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Cynical Pasta

Lovely chapter as always, thank you

Gardor

Endlessly Raging Valley is subordinate to Death Fashioning Scripture, right? Those are the battle lines being drawn? Tyftc.

Dafydd

I don’t think so as the Death Fashioning Scripture want’s him alive but Ruan in the tournament wanted to kill him so I don’t they work together

Nicolas Sagrillo

“Su Daji snorts. **Bei Hong** lets out a hysterical giggle.”

Valerian

Looks like this story arc will have a focus on Endlessly Raging Valley's internal politics. The tournament started that plot line, but here we see it continue.

octav

Strong chapter as always, but I would like to offer a suggestion. Moments like these, where there are overwhelming displays of power... I am always expecting references or relevance to when Liu Jin experienced divinity (even "fake") with the storm dragon. It feels as though that moment was character defining for him, yet I dont recall it having an impact (at least not explicitly stated) since then. I personally feel that moment should impact Jin's development similar to the dao concept, which was given in depth focus this last arc. And moments like these which show us the real gap in terms of pure power feel like opportunities to bring back that moment as something hugely influential. Rant over.

MasterofNova

Kinda agree with you. However I must note that Jin did have a whole conversation with Feng Gui about his experience with divinity and the unique perspective it gave him. From how he spoke about it tho, it seems like Jin kinda hated it and does not like dwelling on it much at all.

Dovhat

Su Daji may not be Liu Jin's pet, but she sure is pettable!

Sam S

"Soaring Feather *trashes* on the ground..." trashes -> thrashes Unless you want to say Soaring Feather wiggles on the ground like trash. ;)

Anzer'ke

Funny chapter, but these power levels feel a bit inflated for people three realms from the top of the starter continent. Like, if Renegades can do this, how come the war with shitloads of Divines on either side didn't do anything worse than messing up the leylines a bit? Shouldn't the continent have gotten blinked out of existence?