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Spolier alert: Liesman AGVG is a bit more badass than Saver's.

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Didrik Svahn

I can barely wait to find out in what way they are more badass <3

melangalade

no pain at all... yet :3

Titan1017

But isn’t this the same story that had already been plotted? It wouldn’t be the first time we entered a training flashback. How are these “versions” of the girls different (more badass) from what had already been planned out by Saver’s template?

Didrik Svahn

Well in the last post if you didn’t read. It was stated that this is an alternative universe, that Jim Liesman will be doing until Saver get his health back. So this basically is Jim’s take on our girls ;)

Titan1017

Yeah, I understood that. But Aster also stated that Saver would be redrawing the scenes, which leads me to believe that these training flashbacks were already planned for the story before he was sick, in which case, my question still stands. Though I also understand that I’m not likely to get an answer through writing, but rather through the story Jim decides to tell, and will have to wait and see how that affects the wider narrative.

savaster

Ah, Saver will not be redrawing the scenes. They would belong to an “alternate universe” because, in the “real”world, Eri would not let the girls do such training. Note, cave diving is considered an extreme sport even if you were in full diving gear :-)

Didrik Svahn

Didn’t Savaster also stated that this “flashbacks” alt wouldn’t continue after that he would come back. Also good that you understand that cause that about them being more badass was just a spoiler from Jim. In how he will be doing the girls which we just have to wait and see how it will be going :D

Titan1017

I see. I misunderstood your meaning in the previous post. My apologies. I stand by my statement that Aya’s two piece should return, however. Also, the cousins have engaged in cave diving before with the Toori-Ike tunnel, and that was with roughly half the breathhold time they currently have. I understand safety, but Eri might be underestimating their abilities.

savaster

No need for apologies. Actually they are now going through Toori-Ike tunnel as the final phase of their extreme training. The last time, Chi and Aya carefully planned their swim through to conserve air as much as possible to increase their chance of survival, but now Eri is putting a 200-sec surface breathhold on top of it :-)