Criticism (Patreon)

One of the things I would love is to get honest criticism of the writing I'm trying to develop in my stories, by that I mean, speaking with knowledge of the subject someone is talking about, or just understand some of writing in general.

I don't wanna take criticism as the "I do not like this, because is not what I wanted" or just telling me to fuck myself, simply because is not criticism at all.

Why this? well I love to read the comments I get from the stuff I do, some of those comments appear in places like "E-hentai", yes I see you. And a lot of the people there (specially the chinese community) are really against the ending of Rock Bottom, but almost no one gives me a solid argument on why is it bad for them, I wish to know so I could improve.

It's hard to tell, because I wrote characters as characters with personalities, in a way they are who dictates their own actions or how they would react to things. As a writer I gotta let them act for who they are, not make them do my biding when it's uncontrollable. I'm saying this because I'm not sure if I developed my characters properly, or is people themselves not understand what are they reading. Maybe both.

So I'm asking you as a reader, if you got anything negative or positive note to say about the development of my stories, I'm all ears, I want to improve, but if all I get is "I don't like, without much arguments" then I'll just go back and drop content without meaning.