jali as soon as the domains opened up again before Jason arriving on Earth. I do agree though that it would be interesting to see how they act with one another now though.

Mike Wizowski

Ok so here's what we have so far... Boris: has known for a while what was going to happen made me think it has something to do with the unorthodoxy at large but this chapter pushed me away from that since he seems to distinguish the two issues. Noreth and his outworlder: came to Earth, to set up the network and ??? (Maybe I'm forgetting something?) The original Builder : he's still out there and they intended to bring him back? Is he imprisoned or? Purity: became his relic, the relic purged impurities from people like monster cores, vampirism?, and something related to the messengers that I'm sure I'm forgetting. And most importantly in my mind... Thadwick: that one chapter lives rent free in my mind. I refuse to believe he isn't about to hit his epic background music redemption arc. Then again technically he's dead and now is an energy vampire but still. Also, fucking hell Shirt, your stories got me back into reading. 70 books down this year so far. I'm reading whatever else you write next without question even if it's a cheesy 80s romance novel about a spy with a talking car. "Filler", not filler, I've loved it all and each chapter is great in its own way. Thanks for being awesome.

oldntokn

I totally agree that about family time! I feel like we're missing all the good stuff while the plot races ahead. We get all these in depth looks at peripheral characters, but when 2 prodigies meet that are important characters, its just background.

Soli116

I would totally gush, because the highlights of my week are MWF, but I'm trying to maintain some decorum.

CritHappens

I like to see “Humphrey’s big Engine” developed. Would def read that

CritHappens

Technically he is a great astral being… just a defacto one. I think “The Throne” sees him as one, having done the repairs, even if Jason doesn’t see himself as one

JonO

Another odd connection that holds no real basis but is strange.... the cabal headquarters is in the nation "once known as the democratic republic of Congo". that is the same place where they held the rumble in the jungle.

JonO

I'm beginning to think fate senses are playing Jason more than even we realize. Defiar, rumble in the jungle, space pirates. This is like how in avatar the last air bender, aang had given us the ending to each season long before he ever got there. It's not the same, but Jason has made a direct reference to each one of those things completely out of context yet it comes up again in the story. I think it's pretty neat.

K E E L E Y URRY

This is The first Time i have ever seen my name in a book lol

Ben

Wait, was Boris and the messengers the bunch of people Dawn was getting information from?

Telewyn

If Purity’s artifact is involved with the Messenger conspiracy, what would it do to them? Why did they want to make it? Can Messengers even rank up with monster cores? I guess the obvious answer is that it might be capable of freeing messengers.

Mike Wizowski

Well I know it's stated at one point that the reason for the messenger invasion is to find the artifact so I guess it's either they want it for the power it gives them over others in which case it has nothing to do with the unorthodoxy or they want it bc it would help the unorthodoxy somehow?

Harbby

He referred to himself as the GAB of the system a few chapters ago.

David White

We know that Jamis Fran Muskar, first among equals of the Astral King 'Council', wants it as part of his ambitions of becoming an original - specifically the first messenger original (explained in Chapter 917 Eternity Awaits Us). I don't think it's ever stated how Jamis convinced all the other Astral Kings to help. My guess is the other AKs don't see any value in the relic itself (they don't care about originals because they are already perfect, the pinnacle, etc), but since Jamis wants it they will get whatever they can from him for it. Plus, plundering/conquering a world, which is what they like doing, anyway, I guess. I'd also assume there has to be at least one AK who would try and take the relic from Jamis on general principle of not letting him get what he wants. It isn't like they don't fight amongst themselves.

CritHappens

I think Borris may have been providing some “therapy” by the sound of things

ABTelford

Ok I have a theory: the Purity artifact is actually on earth and once the bridge between worlds is stable, and the earths astral membrane is thus stabilized, the messengers will be able to cross over it and enter Earth, along with possibly others who want the artifact. BUT additionally I think what the builder was helping the Astral King Council with (moving a planet?) will also come into play somehow.

ABTelford

You have…a very good point. I hadn’t considered the “start of a new book” aspect… which leaves me feeling bad about my earlier comment. *cring!*. Wellp…I can admit when I was wrong. So, chalk that up to me being impatient. Sorry, Shirtaloon…I suck.

Lewis McReu

Was this chapter meant to be named the same as 948?

JennP

Can't you just enjoy the story, the characters, the laid-back day to day? What's with all the self-important critiques? "I really know how the story should be written, shirt is screwing it up..." Shirt is doing fine, I bet he's had far more success than any of your writing. And, as always, if you're that disgusted with his writing, just stop reading it.

KollegvomMirgan

Tftc. I really like this one since it encourages a lot of theory crafting, but after reading the title I really, really hoped we would get a scene of Jason and Zara walking hand to hand to the family barbecue. I really wish I could bingeread to see how their relationship is going xD

Michael

Didn't dawn tell his team besides Clive what it was? Or was thst just a warning? Or bout something else?

Nergie

Dont forget the borderline superpower people have to bring vladwick up in the comments to every single chapter.

Andromeda Adams

That is a solid theory honestly. Though maybe even go a step further and the bridge might be how we see the old builder or the purity artifact maybe both.

Andromeda Adams

Tyftc! I worry for Jason and group. Dawn did say get as strong as possible and bring as many with you as you can.

BloodStorm

We did learn the next big bad won’t be the orthodox messengers and the astral bridge Jason made will be important. Even if we didn’t get told outright who the next war will be with. It would’ve been nice to get more hints. Overall not a bad chapter though

batchickcr8zy

After reading the chapter, I like reading the comments. Lots of great theories! My thoughts on the mysterious upcoming conflict: What I hope is that this isn’t the start of the end of the series - at least in tone. I’d like for all of the story arcs to complete either before or after this big conflict. The purity artifact could be a tool to help prepare for this big mysterious conflict to come. The astral kings want to involve Jason in some messenger conflict.. plus whatever this space pirate decides to do.. these could be used to strengthen Jason and his friends. All of these feel like they could be their own books. It’s disappointing when an author hurries the narrative to finish a series. I have not felt that yet, and I hope shirt continues to give each moment attention :) Additional thoughts on unresolved arcs: We definitely need to resolve these (mentioned above) before the series ends. I also would like to see how the messenger birthing “planet” in the astral space underground plays a part of the story. What role will these messengers play? Will they be the new beginning of the messenger people? Will they join the unorthodoxy and fight? Another question I have: And Shade… now that he’s sanctioned himself, if he dies, will he return to the same astral realm he did before? Does he “return” to somewhere that Jason owns to be resummoned? This may not be addressed in the story, but I’m curious. My thoughts regarding Zara vs Dawn as future partner for Jason: I like the idea of Zara for the short term. As some have mentioned in the comments, a “political marriage” between them might set a tone of unity between the planets. They clearly are attracted to each other. However, Jason’s future is far beyond that of what Zara could “naturally” achieve. Yes, they could eventually find a way to somehow get her on a similar trajectory to Jason’s future. Dawn better understands where Jason is going. Her parents don’t run a kingdom on a planet like Zara; they run a kingdom of planets if I’m not mistaken. Also, she’s becoming transcendent, which is closer to Jason’s path (which yes Zara could also do in time). But dawn also will hit the limits of mortal power. She will have more power than someone on the same level as her who does not have a star seed, as dawn will be able to use some of WP’s power. If Jason “needs” a partner on equal “power” as him, then neither Zara nor Dawn seem to be able to be that person for him long term. Jason has always had an issue with (well, uncomfortable with) uneven power dynamics in relationships. So I’m wondering if there’s another original astral king out there we haven’t met yet who might be a perfect fit..? Regarding the next chapters: I’m curious to see how Shirt continues to show us how Jason has grown (or trying to grow). A good example is with those he returned to Earth. He stayed out of the discussions and says he will honor the decisions made. In the past, he would want to dictate what would happen or at least be part of it. I’m also curious to learn more about his prison planet. How is he managing (or not managing) how those on it interact?

Laura Hemly

One will probably get renamed in the eventually book since they're so close together.

Laura Hemly

Possibly, but I don't remember any indication of that in the first Earth arc. We didn't meet Boris until they were fighting Undeath and his minions in the Brighthearts' destroyed city. I remember our introduction to Boris was when he said something sucked donkey balls. Definitely not a Pallimustus turn of phrase!

Kconraw

Thx for the chapter

Chris Furry

There are at least two chapters named "Surplus to Requirements." One in book 2, and one in book 10.

Aaron (Ataiatek)

The original builder is the orchestrator. Has to be. There was a reason he made these worlds. And there was a reason purity made his artefact

Aaron (Ataiatek)

This is going to end with Jason making a rash decision that none of them expected because they gave him no options but the necessary evil and it's going to be worse overall

Aaron (Ataiatek)

This was the best chapter of 13 so far 😭😭 the answers we've needed for 5-6 books

Alex Schellenberg

Remember when Jason healed a children's hospital styled as a sparkly angel? I wonder if Boris lost his mind and interrogated all 1,000,000 of his messengers over it.

Alex Schellenberg

If I've understood this chapter correctly, Boris was on earth around the time complex life was starting and watched it all unfold? He would have watched while all the Cabal member species went from non-magical to magical. He also could have noted when Vampirism entered humanity. That's wild. He definitely would have some ideas behind non-essence magical enhancement.

Kz-necromancer

guess that pirate dude is wising up to being used

ABTelford

Yup, and I can’t imagine he’ll make things better when he learns the full truth…it’ll be one more variable tossed into coming crap storm headed Jason’s way.

jacob butler

The question is does Tera want to fight Jason some more or... Thank him? Anyone think the Admiral will try to break the rules?

Jake Thorpe

No I think Boris personally brought humans here so his people could hide amongst them also he purposely made and spread the vampires around knowing that when the magic rises they would go rabid so humanity had a intelligent enemy to fight and learn against in preparation for the real fight

Jake Thorpe

Maybe it's the order of the reaper. Maybe they are followers of the old builder cult and that's why they are an offshoot off the cult that only pays lip service to the reaper. That dimensional Vessel in book 3 belonged to the builder but was repurposed into the orders vessel. They also started making a comeback right when earth was getting fixed

C Smith

All the chapters since Jason left Pallimustus fell so sporadic/disjointed. Like a blub dump here and there. I've read though twice now and the pacing flow just feels off. Lots of good stuff in there just not connected.

Martin Tomsic

It says, "his first visit to Earth predating the existence of humans on Earth by a considerable margin." So we can't be sure how much of the time since was spent on Earth. You're probably right though that he was around for the majority of the rise and evolution of humans and most magical beings on Earth. And I'm sure he has a TON of knowledge about just about everything, but if he let's too much info out it will be a sign that someone with knowledge beyond anything natives of Earth or Palli would have any chance of knowing. That would mean Boris and the Messengers tipped their hand at being on Earth and call down the Orthodoxy on themselves.

Nayee

I am sure somewhere it was mentioned he was there during dinosaurs' era.

Aaron Harchak

The romantic period for Jason and Dawn is past. Despite his advances, Jason is still far behind Dawn's development and age. Dawn was sent to Jason to reconnect with mortality, which she did, but now she has moved on. Also, I can not help but think that when Jason finds out what Dawn has kept from him, he will believe that she has betrayed him, even if the betrayal was just a lack of trust for him to change whatever terrible thing she is not telling him about. It would feel more natural for him to become attached to someone like Zara, who would grow alongside/somewhat behind him to Diamond rank. She is already Gold Rank so she has the potential.

Joanna

Hey, everybody gets impatient when they love something like this. And it can be hard to remember that we’re seeing a “behind the scenes” version of the story here, sorta

Martin Tomsic

@Nayee - That vaguely sounds familiar to me, but for some reason I'm remembering it as being more of an allusion to Jason's fight with the dino king than the actual age of dinosaurs. I could easily be wrong since, as I said, it's only a vague memory at the moment.

santiago villa reverte

Quite racist to say the caval took over South America and Africa,due to the ineptitude of their governments and therefore people.

ABTelford

No, it well known that gangs and cartels are deeply entrenched in most of central/south America. And they aren’t known for caring about helping people nor being responsible public figures. I admit I don’t know much about Africa though.

Frederick

TLDR: Yes, that would be racist if it were said. Its a good thing it wasnt said. --- Where is this given as the reason? I've read every chapter multiple times and don't remember this being said. Quote (santiago villa reverte, OP): > "Quite racist to say the caval took over South America and Africa,due to the ineptitude of their governments and therefore people." I see in this chapter: > "...the former DRC was one of the few regions where it had outright seized power. The Cabal preferred to operate in a supporting role with existing governments, but several areas had proven too unstable after the rise of magic." But this refers to a specific place where there is a lot of instability today and does not exclude other places where the Cabal may have also taken over. Your statement is based on a false premise and to answer it directly as stated would be to implicitly accept that premise.

Clifford Dillon

Best theory I've heard. The out worlder coming to earth shares the timeline of purity sanctioning themselves. Noreth talking about the out worlder he was a familiar to being kinda religiously intense tracks. They would have been around to get the artifact that Purity turned into and still been there when Disguise made the deal with the Builder. Weather the artifact coming to earth was set in motion by the Builder, Purity, or both, it'll be hella fun to find out. I think you nailed it with the artifact being on earth. That's why Noreth knows about it and the crisis to come. He helped bring it over. When it's revealed, I don't know if it would be astral kings and messengers, but somethings going to be giving them a whole lot of attention...

Joshua Little

Thanks for the chapter.

Kristy Riedel

Ben was referencing the conversation between Dawn and Jason on earth when he wanted to know her sources of information. Jason joked that her source was just a bunch of people and she