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Jake truly experienced the woes of being too strong, as even something like the Simivita had proven unable to put up a proper fight. He likely wouldn’t have bothered fighting the Simivitas, as battling a large tribe was unnecessarily stressful, and he preferred facing solitary monsters.

Picking up the loot dropped by the Chieftain, Jake saw that one was a rare sword, and the skull necklace was an epic item that could apparently be used in occult rituals. Neither were items Jake cared much about, and he had far better already, which once again proved that he was fighting beings far below his capabilities.

Still, he had taken on the challenge to do a good deed, and luckily, it seemed as if things had turned out well, as he finally had time to address the dryad and elf. The two of them had headed toward him after the fight concluded, likely in part to also check up on the kits within the mound. At least the dryad made sure to dispel the barrier of wood protecting it by turning the cocoon back into a seed she put away in her inventory.

Seeing the two approaching, Jake was ready for what would come next. It was the same song and dance he’d been through so many times before. Based on how much Jake had shown during the fight, they had definitely guessed he was the Chosen of the Malefic Viper, as he hadn’t exactly been subtle, even using Scales of the Malefic Viper and poison during the fight. Not to mention that he was wearing his regular mask, which was apparently what many remembered him by.

Having already mentally prepared himself... Jake didn’t experience what he had thought would happen at all.

“Thanks for the assist. Things wouldn’t have turned out well without you,” the high elf said in a polite tone as she and the dryad got close. “I’m Keerla, and this is Solana. I think you’re owed an explanation of what’s going on, and what happened is that...”

She continued to explain what had led to all this. All about seeing this Fortuna Ferret, the mound, the kits, and their desire to protect the young ones from the Simivita, who apparently liked to eat the children of powerful races with the thought they would get stronger. Based on what Jake knew about Records, it probably even worked to some extent, as genuine belief had power in its own right.

As the explanation came to a close, it was apparent that the two women had no idea who Jake was but only saw him as an incredibly talented and powerful hunter. The way the dryad named Solana looked at him was with a bit of fear, but rather than fear of his identity, it was more fear of not knowing who he was and if their ignorance was somehow offensive to him. At least those were the vibes she gave off when she spoke in a cautious tone.

With the explanation done and dusted, Jake had a few questions, though. One more pertinent than any other. “What happened to the Fortuna Ferret?”

Keerla looked as if she realized something as her eyes opened wide. “Crap, I completely forgot... she should be returning soon if nothing else has happened to her, and considering it’s a Fortuna Ferret unless she encountered some B-grade, she’ll be fine.”

“Just pointing this out, but how reasonable do you think this ferret is?” Jake asked further. “Because I would be in quite a foul mood if I had just been flung far away and had to rush back to help those I care about.”

He was speaking from experience with that one, remembering what had happened when Ell’Hakan invaded Earth and sent him straight to the other side of the planet.

“I... hopefully it’ll be fine?” Keerla said, not sounding that sure before having a brief moment of panic. “No matter what, please do not harm the Fortuna Ferret! It’s one of the endangered species, and seeing one with kits is even rarer.”

“Relax,” Jake assured her, not interested in fighting an endangered ferret. “But you two do need to consider what comes next. The Simivita tribe knows of this mound, and where the Fortuna Ferret is staying now, I would be highly surprised if they don’t return sooner or later. Likely with an even stronger force next time.”

It would be a bit of a downer for Jake to save a bunch of baby ferrets only for them to die a week later. The two women nodded in agreement with Jake’s words as the dryad spoke. “Fortuna Ferrets aren’t unwise, and I’m sure we can convince her to relocate somewhere safer. The problem is that while many solitary monsters are in this area, the Simivita are still the strongest by far and have a presence everywhere. It’ll be hard to find somewhere safe, as even stronger enemies are to all sides... seeking away from the Grand Lake also isn’t an option as that requires passing through Rainbowfeather territory, which would be a death sentence to her and her kits.”

“Rainbowfeather territory? Do you mean the territory in that direction?” Jake asked as he pointed toward where he’d roughly come from.

“Yes... I’m surprised you didn’t encounter any, but from your first attack and ability to remain unnoticed by all of us, I assume your stealth skills are good,” the dryad answered.

“Oh, I did encounter quite a few of those damn birds,” Jake muttered. “Shouldn’t be a problem heading through that place anymore. Maybe it’ll even be safe to settle down there for a while.”

Keerla looked perplexed at Jake for a moment before she realized. “Did you wipe them out?”

“They didn’t leave me much choice,” he shrugged in response, wondering if such actions were looked upon negatively by members of the Pantheon of Life. “I will warn you that the area took some damage during the fight, though, but with how rapidly the jungle recovers, it should be fine.”

“Are you a member of the Pantheon of Life?” Keerla asked straight up. “Because if you are, I seriously wonder why I never heard about someone like you.”

“I’m not,” Jake answered truthfully. “Just a visitor here to experience the Hunting Grounds and what else the Pantheon of Life has to offer.”

“I see,” the elf said, not trying to pry further. “I’m not sure you need this warning, but the Rainbowfeathers are very vengeful creatures, and if you killed that many of them, they can likely track you through karma now. While it’s true there are no truly powerful Rainbowfeathers in Area 1, the same is not true elsewhere. It’s likely even a B-grade may make a move against you.”

“Thanks for the warning,” Jake said, barely stopping himself from saying: “Don’t threaten me with a good time.”

He also wasn’t particularly scared of being tracked through karma unless Eversmile had randomly decided to help the Rainbowfeather Songbirds. Shroud of the Primordial should block all attempts to track him from the birds, though that naturally didn’t rule out them tracking him down anyway using more old-fashioned ways.

Right then, as Jake was in thought, what they had been waiting for also happened. Jake felt an aura approaching, one more powerful than the Chieftain he’d just slain by a fair margin. It was moving fast, blazing through the jungle and reaching the mound within seconds of Jake detecting its approach.

Out of the thick greenery, the lithe form of the beast appeared, its aura flaring out, and its mood definitely not good. Feeling this aura of the beast, Jake nearly wanted to go for a tussle with it. He definitely understood why the apes had sent it away and wanted to avoid a fight. Identify also confirmed it was indeed a beast at the peak of C-grade.

[Fortuna Ferret – lvl 349]

Its eyes darted around the battlefield, likely trying to get an understanding of what had happened. There were clear signs of fighting, and the ferret did look like it was about to attack Jake and the two women, but Keerla quickly raised her hands and motioned for them to back away from the mound.

“We came to help you,” she spoke in a soft voice. “We made the Simivitas retreat, and your kits are safe.”

The ferret understood her words and quickly moved toward the mound and entered it. Through his sphere, Jake saw the mother nervously approach the five sleeping kits, nudging them a little with her nose and rubbing her face all over them until satisfied. A few seconds later, she turned around and walked out of the mound again, all her aggressiveness gone as she regarded Jake and the two women.

Its eyes lingered on the women only for a moment before settling on Jake, proving it had pretty good instincts, managing to identify him as the strongest despite being the lowest level.

“No need to thank me; I came because of these two,” Jake said, the ferret nodding in acknowledgment as it opened its mouth and started cutely dooking.

Solana and Keerla looked confused as the elf spoke apologetically. “I’m sorry, I don’t-“

“Yeah, they’ll definitely come back,” Jake answered the ferret’s question.

The Fortuna Ferret looked troubled as it let out its cute sounds once more.

“We talked about it earlier, but I wiped out all those damn birds in the Rainbowfeather domain recently, and while I can’t assure it’ll be safe there, it’s definitely an option. From what I saw, no other monsters dare approach the area,” Jake explained.

Considering this proposition for a moment, the Fortuna Ferret eventually agreed that evacuating there would be a good idea. The elf and dryad both looked at Jake rather confused, as the ferret went back into its nest.

“You understood what she said?” the elf asked, surprised.

“Evidently so,” Jake shrugged. The word “understood” was an odd one here, as Jake naturally also only heard cute dooking noises from the ferret, yet he knew what it wanted to ask anyway. Perhaps his many years Sylphie-whispering had given him a great talent to understand beasts... or perhaps he had always been inclined toward the more bestial side of existence.

“Wow... it usually takes me at least a few days before I begin to understand the beasts I care for,” the elf muttered. “Tell me you at least have some skill related to husbandry.”

“Nope, pure talent,” Jake smiled.

“Sometimes, the world truly isn’t fair,” the elf sighed. “Either way, I want to thank you again for the help. You didn’t have to, especially as a guest of the Pantheon. This may be a bit presumptuous, but could I have some contact details from you? I want to compensate you in some way after returning from the Hunting Grounds. I’m not saying I can offer much, but maybe I can even get some of my seniors to pitch in, seeing as you helped save Fortuna Ferret kits.”

Jake considered for a moment before shrugging. “Sure, I guess, though I don’t need anything.”

“That’s why I said it may be a bit presumptuous, as I mainly want a way to contact you again for purely selfish reasons. You’re clearly not a nobody, and if you are a nobody, you won’t stay one for long. I would be an idiot to not even attempt to make friends with someone who’s bound to go far,” the elf said, being surprisingly honest. The dryad clearly wasn’t a fan as she looked on a bit scared, wondering what Jake’s reaction would be.

He just chuckled and shook his head. “Appreciate the honesty. And you know what, how about instead of giving you a way to contact me, you give me something to reach out to you?”

“That’s fair,” the elf agreed, though she did look a bit disappointed. Jake guessed her plan had been to look into Jake using whatever he gave her to figure out who exactly he was. Additionally, Artemis had told him that it was actually pretty common for gods to bless people based on recommendations from those they had already blessed, and Jake could totally see a world where the elf was trying to figure out if Jake could potentially be interested in having Artemis bless him.

Which, while it would be funny, wasn’t really an option.

“Alright, here, take this,” the elf said, taking out a small wooden plaque. “With that, it should be pretty easy to reach out and find us. We live together, and I’ll gladly invite you over to dinner one day. Solana here is mean in the kitchen, and her cooking definitely isn’t something you’ll want to miss.”

“I’ll definitely take you up on that offer,” Jake smiled and nodded as he got a funny idea. “Would a plus one be acceptable?”

“Sure, the more the merrier,” Keerla smiled, clearly happy Jake seemed receptive to the idea. If he truly had no plans to ever reach out again, why would he bother asking about such things, after all?

Of course, what she didn’t know was who Jake considered bringing along as he had the most hilarious idea... but all things in good time.

As their conversation ended, the Fortuna Ferret also returned, this time not alone. The five kits with it followed along with careful steps, having been woken up by their mother as they didn’t want to delay evacuating as no one knew when the Simivita would return.

Of course, not before Jake took the chance to be attacked by five curious human-sized ferret kits, all at their mother’s behest. All of them curiously sniffed Jake’s body and rubbed their heads on him, and whenever he tried to reach out and pet one, it reacted by rolling on the ground to dodge, playfully looking at Jake as if daring him to catch it.

Solana and Keerla looked at him with some jealousy while they briefly talked about what would happen next. Jake had a good time for a few minutes before it was time for them to head off. The two women would escort the Fortuna Ferret and the kits to the Rainbowfeather domain, and while Jake was offered to join, he wanted to continue his hunt.

While he wouldn’t classify this encounter as a waste of time, he did consider it inefficient. As he’d said to the Chieftain, he didn’t even expect a level from killing a peak C-tier anymore unless it was a powerful variant, and sadly for Jake, the most powerful variants in the Hunting Grounds were considered endangered.

He needed stronger opponents to push himself, and while he could get lucky finding a powerful, non-endangered solitary monster or face off against a large group of peak C-grades, Jake considered just not bothering with them anymore.

Instead, he reckoned it was time to finally seek out and take down his first B-grade, and from his brief talks with Keerla and Solana, he already had a target in mind.

As he headed toward the Grand Lake, Jake recalled the fond days of reaching D-grade and his first exploration of the forest near Haven. He remembered his Lighttail Monkey genocide, which had ultimately resulted in getting a banana musa and a good fight with his very first Prima.

Jake was now C-grade... and while these Simivitas weren’t quite monkeys, they were apes, and that was close enough. He’d already taken down one Chieftain, and he reckoned they weren’t very keen on him right now. Moreover, the apes Jake allowed to retreat had gone back and likely told this Warlord – someone Keerla confirmed to be B-grade - what had happened, so Jake was definitely on a shit list there. The two women had also confirmed that the Simivitas would definitely hunt him down if given the opportunity, and they even encouraged him to fight back and kill as many as he could - or be bothered to - as they were halfway considered an invasive species on the planet.

Seeing as Jake had already made them an enemy, and considering the Simivitas weren’t endangered, Jake decided to change their classification... skipping over endangered and going straight to extinct.

Comments

Gurel

Thanks for the chapter

Noname

Tyftc

Beemoss

Tftc

Connor

Thanks for the chapter

Burkes

You’re telling me i get to read a chapter before i go to sleep? All hail Zogarth the generous.

joel southard

Thank you for the chapter

Unwillingmainer

And now he has a B grade target! Maybe too if the birds come at him. But more importantly, he has an invitation for dinner! And who better to bring as his plus one than one of the inviter's goddess? Tonight you will be cooking for the Chosen of the Malefic Viper and the Goddess Artemis, please stop hyperventilating on the floor.

hdfgdf

Hahaha bringing Artemis to one of her blessed is gonna be hilarious

Naotsugu97

Ferrets are just adorable, I don’t care who you are! TFTC!

DerWipe

Jake once again being an extinction level threat to a monkey population

Sylphie

REE!!

Zizawah

OMV it really is going to be another monkey genocide! Many thanks for another fun chapter! Looking forward to the dinner date with overwhelmed elf and dryad!

dash w

Thanks for the chappy

TyranT-Rex

Haha Jake is learning from villy. Brining a god as your plus 1 to a dinner cooked by someone she blessed is a Villy tier prank.

Daniel Wells

Guessing he is thinking Artemis as his plus one

Loststar7

TFTC. It makes my mornings better.

Cory S.

Jake the eliminator of species

Bladehawk256

I lost it at "Plus one" lmao

Nathanial Hackner

Thanks for the chapter, always enjoyable .

BumAssBumAss

Going straight to extinction, truly the chosen of the Malefic Viper. Villy is crying of joy right now.

Bruce Sheplan

Jake: Hey guys this is Artie my friend, she and two other friends Igs and Nat were the ones who invited me to visit! Everyone: Hi artie… after saying goodbye and ‘Artie’ is far away… Jake: Oh btw, i forgot to mention, Artie is just a nickname, her full name is Artemis….

Jason Hardman

Please get the bowing and scraping out of the way now, before the food goes cold. I'm feeling peckish.

Adp

Literally my first thought as well 😂

Cameron

It'd be kinda funny if Jake ends each grade with a monkey genocide now 😂

Justin Moen

Love this chapter. Bring Artemis to that dinner party, they know it’s Artemis so her aura is crushing them but Jake’s uses his aura to protect them allowing Artemis to enjoy a nice even ing with mortals, a true novelty for someone of her status. But who would’ve expected that a near god queen like Artemis to gain insight into aura control by witnessing a c grade like Jake casually shield his fellow c grades from her When do we get this chapter??

Jordan Rogers

Poor monkeys…shouldn’t have tried to kill cute babies in front of the murder hobo..

Boombaga

the look on their faces if he just rocked up to dinner... with an arm around Artemis' hip... lord I cannot wait XD

Shai182

TFTC! Can't wait for the Halarious diner with the two girls and Jake and his "Date"

Justin Lucier

Sylphie would also be some chaos if they're beast tamers. Could even ask Villy to come party.

Clint

I wonder if Primal Hunter is a typo — he seems more like the Primate Hunter.

Justin Moen

Zog, Book idea Run off series: The multiverse encounters Jake Thayne: The Primal Hunter Just an accumulation of parties living life only to happen upon a wild Jake! They get to witness him in his natural habit, causing pure destruction. The form opinions and spread rumors and the legacy of the Primal Hunter starts to permeate the multiverses’ records

Jordan Rogers

At this rate jake will be killing low tier A ranks in mid B grade. And rank weak S in early A, and a Demi god in peak A. And just be slaughtering Gods throughout S rank.

Clint

Maybe after Jake’s second B grade fight. Perhaps he could bring them a B grade rainbow feather for them to roast.

Cody K

I know the implication of the plus one is Artemis but consider the fact that literally anyone Jake could bring as a plus one is hilarious. Dina, Sword Saint, Sylphie, Minaga, a disgruntled Duskleaf...

Straat Junon

Great last line. Tyfc!

William WIlson

He'll almost have to. Lol I can see it now S rank Jake at the next integration hanging out with the primordials at another watch party and the other gods being who the fuck is this s grade just chilling with primordial level God's. One of Yip of yore's old ally remembering something similar from this era thinking he's hunting Jake approaches valdemar because valdemar seems upset with Jake to do a yip like alliance. Valdemar accepting because he really wants Jake to finally become a god so they can fight again. The whole time Jake's actually hunting this God.

Mat

He can’t pay Duskleaf enough to even entertain the idea

Star

"about to attack Jake and the three women," -> I think here should be "two women"

Aaditya Ravindran

TFTC! Potential typo: "I’m saying I can offer much, but..." -> ... I can't offer much...

Profile Name

Plz this it would be hella funny. Just a lot of POVs of different groups being left in total confusion. And maybe some divine commentary here and there

Rewdan

Thanks Zogarth, will Jake remember to take the hides this time🧐

JayseKnyte

He just slide from one warcrime to the next. However, to the multiverse "warcrime" is a purely Earth "concept". Hmm, the concept of warcrime.

Levi

"Don't threaten me with a good time" 🤣

Baseplate36

Jake should bring Artemis but they should do a bit where they pretend that Jake doesn't know that Artemis is a goddess while also making obscure references to godhood.

Numbzy

Edit: as he could or bothered to, as they were halfway. -> as he could or be bothered to, as they were halfway Second to last paragraph.

Myridex

I hope that b grade bird doesn’t track down the ferrets to their new home while hunting jake.

One Winged Angel

Don't do it Zogarth...that B-Grade bird better not kill the weasel babies....

Phil Ritter

I’d imagine someone blessed by Artemis would figure out her identity immediately from the aura alone even if they didn’t meet prior

Phil Ritter

Elf girl wanted to reward Jake and will probably be rewarded with a blessing upgrade or something instead

Zuuuuuri

nah, less religious worship for early chapters, more cult for cliffhangers

Lynderyn

Will that be before or after Jake brings Artemis to her place for dinner?

Zuuuuuri

Anyone wanna make bets on how many beast shit list’s Jake can get on before he leaves the pantheon of life?

Lynderyn

I think Jake has upgraded as an invasive hunter from one genocidal spree to two.

KingGoomba

I don’t think Artemis would say yes to the dinner party but Villy 100% would for the laughs

Seen Death

The real question is how many enemy factions are left by the time he leaves haha

Daniel Brian

He said it would be hilarious, which to me, means Minaga. 😎

C0bra$

Thank u for the story

Ender419

Lol, we called it 3-4 chapters ago that Jake is going to start an extermination of a species or three. Great chapter and look forward to Jake going to their house for a meal & having a god like Artemis show up with him.

John Looney

Has shroud effect near by people so Jake and his date “art minor blessing of Artemis” just sounds trolly and fun

gmc

On another note, chapter 1111. It was more than A good one.

Phil Ritter

I mean yes that would be funny too but bringing the god who blessed her would give an even better reaction

Clint

Technically. 🤓. Apes aren’t monkeys. I predict a lemur genocide in high B grade.

Harry Fitzsimmons

It’s been a while since we had a good genocide

Stephen

Can't wait for him to come back and be like: well, I only caused the extinction of two creatures.

Rocotrap

I think it's going to become a habit, 1 primate genocide before going up a grade lol

Jip

Yay! Monkey genocide!

Jip

Bets on if he leaves the cores and bodies for some crafter to come find again?

Stevean Bozek

Jake heard invasive species and went straight to monkey genocide again. Well monkey adjacent but close enough His records are gonna have so much monkey death that he'll wind up the boogeyman to all simians throughout the multiverse

kinglemur

Oh yeah, let’s get some genocide going. It’s been awhile

Michael Ferguson

It feels like fixing pallet will be easier after a genocide. Actually the sage's book should have been enough. I wonder when Jake will make some time for it.

TwistedVanity

I wonder if he will earn a title specific to being a monkey enemy/ perennial foe etc?

Ricky Keenum

“I’m saying I can offer much” -> “I’m not saying I can offer much”

Ira White

Jake- oh dinner that sounds lovely can I bring a guest? Innocent elf girl- sure guests are fun Jake- hey Artemis you wanna go on a date to some random c-grades place for dinner? Or -hey Dina you're pretty well known right? You wanna have dinner with a couple of noobs who don't have clue who I am and see their faces when you tell them? Lmao

Austin Barton

WE WANT WAR CRIME, WE WANT WAR CRIMES!

Korrasis

I don't think zogarth like monkeys and apes. :P

Drake

it would absolutely be hilarious if he brought artemis along lmao

Fabian

> Keerla looked perplexed at Jake for a moment before she realized. “Did you wipe them out?” Raising an eyebrow. > All of them curiously sniffed Jake’s body and rubbed their heads on him, and whenever he tried to reach out and pet one, it reacted by rolling on the ground to dodge, playfully looking at Jake as if daring him to catch it. Some Fortune records on the go! Those ferrets will become monsters too.

Jonathan Hovey

That is likely what is to happen. But just imagine, showing up with Yggdrasil or Natures Attendant!

Dan

Guess I was technically wrong about him adding to the endangered species list. Genocide, it is!

Joshua Little

Thanks for the chapter.

DirePants

He’s going to invite Artemis lol Glad Jake isn’t a TRUE murder hobo. Like, sure, he’ll genocide a species, but only if they’re not smart enough to retreat. But Jake gets more curious as character the more we see him interact. Him speaking to the ferret was cool. I don’t think we really need an explanation for. It’s just who he is. Good chap. Wholesome ☺️ In other news: Just launched my Patreon. I wanted to write a LitRPG but it turned to an urban fantasy. I won’t advertise without Zogs consent but if anyone is interested in reading the first two chaps for free, reach out. ✌🏾

DirePants

Chapter 1111 lol in Hollywood that means rack up some lines 😂😂😂

Xander

TFTC :) You seemed suprised I didnt have edits yesterday but its happened multiple times before :) I only mention stuff that strikes me as odd and the spelling issues I notice. If there arent any or I dont spot them I am , as always, just grateful for the chapter. Good to see Jake keeping up the tradition of meeting new people and forgetting to introduce himself :) Added the phrase "cute dooking" to my vocabulary. I wonder if its an unwritten rule of the multiverse that people all seem to go "I am seeking to maintain contact with you for selfish reasons, and here are the reasons..." Perhaps its just a politeness thing. Artemis and Villy are right though. Jake is a total agent of chaos. He just rips through an ecosystem slaughtering anyone that takes his fancy and leaving huge power vacuums ripe to be filled with new populations. The fun thing about the PH world is that nothing is really lost in this process. Sure a specific species is gone, or maybe just the strongest members, but there are always far more, and more diverse, species ready to take advantage of the newly freed up resources. Suggested edits: Just to make up for yesterday Ch. 1109 "could be a fun side-quest distraction." either "side-quest" or "distraction" both is awkward and redundant :D Ch. 1111 "surprised if they don’t return sooner *rather than* later. " in context it should be "sooner or later". The "rather than" form is for when you are telling someone when you would want a task completed. "“Because if you are, I *highly* wonder why I never heard about someone like you.”" adding highly here is awkward. either drop it or rephrase to something like "Because I'm certain I should have heard of someone like you" "kill as many as he could ** or ** bothered to," missing comma and word "be"

Daymond Walford

Looking forward to the… Simian slaughter? Monkey massacre? Gorilla genocide? Anthropoid Assassination? I dunno something with alliteration that means WAR CRIMES!

Daniel Hamilton

I want another battle that pushes Jake to the brink of death where his bloodline is activated (haven’t seen that happen since Nevermore) which wasn’t even a true life and death battle. Found it interesting in his battle with El Chito Man it did not activate. More like Jake just had a rough day. So far his bloodline has upgraded every ascension. F,E,D. So curious if it’s gonna happen in C grade. Or maybe 🤔 he’ll be able to have a breakthrough with the concept of time during the battle. Maybe this War Lord will deliver.

Daniel Hamilton

This species is about to be extirpated

Daniel Hamilton

Be funny if he invites a God, but still doesn’t reveal who he is and they left wondering

DirePants

I’m expecting it to happen against the B grade… either the Bird or the Ape maybe another Alpha/Chief of a different species he’s bound to piss off.

Ty Cooper

Lol looking forward to this dinner surprise. It will be pretty funny. The warlord fight will hopefully give him some levels

EverythingN1nja

Wait, Jake is probably gonna wipe out the vast majority of the apes, but their B-Grade leader will probably survive. Then the ape and B-Grade bird could team up against their common enemy that’s trying to wipe them out, making Jake’s first B-Grade kill actually be a double kill that can actually push him to his limits!

Demonshadow639

Actually, if the b-rank bird is a long hesitance like some of the brethren and the ape is a melee fighter, they could make a decent team… but seeing as all of the long distance sound attacks weren’t super localized (I don’t think so anyways) it would damage both Jake and the monkey

gmc

I wish I had author's e-mail address so I could send him a word doc with track changes and edits. Trying to communicate issues with misspellings, punctuation, confused phrasing, etc. is much harder via comments.

Corvid

Nature's Attendant hung a signpost over the teleportation gate saying "Hunting Ground temporarily closed for re-population efforts." "Yep, gonna send Vilas the bill for this, for sure."

Corvid

Yeah the fight sounds cool, but I'm definitely looking forward to the awkward dinner party where he shows up with one girl's CEO as his date, and they find out he's an honored guest of the other one's boss. Oh, and also that he's the second in command of the Mushroom Mafia.

John Durrett

Coming back to this chapter for a moment. When I first read the title then ran into the fate noodles - I thought that in saving the kits, the parent was going to do something that actually changed Jakes fate in a positive way to a new classification or title with benefits.

Kt-x

Thanks for the chapter

Brandon Rambo

"I’m saying I can offer much, but maybe I can even get some of my seniors to pitch in, seeing as you helped save Fortuna Ferret kits.” This should probably be "I'm not saying I can offer much". Great chapter!

Chloe

Tyftc

Cees Tollenaar

Perhaps it might have given him a karmic blessing of sorts? Something that passively helps his records?

MrBooniecap

I’ve read through everything up to this point and love the story. One thing I’d like to see you change is the manner in which some of the characters speak. They all use the same type of language and mannerisms, not really differentiating themselves. One would think that there different cultural backgrounds would change that. An example of this is that a lot of the characters use the word “mate”. Characters of different backgrounds would likely use a different word for friend even if the translation skill allowed Jake to understand them.