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I haven't passed on my feedback to the designer yet, so feel free to let me know what you think!

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Tom

I liked the cover of book 1 Akari better. Besides isn’t Akari supposed to have copper hair?

davidmusk

Yeah, I did end up pass on some feedback to the artist about the face, and making it more feminine. The final draft is a huge improvement! I wasn't as worried about the hair, since I think I only said that in the character bios, while her hair was described as extremely dark in the final Book 1 draft.