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Moisture from the nearby waterfall took the edge off the bright sunlight, beaming into the gorge from high overhead. Trees and wildflowers grew around the houses carved out of the rocky walls, wooden decks jutting into the gorge. Clean, natural aromas drifted on the gentle breeze. Jason sat in a porch swing, on the deck of the house closest to the waterfall, an arm draped over Zara’s shoulders as she leaned into his body.

“You made this place to be relaxing,” she said. “Given that you feel as taught as a harp string, it does not appear to be working.”

He let out a slow, ragged breath.

“Anger makes you feel strong, when it actually makes you weak,” he said. “It’s a simple lesson, yet one I need to remind myself of, over and over.”

“So does everyone else,” Zara pointed out. “It’s one of the few areas in which you are completely ordinary.”

“But the consequences if I forget are not. My instincts are to go out, tearing the Earth apart to find who is farming reality cores. I know it’s the wrong move, but it feels right.”

“But you made the actually correct choice. The considered choice. To let the appropriate people do the work that will lead to genuine solutions.”

“It was meant to be easy. I have so much power, yet the best choice is to sit here, using none of it.”

“Is that what you think? Take it from someone who grew up surrounded by politics, Jason: the power you don’t use is often greater than the power you do. Would there be whole nations working on this if your power was no greater than that of your last trip to Earth? Your power is working for you Jason. As is your restraint.”

He reached out with his free hand to squeeze hers.

“Thank you,” he said as she felt his body lose some of its tension.

“Do you know what your problem is, Jason?”

A smile teased through his grumpy scowl.

“Too handsome?”

“You know, your sister showed me some pictures of your brother…”

He sat up straight, turning to put on an affronted look.

“Hey…”

She giggled and he found himself smiling, despite himself. He leaned back and she sidled into his side once more.

“What’s wrong with you,” she said, “is that you’re too humble.”

“Shade, you heard her say that right?” Jason asked. “I don’t suppose you recorded it? Wait, this is my domain; I can just make a recording of it. But does it count as a fake if I do it after the fact?”

“Will you let a woman finish?”

“Making sure women finish is kind of my thing,” he said in a husky voice, then giggled at the slap on the arm it earned him.

“What I’m saying,” she continued, “is that you have this idea in your head that you need to be humble.”

“And it’s a good idea,” he said, the amusement gone from his voice. “Once I started getting power, my greatest fear was what I’d do with it if I turned into a prick. I got a taste of how that would play out last time I was on Earth, and it didn’t go well for anyone. And I have so much power, now.”

“I understand that, and I’m not saying you should never be humble. I’m saying that you need to be careful about showing humility.”

“You want me to be more arrogant?”

“No, not more arrogant. Just the same amount you’ve always been. Do you remember when we met?”

“Of course.”

“You swanned into my tent with the arrogance of a king. Even back then, you carried yourself like a diamond ranker who just didn’t have the rank yet. I think, to this day, you don’t realise how much your connections to the Geller and Remore families shielded you from the consequences of your behaviour. Now, you have the power, but you act like you’re still that manic boy back in Greenstone.”

“In fairness, we met while I was on my way to meet a bunch of gods. I think it’s fair to feel a little important when that happens. Especially when it’s to thank you for being generally amazing.”

“That’s not what they were thanking you for.”

“I’m pretty sure it was.”

“There were hundreds of witnesses, Jason.”

“It was twenty years ago, who can remember?”

She let out an exasperated sigh.

“Your diplomatic agenda on Earth, hasn’t gone as well as you’d hoped, has it?” she asked.

“No.”

“And how much of that would you put down to inconsistency in your public persona?”

“More than I’d like,” he admitted.

“You’ve always been erratic. Grounded and laconic one moment, terrifying and murderous the next. It keeps people uncertain and wary, which is an asset when the world is full of people more powerful than you. Now that you’re the one with the power, is uncertainty and wariness what you want to inspire?”

“No,” Jason said with a frown.

“No,” Zara echoed. “You need to project consistency and power. Save the humility for when you’re with friends and family. Let the people closest to you keep you grounded, and everyone else look up to you.”

“You want me to play the stern authoritarian?”

“No, that isn’t you. Projecting authority doesn’t mean you have to be staid and dull. Look at Dominion. Power can be sexy.”

“You think Dominion is sexy?”

“Of course I don’t. Women are never attracted to arrogance and power.”

He twisted to give her a flat stare, to which she responded with a grin. He rolled his eyes and leaned back into the porch swing.

“Jason, I’m not saying that you need to be something that you aren’t. You just need to school your public persona. Be more deliberate. Every person ever chooses which sides of themselves to show in any given situation. Politicians just have to be more conscious of it than most. And, like it or not, you’re a political figure.”

“I don’t like it. But I chose it, so I should take responsibility for that. Luckily, I have a princess to show me how.”

“That is lucky, because you’re a bad leader.”

“That’s a little hurtful.”

“You’re too rash. Too enamoured of flashy plans that make you feel clever but have consequences you didn’t foresee. You and I have that in common, despite my lifetime of political training.”

“You’re saying that my several months of political training won’t overcome that?”

“That is what I’m saying, yes. But while you make a terrible leader, you’re a good lord.”

“Isn’t that the same thing? And I don’t love it being put that way.”

“There is a difference, and you need to understand it if you’re going to stop stumbling around, hurting your own agenda.”

“Alright,” he acknowledged. “What’s the difference?”

“It’s the difference between strategy and tactics. A good leader is careful. Detail-oriented. They know the pieces on the board and can move them appropriately in the moment. A lord sets the agenda, but trusts those around them to enact it. They forge a path that others can’t see, or don’t believe is possible. They understand that the ultimate responsibility falls to them. The good ones do, anyway. Every time you’ve been separated from your friends, why did it happen? Because something needed doing, so you stepped up and did it. You took the responsibility.”

“I have always held that integrity is sexy.”

She put her hands on either side of his face and planted a lingering kiss.

“Very,” she said in a breathy voice, then let him go. “I’m not telling you to make some grand resolution to become the imposing astral king. Just remember to keep silly Jason for friends and family, and show everyone else the other guy.”

“The other guy isn’t very nice.”

 “And they need to remember that. Every time you get distracted by sandwiches or start talking about dark rider, it distracts them from that fact.”

Knight Rider.”

“What?”

“Every time I start talking about Knight Rider, not dark rider.”

She gave him a stern look.

“I’m doing it right now, aren’t I?”

She raised her eyebrows warningly.

“Sorry,” he said meekly.

“I think you shouldn’t keep as tight a reign on your aura when you’re out in public. Especially when you’re around the key players. Let it go a little heavy when you arrive places, then dial it back. And maybe stop masking your real voice. It was Dominion who showed you how to hide the god voice, right?”

“It’s not a god voice.”

She poked him on the forehead.

“Are you listening at all?” she asked. “No more humility for you. You have us for keeping you humbled. Mostly Neil. You have to go out into the world and show everyone that you won’t be trifled with in your domain.”

“My domain is an alternate universe. And a couple bits of Europe. Small bits.”

“Your domain is wherever you happen to be standing. You’ve been treating it that way since the moment we met. You pretend you don’t see it that way, but the only person you’ve ever convinced is yourself. Now, you need to stop being flaky about it. It’s time to accept who you are.”

“You make the person I am sound like kind of a prick.”

“Tough. It’s time to accept that no one tells you what to do; they ask.”

“You do realise that we’re in my actual domain right now and you’re telling me what to do?”

She pointed a finger right in his face.

“No backtalk from you, Asano.”

“I wouldn’t dream of it, your highness.”

***

Michael Aram had done a lot of jobs in the magical community over the last few decades. He’d worked in multiple Network branches in the days before magic went public. After, he’d worked for the United Nations, the Asano Clan and a company that had gone under after he reported on their magical experimentation on homeless people. His broad range of experience in the magical community had led to his recruitment to the Australian Secret Intelligence Service.

One of several hires from the magical community, Michael’s recruitment had been controversial within the organisation. His lack of experience in government intelligence was arguably offset by years inside the world’s largest and most professional secret society. Even so, there had always been pushback against the outside hires brought in to help the service adapt to a world of magic.

Aram was in the Asano Village briefing room with Natalie Park, the junior ASIS officer with the unenviable position of personal liaison to Jason Asano. They sat with agents from the domestic Australian intelligence agency, ASIO, while representatives of other nations filled most of the remaining seats. The absence of the Asano Clan was conspicuous, as was the empty row at the front. Anna Tilden was present, but she had been clear about representing Jason personally, not the clan as a whole. She was standing up front, next to the projector screen, chatting with CIA officer Natalya Winscott.

Michael had encountered Asano several times since his return. In each instance, he’d been much like he was when they had first met; laid back and casual in the face of absurdity and power. There was an edge that hadn’t been there before, but none of the hard-edged mania of Asano’s last days on Earth. It was a contrast with what he’d seen in the footage of battles in Australia and Pakistan. Of the blood-soaked tunnels left behind when he and his team hunted the vampires under Melbourne.

What he sensed from Jason’s arrival was something new. He sensed the portal open outside, as did everyone in the room. They all shot to their feet as an aura moved out like a battle tank though a kindergarten. The double doors to the briefing room opened and Asano strode in like he owned the place. Aram was reminded that Jason’s uncle had owned the place, until the Australian government seized it.

Walking beside Asano was an astounding, alien beauty. Michael knew from his briefing that this was the princess of a magical kingdom, and she looked every inch the part. Hair, like strands of backlit sapphires, draped over caramel skin. Her eyes were gemstone to match, brilliant and entrancing. Aram shook his head o clear it before shifting his gaze to those following Jason and the princess.

The rest of Jason’s team looked like a superhero league assembled by a diversity-oriented focus group. Several looked Middle Eastern, while Taika Williams was a Māori. One man looked like a professional wrestler cosplaying as an elf. He had sharp, swept-back ears, and muscles threatening to bust out of his white t-shirt. Rufus Remore had skin dark as midnight, as did another stunning beauty, this one with silver hair and eyes. The only white person was Farrah Hurin, with her strawberry blonde hair.

Farrah, Taika, Rufus and Jason he all knew relatively well. The rest were more of a mystery, although he’d been briefed as thoroughly as could be managed. The lanky Middle Eastern man was, by all accounts, the greatest expert on magic the Earth had ever seen. The broad-shouldered Arabic Superman was the leader of the group, rather than Jason. How that dynamic worked was yet to be seen. The elf who looked like he could bend a car in half was apparently a healer, and the slight Middle Eastern lady wearing a coat covered in pockets was looking around like she was casing the joint.

The room was silent but for the sound of the group moving to the front of the room, all but Farrah claiming the front row seats. Farrah moved to join Anna and the CIA officer by the projector screen, Asano’s aura dimmed down, and Aram let out a breath. He heard most of the room’s occupants do the same as they took their seats once more.

Up front, the CIA officer, Natalya, stepped forward to address the room.

“We’re here,” she began, “for a briefing on what we have so far regarding potential reality core farming operations. It’s still early days, but we’ve made rapid progress. To make sure everyone is caught up, the aftermath of the Pakistan battle revealed indications that someone was artificially triggering transformation zones. The assumption is that this is being done to harvest reality cores, something our guest Mr Asano assures us is a Very Bad Thing. Planet killer bad, so our intention is to stop it.”

She glanced at Jason in the front row before continuing.

“We believe that whoever is behind this is working with the vampires to carry this out in Europe, unseen by the world. That means, at the very least, access to multiple intelligence agencies to hide satellite surveillance. Further, it would require access to at least one Network faction to manipulate grid detection of such anomalies. As many of you are already aware, our multi-nation intelligence task force has been mole hunting in potentially affected groups. The other main thread of our investigation is who would have the expertise to make this work. For that, I give the floor to Ms Hurin.”

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mhaj58

Welcome back

Tony

Yay - best Stache voice!!!

Lori W.

Welcome back! Thanks for the chapter

Justin

SO GLAD YOU’RE BACK! Hope you had a good holiday and that this year goes well for you and your family!

Julia

the scream i scrumt...

Kelly

I just squeaked. Good job. 😂

Aaron Schwartz

Making sure women finish is kind of my thing… dear God, I can’t even say that out loud without cringe. And I was under the impression that he wasn’t all that great in the sack, since he pointed out in the first book that he learned to cook awesome breakfast just so that the morning after the woman wouldn’t think “oh I’ve made a terrible mistake”

Mr_Top_Hat

God I've missed your writing it's so refreshingly good

Pip Mitchell

tftc and welcome back! minor typo, taught in second paragraph should be taut

Charles

Welcome back, and a happy new Year

Izraifel

I saw the notification pop and went from "wut?" to "YAAAS!"! Welcome back!

Zack

Good Lord, I've missed this

Sean Beasle

Thank you for this gift. I hope you had a good holiday.

Vex

Dear God i didn't know i needed a new chapter as much as I did. Both this and the other series I'm reading hasn't been posting. This is like a gift from God at this point lol

Thomas Black

Hope you had a wonderful time off Shirt and glad to be back! I like what Zara brings out of Jason and now the people of Earth will get the picture that they need of Jason and stop provoking him. We all know that is not true but at least it will be a good story when the team starts eradicating every bit of everyone stupid enough to be farming reality cores.

Kevin Clark

I missed this so much!

Soli116

Ohthankgodyoureback I hope you had a great vacation, your mom is doing well, and everything is fantastic.

JonO

Thank you thank you thank you ftc! Also yay Zara putting Jason in his place and I love the leader versus lord aspect. It fits and it sucks i never thought of that dynamic before. I also love aram's description of the team as well. Tyftc again!

Dylan Alexander

Will there ever come a time when Jason won’t be moping about and complaining about having power?

Kelly

That comment was made in line with discussion of his looks, which has always been subject to criticism and compared to his brother. There’s something to be said about being attentive and earnest.

Buck

Good to be back reading the story! TFTC!

Paul B

I think I understand what addiction is…welcome back Shirt and thank you for the fix 🙏🏾

Naotsugu97

Huzzah good sir! A bounteous shrubbery to you this year!

Thomas Froehling

Thank you for the first chapter of 2025! What made me raise my eyebrow was '...something our guest Mr Asano assures us is a Very Bad Thing. Planet killer bad'. While the statement seems OK, it's very bold to call Jason 'our guest' when it was his familiy which owned that very place they were holding that meeting. Well, maybe he will comment on that later, we'll see.... Looking forward to Monday!

Justin

Amazing chapter! I loved the description of the team walking in! TYFTC!

Laura Hemly

A new chapter, yay!! I'll save the homonym errors for later because right now I don't care because we have a new chapter! I loved Michael Aram's descriptions of the various Biscuits, especially Belinda. Wonderfully accurate, too! And perhaps Zara can get through to Jason about dealing with politics better since Anna and even Danielle have trouble getting him to take them seriously. It's a good start, anyway. 😍

Joanna

And being in the moment is his specialty. I've always had the impression that he's pretty good in bed. The ability to find humor in everything is also surprisingly necessary for that

Der Ritter

Welcome Back ♥️

Timothy

"Aram shook his head o clear it before shifting his gaze to those following Jason and the princess." Please update and add "to" instead of "o". I was so very happy to get the notice of a new chapter, I almost forgot these were a thing. TYFTC and hope you had a great break and here is to a great New Year!

Connor Keenan

Hope everyone had an awesome whatever you celebrate!

Naotsugu97

Omg. Zara’s character sounds exactly like my wife. Which is AWESOME!

Aaron Lack

Welcome back Shirt, hope you had a great holiday with your family!

Gotrek65

Welcome Back Shirt! I hope you feel rested and thanks for the chapter!

ByLAWphoto

typos be damned, it's NEW-YEAR BISCUITS!

Okyeah

Thank goodness I have something to do on break

Hayden Leech

Zara! ❤️❤️❤️ Glad that’s going well.

Alex Schellenberg

I would love to see the familiars having a hangover style adventure while everyone is politicking.

Kri5KT

Tyftc and happy new year

Jarrett Glass

Welcome back, ans Happy New Year, Shirt. Thanks for the chapter. Let's go!!!

Laura Hemly

Amen! With Beware of Chicken off, too, it's been a real drought. I am SO glad that Shirt was able to get his mom settled and well taken care of so he could get back to writing!

Christopher Torres

Welcome back shirt. Thanks for the chapter 🙏

Kyle Coe

TYFTC! Hope you and your family have a wonderful, happy new year!

David

Yeah, I wonder what happened to the apology and direct compensation for everything they stole and then did. We’re well past the suspension of disbelief for how stupid the governments behave.

Pierce

I just love outside perspectives. We are always with the team or in their head. It’s awesome to occasionally get the perspective of unique, powerful, and intimidating they are, even to others who are part of the broader elite

ABTelford

Ooh Yeah! Thats the stuff! 😉WELCOME BACK!!!! 😺❤️🥳

Delagator

Great chapter, worth the wait!💪

Justin Crisler

If you have power and aren’t agonizing on it then you don’t need power. It’s the most admirable human part of him.

Justin Crisler

Self deprecating humor is a thing my dude. And it has repeatedly been a tool he uses to disarm people.

3rdImpact

Welcome back and happy new year to y'all <3 thanks for the chapter Shirtaloon hope you had a restful time!

Larsi

We are so back!

Storm

Tyftc!

David Yow

I’m so excited! Happy New Year everyone

Kalanaere

Jason Asano; God, Great Astral Being, Astral King, Astral Nexus, The Administrator and literal Master of his own little Universe. Despite all this he still has yet to completely learn that the Girlfriend is the TRUE power and Authority and apparently his things the God of Dominion is Sexy (probably best not to tell Dominion that, it will go to his head just like it did Jason's) Now then Zara made sound advise I think, Jason has to start displaying that he and nobody else is in charge. Nobody gives a damn what government idiot gets told they're in charge because they need to grasp that Jason is the True Master of The Universe (yes pun intended). The descriptions of all of them entering were great, I loved Lindy being portraited as the one that looks like the Thief casing the joint, especially since we know that is exactly what she was doing.

Frank Morgana

We back!! So good. Who else has gone back in this break re-reading and listening to past books

Kalanaere

Well he better up his game because clearly his GF has a thing for Domineering Gods

Alisa Cox

So excited!!! Welcome back and thanks for the chapter 🥳

Maudley

Tyftc, hopeful to hear more from either pirates or the Japanese Asano clan soon

Alejandro Piña

New years everyone, and I’m so happy you’re back Shirt, I was going crazy

Zack

Just started book 4 again. It was a bit of whiplash reading this then heading back to the kidnapping 😅

King Nereus

Fantastic chapter! I really enjoyed this one a lot.

Josh Vanderpool

ICE COLD. Zara is good for Jason. I love this.

NovaZero

Happy New Year. Also... Taut*

NekoNoir

Welcome back and Happy New Year! TFTC too 😁

Doswyn

Welcome back Shirt and Happy New Year!

jazz

How many times are we gonna have this same conversation. Like Jesus

Zachary Blevins

Well, it’s been two months or so. I thought we’d get a chapter with some real substance. Instead, we get Jason getting a peptalk from his newest, beautiful girlfriend As an immortal king with a tragic backstory of being an upper middle-class kid from a village beside the ocean, I just I just can’t relate where he’s coming from sometimes Next time the cloud House comes in to play it needs to have four Eaglehead appear out of the top of it just like on the Empire State building, and Jason can stand on the end of one of them and pout properly We could’ve got something from the point of view with the vampire Queen or the pirate warlord or something from his villainous family from Japan or Someone from the network up to something nefarious I would’ve liked almost anything better than another. Needless peptalk. Yeah, yeah hope everybody had a nice holiday. Happy new year. I’m definitely gonna lose that extra 40 pounds this year ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha

Micah

Yay!

Hemlock

Glad to be back!

BloodStorm

It’s good to be back. Happy new year everyone

Chioke Nelson

Tbh, I didn't realize the cannon looks for most of the cast of Team Biscuit was so diverse. It scratches a particular part of my brain that I like!

Aaron Van Wormer

I want to wish everyone a huge welcome back to He Who Talks With Monsters!

Chad .

I've missed this so much

Tahlia Pooley

Was so excited to see this this morning! Woo! Jason and Zara and so adorable! Love them…

Joi Soto

So rad having these new descriptions! Thank you!

Sean

Flavor? The pirates will show up. The ones that didn’t fight. The team now have some of the most knowledgeable travelers they’ve ever seen and they will likely have to participate in building earth’s defenses.

Rowdy Robby

Welcome back, Shirt. Oh yeah, that's the stuff.

Matthew Church

I re-read the entire series in the downtime. Finished the last chapter last night. Timing was on point and this chapter... Perfect 👌

ByLAWphoto

Logistic question: wouldn't it save time for Jason to just send a message to everyone on Earth "[System Administrator] insists all parties cease creating transformation zones immediately. Planetary stability is being compromised. Reality tears will result in extinction event." ? ...even if the vampires don't get the message directly, that's going to create a lot of chatter and pressure. People who were helping for the money are going to think twice with at that message.

Zachary Blevins

I only read a chapter when I get an email I’ll go back and look Main character, steel, spends too much time pouting not brooding, pouting

Zack

Yeah, but would they actually do it? Just sending a blast message, no matter the wording, wouldn't change anything unless Jason has some way to enforce it. These people, even if they believe Jason, don't actually care enough to stop.

bryan ortiz

Best outside-perspective description of Team Biscuit ever 👌 And this is what Asano needed to project, like Dominion advised him, if I recall.

bryan ortiz

I re-listened to all the books as well. Fun to do. There are little nuggets to be found.

ThoMiCroN

Well they are all from the Pallimustus equivalent of the Kalahari Desert in Africa…

Chioke Nelson

Yeah, ngl that detail missed me. There's plenty to be said about white-washed characters and Eurocentric beauty standards, but the mention should be enough of the point.

James Culbreath

Holy sheet it's like I'm a heroin junky who hasn't had a supply for a month and is now binging.

Crystal Donak

It's about freaking time they walked in like that.

Wheels42

*looks at the century long warnings from scientists on anthropogenically accelerated climate change* Er yeah, sure, they'd totally stop right?

Attackins

That cock diesel entrance is what I have been waiting for. We're back in it!

Kconraw

Thx for the chapter

MrCynical

While you're not wrong, there's a lot you're missing or ignoring. While Jason didn't grow up poor, he was less wealthy than almost all of his peers in school, and was also ostracized due to his race. He was also looked down on for not being like his "perfect" older brother and knew from a young age that he was not liked by his mother. That was then followed by his childhood friend and girlfriend cheating on him with said brother. Also getting literally ripped to another universe, having your soul tortured by one of the strongest beings in the multiverse, and dying multiple times can't be good for one's mental health. And the constant questioning is literally alluded to by the title. Beware that he who fights monsters does not become a monster for when you gaze into the abyss the abyss gazes back. Jason is constantly questioning himself because he's all too aware of how easily he could become a monster, and he did for a time at the end of his last trip to Earth.

Malcolm Gray

Great chapter, I’m so glad we r back

Soli116

I'm just glad Niel finally gets to show off his physique. I hope the team losses all the aunt's clothes.

Cody Cahill

Whenever you re-listen to any series you catch all the minor details because you already have the base knowledge from previous reads. I personally enjoy a book the most when I finish it the second time because I feel as though I truly understand it more the second time around

Zack Leach

Thanks for the chapter! Hope you had a good holiday Shirt.

Stuart Thwaites

Hey Shirt, I have an unsolicited suggestion You already have Clive as a lanky middle eastern man and Humph as an Arabic Superman but you doubled up on middle eastern for Lindy. Forgivemye for sticking my nose in soon deep but how about switching it to 'the slight Persian lady'?

OJCOPACABANA

I think it would fly, with a bit of push back easily squashed. But it wouldn't make for the amazing storytelling from Shirt that makes us all love HWFWM

Ravert

I bet that Jason was slowly replacing his clothes

Ravert

Why music from bg3 is oddly fitting his entry? Or it just for me

OJCOPACABANA

I think feedback and perspective from different points of view like yours are important, both to authors and fellow readers. That said, I disagree with what you said. I felt real substance in this chapter. Internal conflicts being voiced externally and addressed with those we love is an essential part of being a person. It is a huge part of how we grow and develop a healthy mind and spirit. This sort of character development and insight into their minds immerses me so much more deeply than a quick update from the bbeg's perspective. I want to know what they're up to, just like you, but I want it to have the focus and depth of something like this chapter like the characters deserve.

OJCOPACABANA

Also thanks for the general well wishes, happy new year to you as well and good luck with your goals!

Tahlia Pooley

I was actually thinking about this 😢 Would be a good stress point tho… but we have already dealt with it once! Not again! 😩

Zachary Blevins

With this series, I enjoy the world,and magic system the author created, and the supporting characters more than the main character The author writes the main character as such a drama queen he’s always so reflecting on what he does to the point it becomes meaningless to the story By the sixth or seventh book it started to take away from the story from my point of view which is sad because moments of epiphany or quiet self reflection can become pivotal moments in a story like the end of saving Private Ryan wear them. James looks at his wife in tears and says tell me I’m a good person. Tell me i’ve let a good life. He’s practically begging her. To reinsure him. It’s one of my favorite movie scenes ever. But of every 8 to 10 chapters You have to stop for Jason to have a moment Once again having a character suffer, a shock and breakdown, suddenly in a story can be pivotal there’s a scene in the miniseries band of Brothers or one of the main characters climbs out of a fox hole and starts to walk away and there’s an explosion behind he looks back and The two men who are standing in the Foxhall I’ve just been killed by the explosion and he reaches up and he takes off his helmet and you can tell he’s broken he’s stuck in that moment forever or Going with the wind when Scarlet nails in the dirt and says as God is my witness, I’ll never be hungry again before that moment, she was just a selfish little girl after it, though she was ruthless her own family didn’t understand her anymore. After that she did horrible things to keep people fed who would never appreciate anything she did.for them Moments of doubt, and self reflection Can make or break a story

Liesmith

Shade didn't reply to a direct question from Jason, because he was giving the lovebirds some privacy. Their literal humanity disgusts him.

ByLAWphoto

@Wheels42--yeah, that's fair. (you can't see it, but I'm heaving a sigh so heavy, my whole body shrank 4 inches) @OJCOPACABA--that's fair, too. we're here to feed the addiction!

ByLAWphoto

anyone else hoping and using their birthday wish that Jason will explain to the Earthlings what great astral beings are...then use his god voice to tell them that he sat on the Astral Throne??? 'cause I'm doing my Mr. Burns impression. "Excellent...."

Jarrett Glass

I hope not. Thirteen books in, that isn't the kind of stressor/plot twist we need!

mapperbob

Thanks for the chapter, it's great to be back to this. I'm looking forward to a year of reading HWFWM

Idan tal

The Arian (the original Persian) are white with blue/green eyes.. so are you talking about that (cause this is Farah) or the ethnicities that arrived later to the area?

Stuart Thwaites

There were two racial groups in Persia. The larger group 'Tajiki' (modern day Iran, Afghanistan, Uzbekistan and Tajikistan) were middle eastern. The smaller group 'Tats' weren't Arian, they were Caucasian because they lived in Caucasus (modern day Azerbaijan, Dagestan and a small corner of Russia) and accounted for less than 1/3 of Persians. When most people think 'Persian' they think middle eastern Tajiki.

BrawlingBard

"Well Mr. President, there is good news and bad news. The bad news is that Asano is rather pissed off. The upside is once you understand why, I'm pretty sure you will be too. Which is a great way to become friends"

AfroMocha

Yeah I was getting tired of him being humble and reining it in for not going nuts. Don’t get me wrong I get it it’s a process but I’m hoping for a solid 3-5 chapters of Jason laying down the law and showing earth just where they stand in the grand scheme of the cosmos at large. They need to understand the scale Jason plays at is so far beyond them that if they were in his position they would have destroyed earth a million times over

Justin

Aaaaaannnnnddddd I’m back to hating weekends! Guess I have to read the chapter again

Soli116

Petite Persian looking lady. Double the alliteration!

Laura Hemly

You're forgetting that the vampires have been part of the group creating the zones and enjoying the results of the cores, but they're not part of the System. So they wouldn't necessarily even get the message.

Laura Hemly

And rein, not reign, if I'm remembering the other homonym error correctly. And although it didn't appear in this chapter, Shirt makes a spelling mistake that drives me crazy: It's LINCHPIN, no lynching involved! It's an old term from cloth weaving, no vigilante justice necessary!!

Laura Hemly

Good suggestion,@Sean. Although I suspect only the two top pirates will be involved; the rest will be dealt with otherwise.

Laura Hemly

It was great hearing from Aram, too, since he had watched Jason, at bronze, fight off a silver (core user) assassin to nearly a draw. So now he's seeing exactly who helped Jason reach that level of strength, and like everyone else in that room shocked by the strength Biscuit encompasses.

BloodStorm

I agree with you. I understand that He Who Fights With Monsters is the name of the series and also the theme. 12 books in I think we paid our dues and should receive less introspection of Jason not wanting to misuse his powers. I’m also tired of getting a paragraph or two from every single person from earth recapping how Jason acted when he was on earth last. This chapter didn’t move the story, attempt to setup something new, or give us any world building we already didn’t know in 12 books

SmokeJam

Gloves are off, but not thrown yet. I like it.

mhaj58

It’s time for Jason to embrace what he’s always feared, his own nature. He isn’t supposed to be a leader, day to day is for Humphrey and Danielle and Annabeth. He is meant to rule, to do what no else is willing or able to do. He has always been better than anyone else when it comes to the darkest days and the hardest challenges. I hope that we finally get to see what’s coming in regards to what Dawn was trying to prepare him for. Boris and Raythe need to realize that Jason is better than them when it comes to the cosmic level. They can’t beat Great Astral Beings or Astral kings. Jason beats them every time

Zachary Blevins

Yes you said that better than I did it’s not a filler chapter. It’s a therapy session and a recap. I even like the hurricane princess a nice little scene with the two of them eating sandwich standing in the space station, that looks like Jason’s head looking out one of the eyeball windows having a casual conversation about the planet below and the moons that orbit it Oh yes, and I met with the Prime Minister of some place called Argentina and a few sentences about that part of the world I would’ve liked that and I wouldn’t have considered a filler chapter if he gave you information about what she was doing, and what the world like after a decade and a half of being gone then shade steps out of his shadow and says with his British accent, there’s a meeting taking place the Village. you should drop in on it.

Omar Diaz

Man it feels good to be back. Thanks for the chapter

Nathaniel Boivin

Once Sophie learns how to upload videos the whole world will get to see 2 of the most powerful person on earth wrestle covered in oil.

ByLAWphoto

@Laura Hemly--that's why I said, " ...even if the vampires don't get the message directly..."

Daniel Storm

Ugh... why they gotta be so damn cute together? Makes me wanna be cute and I ain't got no one to be cute with rn. Damn you Shirt!

Philip Pleiss

I love the detailed descriptions of what the team looks like from an outsider perspective. I still think that Jason should drop a threat or two about narcing earth out to the astral cults. "You can deal with me, or deal with billions of pissed off fanatics whose mission is to slap down people that pull this crap."

ABTelford

Haha! That would be a great conversation…but since when have world leaders in the story been anything but dumb as #^>€

ABTelford

Yes! No more frumpy clothes for Neil! Let’s show off that sexy side and get him a girl!

ABTelford

Dude I hope not! Shirts already done that once and Jason went on the downward spiral. While Zara might not be my first choice I’m hoping for a long term love for Jason. He deserves/ needs it.

ABTelford

It occurs to me that I’m not enthusiastic for Jason to hook up with Zara because I, as a reader, don’t know her hardly at all. She’s only been mentioned preferably except for two small sections. Ever. If we had more from her, especially during her time with team biscuit, then I’d probably like her more. Also, her personality isn’t established firmly enough for me to connect with her - she’s show us only princely arrogance (way early on in book 2) and ever since then she’s shown a timid personality, uncertain in all her dealings with every other character and situation. So…yea. I think that’s why I’m not enthused for Zara. She needs fleshing out and she needs to show more personality than a tissue in the wind.

Jake

This is exactly the reason I saw Zara as a perfect companion to Jason.

OG1949

'Taut' as a harp string, not 'taught.' Thank you for a great chapter!

Vincent Ciavone

I've only realized over our December break (and I'm so glad I finally have) these conversations between Jason and other cast explaining his emotions aren't just him being mad (obviously he's enraged) but in the conversations he's continuesly talks about how what he feels and he does are so different. It's neat seeing our MC that we love so much make the right choice, but he's still so far from being perfect. He's using his last bit of rational thought to overpower the rage that he's completely valid to feel.

Vincent Ciavone

I always enjoyed it anyway but until now it kept feeling like fluff, im sad I had such a shallow view on Jason's recent arc

T-Dawg 2099

All this time what Jason has really needed was princess lessons

Joshua Little

Thanks for the chapter.

Michael Romo

1 i never really notice the fera was the only white person, nor thought of Clive as middle eastern, I mean it makes sense just never thought about it. I always imagined him as "white and nerdy". Also, I'm corps hope dawn and Jason and Zara will react to one another. Things ended on good terms with dawn.... and agree the battle dealing with the Phoenix and reaper it's obvious he still cares for her. But dawn did say they may not like her when she returns, but everyone player has alluded to the original plan changing, by how much is still unclear.

ItWasIDIO!!

You know Zara literally gave the speech Jason gave to Hump & I believe others about image & how to use it in multiple ways

StarkRG

As far as I'm aware, Greenstone was colonized by Estercostians, which is in Palumustus' version of the Mediterranean. If there was anyone left after whatever happened to the Order of the Reaper a few centuries ago, they'd be closer to the dark skin of the the Ustai tribes.

StarkRG

He probably skipped all the princess-focused anime. Which is a shame because Scrapped Princess is amazing.

Chloe

Tyftc and the "it's kinda my thing"

mzetqbbtyf

Nope. Not reading the romantasy crap.

Jessica Olson

Ooo are you ace like me? But I don't think you've read real romantacy, this is very PG. (Thankfully)

Jessica Olson

That's because often we picture people in a book as looking more like ourselves are the people we know around us. It was very frequently mentioned though that they are caramel or darker skinned with brown hair in greenstone.

James Reeves

Thankyou for the chapter

Melchisedec Bailey

No white men? I never thought about it, but yeah. Shirt has always been kinda racist now that I think about it.

Chris S.

I would say it is more that he uses (mostly) the eqivalent of real world ethnicity distribution. Greenstone is somewhere in the upper right side of africa if i remember right and there are a lot of middle eastern (clive, belinda, Humphrey ) and black (neil) . All others could also have been other ethnics (for example Sophi is from a place like norway or somthing as far as i remember) but i dont see a real impact on the story or characters in that (except the wash up in south states america pre civil war like regions) Also most are descendants of adventurers which come around and did settle where they liked regardles where they came from, so everything is theoretical possible.

StarkRG

I'd say this is a story about how the difficulty of remaining moral scales with one's power. The more power someone has, the more moral quandaries they encounter. Early on, things were easy. Monsters had to be killed or they'd go berzerk and kill innocents. Then things got more difficult as the enemies Jason had to deal with started to become human. As much as Jason worried about morals early on, it wasn't until the Earth arc that he started being presented with the more difficult moral quandaries. Now he has near absolute power over a city's worth of people (the Boko refugees), is the creator of a new race of entities (of which currently only one exists), has two (currently separate) cults forming around him, and is planning on having that same near-total control over a vampire planet. Whereas in his early Greenstone days, he might have had to deal with one moral quandary per month, these days he's being bombarded by them almost constantly and, more often than not, the best, most moral choice is to do nothing, which is *really* hard when you can do almost anything.

Vincent Ciavone

I love how you put it, it also fits into the name 'He who fights with monsters' Jason is fighting his own internal battle as well.

Vincent Ciavone

Also I swear I'm not stalking, but seeing you reply to others when the chapter came out, and seeing this response coming recently just makes me love the community, its too small for how amazing the story is, seeing people come back 2 months later to reread or comment makes me happy for shirt

Vincent Ciavone

I see where you're coming from, but in stories like this I think you gotta try your best to get into the mind of the characters before any judgement. She was a princess of another nation so she had to be pompous and arrogant to fit the decorum of pallimustus (I think that version in hatable) but she develops while enlisted with team biscuit, while being separated from the team due to Jason's bias(of course she screwed him over but revenge isn't Jason's thing). And since then we've gotten a 15 year time skip so her personality would lost likely change to fit into the team biscuit ideology. And I get what you're saying, a lot of this was skipped, but you gotta take all aspects of the story in and although it's not shown; we can assume its all fitting in the characters

StarkRG

No, Greenstone is in southern Africa, but it was somewhat recently (a few centuries) colonised by Estercostians which is in the Palimustus equivalent of the Mediterranean. And, yeah, I'm gonna have to call bullshit on considering anything in this story racist.