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The ritual slowly began to come alive as the lines drawn on the ground within the cavern, connecting all the loot piles, glowed with the color of Jake’s arcane affinity as he poured in his energy.

Needing a moment to think as the ritual began winding to life, Jake closed his eyes and calmed down. He had no idea what the fuck was going on or what had happened with Jasper, but he could make an educated guess. The Warpsnatcher had gone somewhere called the Drifting Planes and stolen the jewel from a bunch of far too powerful monsters and barely managed to escape back to Jake’s residence using the special token Jake had given him.

Jake was also fully aware that for this kind of soul injury, there were very few ways to fix it, but all tended to require either a Transcendent skill or direct involvement from the system. Jasper’s current situation wasn’t that much different from Jake’s back during the Tutorial when he had overdrafted his own soul to kill the King of the Forest. Back then, his savior had been the system fully healing him upon the completion of the Tutorial.

Jasper’s only real option was doing the same thing now, but rather than leaving the Tutorial, he could choose to evolve. If he did so before deactivating his boosting skill, none of the soul damage would be permanent; however, if he deactivated it, chances were his option to evolve in the first place would disappear due to soul damage.

Perhaps that had been why Jasper had dared this kind of heist in the first place. He wanted to use the system as a perfect healing tonic should he overexert himself. Likely, he had returned with the intent of evolving down in the cavern amongst his treasures, as Jasper had told Jake prior that he needed to evolve there.

It was a long shot, but maybe the Warpsnatcher had even considered that Jake could help should something go awry. No matter what, he doubted Jasper had planned on suffering his current injuries, as the state of the little guy was quite horrid.

Ultimately, whatever thoughts Jasper had didn’t matter anymore. Things were clearly messed up, and if Jake wanted to pull off this ritual to help Jasper, he needed to do it now or never.

Jake opened his eyes once more when he felt his arcane mana had properly propagated throughout the entire ritual circle. At least the part of it he needed to activate for this first part. The many piles of loot collected by Jasper over a long period of time began emanating energy, and the Shimmerfur Warpsnatcher in the middle did his part as he started greedily absorbing portions of this energy.

As a reminder, Jasper had always planned to absorb Records and energy from his stash during the evolution process. It was standard practice for Shimmerfur Warpsnatchers to do so, as the sudden infusion of Records right before evolving could help achieve a better evolution and even help guide the direction of the evolution somewhat based on the nature of the consumed loot.

Consuming powerful natural treasures before a big evolution wasn’t anything weird for all monsters. In fact, many only became able to evolve in the first place due to consuming some extremely powerful natural treasure, and when he looked at the Supreme Crystal of the Drifting Planes held tightly, Jake began to suspect this was one such item.

“Tell me a bit about that crystal Jasper brought back,” Jake said to Artemis as he continued guiding the ritual.

“It’s from the Drifting Planes, which is a common name given to a collection of minor worlds that exist outside of the regular universes. Some believe the Drifting Planes were once a single large world, but were at some time broken apart and became the many fragmented smaller worlds it is now,” Artemis began her explanation, adding a lot of fluff Jake didn’t need to know, but when factoring in she was delivering the entire speech in less than a second, he didn’t complain. In fact, learning more about the item and even where it came from would only prove beneficial due to Sagacity of the Malefic Viper.

“These Drifting Planes aren’t too dissimilar to that world called Yalsten, you talked about. Also similar to Yalsten is that the Drifting Planes contain unique energies and treasures born from the environment itself. Most valuable are the jewels from there, but as these jewels cannot last for long outside of the unique environment of the Drifting Planes, and they can’t even be put in spatial storages, which is why they are most often consumed by the creatures within.”

Jake listened as he continued working, memorising everything she said.

“In fact, many creatures go to one of these Drifting Planes with an energy intensity suiting them with the hopes of obtaining one of these jewels. This is especially true for the monsters closing in on an evolution, as it’s well known that consuming one can help a monster overcome a wall and be able to evolve. Seeing as Jasper had a mythical version of these jewels, even a peak B-grade would have wanted it. It’s a miracle Jasper even obtained one and made it back here.”

If Jake’s guess was correct, Jasper had completed his evolution quest upon stealing the jewel and was indeed planning on using it during the evolution. At least that would explain why the Warpsnatcher still clung tightly to it even now.

“So, a natural treasure suited even for peak B-grade monsters to consume in preparation for an evolution,” Jake nodded.

“A peak B-grade would likely need more than one jewel, but for a C-grade, it’s already more than most would be able to handle,” Artemis said, her voice calm as she observed everything that was going on with the ritual so far.

“Can use?” Jasper asked from the center of the ritual circle, looking concerned and tired. The boosting skill was naturally still going at a maintenance level, but Jake saw the wounds his potion had healed before beginning to reemerge, showing that the little guy wasn’t doing well at all.

“I’m not going to tell you what you can or can't choose during the evolution,” Jake said to the Shimmerfur Warpsnatcher in a serious tone. “You are the master of what you become entirely. I’m just here to provide you with an extra boost along the way, and while that jewel will certainly affect the outcome, we are already in completely unexplored territory, so I can’t tell you what the effects will be.”

This was a conversation they had already had several months ago when Jake and Jasper originally agreed to do this ritual, but he still found it pertinent to give a reminder. Primeval Origin Energy or Jake Juice, as the enlightened called it, was something fully beyond Jake’s conscious control, and all he could do was faintly guide it.

Jake performing this ritual in the first place was in part for him to explore ways he could control the energy better. He wanted to better direct it towards helping with the evolution, and at least feel as if he had some control over the ritual.

To clarify, Jake wanted no control over the evolution itself, and he doubted the system would allow him to either. If Jake knew one thing, it was that the system was big on choice. Sandy hadn’t been forced into becoming the space worm they were today, but could have chosen not to go down that evolutionary Path. All Jake had done was give the option.

That remained all Jake hoped to do, though this time without a special system-provided item to function as the catalyst to make it happen. Instead, he would infuse his Primeval Origin Energy into Jasper through the many loot piles in a quasi-direct fashion.

A few minutes passed as Jake ensured everything was as it should be, and he even found a small error he rapidly fixed on the fly as he moved on to the next stage. Jasper had already been infused with a lot of energy from his own loot piles, while all Jake had done was lightly assist in the process.

Now it was time for him to take a far more involved role.

“Be ready, Jasper,” Jake said, keeping his tone and demeanor serious. “I’ll begin to slowly introduce Primeval Origin Energy into the ritual. Remember, even if you feel like you want to evolve, wait till I’m done or tell you to go ahead... or until you can’t hold on any longer and just need to go for it.”

Jasper nodded, the small movement clearly painful. It was clear the Warpsnatcher’s body was deteriorating at a more rapid pace than Jake had first feared, and it was even beginning to turn stiff.

Pushing things along, Jake sought deep within himself and touched upon the pool of energy that usually remained hidden away and guarded by his Bloodline. At his behest, it answered as Jake slowly felt the Primeval Origin Energy surface and enter his body right from where his heart was.

The deep rhythmic sound of his heartbeat echoed in Jake’s mind as the slightest tinge of energy exited his fingertips and mixed with his arcane energy to enter the ritual circle. As his heartbeat slowly sped up as more and more energy wormed its way out, it apparently became audible as Artemis looked at Jake with a mix of interest and concern.

“Jake, would it be alright if I informed other parties that may be interested in observing and lowered the barrier of the palace to allow this?” Artemis asked Jake a moment later, having seemingly remembered that perhaps this was something they should do. “I’ll make sure to inform them that they should only observe without revealing themselves and not-“

“I don’t care,” Jake spoke out loud, not bothering with telepathy. Despite it not looking like he was doing a lot, Jake was very focused in that moment, and he didn’t have time to think about much else as he struggled to ensure the Primeval Origin Energy and his arcane affinity properly mixed.

Usually, he would use Jake Juice by directly infusing it into items he held in his hand or, at the very least, into an object not too far away. Now, he had to make the energy travel through the lines of the magic circle, through the loot piles, and into Jasper. All while keeping it tightly wrapped in his arcane energy, as that was the only thing that could contain his Jake Juice without making it affect stuff around it.

He was reasonably sure that if he poured Primeval Origin Energy into the ground haphazardly, it would alter the soil in some way, but ultimately end up completely wasting the valuable energy. That’s why he had to ensure it got to its destination in one piece.

At the same time, Jake also wanted to subtly affect the Primeval Origin Energy somewhat. One of Jake’s biggest fears when using his unique energy was that he would accidentally end up turning someone into a living calamity. With the Demon Prince, it had been a bit too close for comfort, and the memory of Temlat, his first and perhaps only disciple he would ever have, still lingered in the back of Jake’s mind as a cautionary tale.

That’s why Jake wanted to influence the Primeval Origin Energy to be more, well, stable. He knew the energy was incredibly volatile by nature, but he hoped that by mixing it with some of his stable arcane energy, he would turn it gentler and more controlled. Jake already knew that there were certain similarities between his Jake Juice and arcane affinity, and he hoped that would smooth the process.

As expected, Jake also soon noticed that a few more eyes had found themselves observing the otherwise unassuming cavern in the last few seconds after Artemis lowered the barrier around the palace meant to stop them from doing so. He instantly clocked the observers as Yggdrasil, Duskleaf, Nature’s Attendant, and two separate Minagas. Villy was naturally also observing, but he had done so since the beginning.

Several more minutes passed as the entire aura in the room began to change. Despite not a single iota of Primeval Origin Energy leaking, it still affected its surroundings slightly, and Artemis clearly felt it. Needless to say, so did Jasper, who was in the center of it all and had continually been absorbing energy and Records like a champ so far.

However... now was the time to get serious. Jake Juice had been flowing for a while, and he felt confident in controlling it better now. Additionally, while he couldn’t be certain, he had a feeling that the introduction of the concept of stability had worked at least somewhat.

Perhaps more importantly, Jasper was struggling despite his apparent success. Absorbing all that energy while also keeping his boosting skill active was taking a constant toll that was only getting worse with time. While Jake wasn’t entirely clear on the Warpsnatcher’s state, he knew he had to hurry things up or everything would be for naught.

“Jasper, prepare yourself; we’re entering the final stage,” Jake said as he took a deep breath.

Right before Jake truly made the final push, Jasper did something surprising... the small cat-like creature took the jewel he had been holding tight until now, and with a struggle, pushed the far too large item into his mouth. Somehow, he managed to get the jewel all the way in, fully consuming it despite the seemingly physical impossibility of the act.

At that moment, Jake began to wonder if he could even dare to call himself reckless, because a C-grade consuming a mythical rarity natural treasure made for B-grades was definitely up there with Jake trying to eat a fragmented World Core using Palate.

He also knew that now he really had to hurry. With a final deep breath, Jake activated Invocation of the Malefic Viper and empowered Sagacity, granting him even more control over the entire ritual circle.

That’s also when Jake learned something else. Sagacity made items better based on his Records and knowledge related to the crafting process, and this seemingly had quite the effect on his Primeval Origin Energy.

He didn’t have time to consider any of this, though, as he was too busy pouring in a flood of Primeval Origin Energy. Jake’s heartbeat sped up and became audible enough for even Jake to hear it echo throughout the cavern.

With every beat, the entire ritual circle pulsed with light and power, sending another surge of energy into Jasper. The Shimmerfur Warpsnatcher took it all in like a sponge as one by one, the piles of loot around the cavern lost their luster and energy, and every single item lost its energy and thus the majority of its Records, all to feed Jasper’s evolution.

These piles were emblematic of Jasper’s Path. They were all the treasure and seemingly insignificant items the Warpsnatcher had gathered throughout his life and stored in the Hunting Ground. It was the culmination of decades, if not more, during which the little guy had thieved, collected, and stored everything in an odd formation. After today, all of those piles would become absolutely useless, with many of the items even turning to dust as if exposed to desolation. This was something that would have happened even without Jake’s ritual, but now, all of those Records were further influenced by the Primeval Origin Energy.

Soon, nearly all the piles were fully consumed in the ritual. Jake kept focusing on keeping everything going as he raised his gaze and saw something that wasn’t good.

Jasper, standing on his two hind legs in the center of the ritual circle, was still absorbing all the energy coming to him, but his state had deteriorated rapidly. All his old wounds were back, many of them leaking blood visually. What’s more, his fur had begun to lose its luster, signifying he couldn’t keep the boosting skill going for much further.

If it dropped, it would all be over. Jake wanted to say something, but the little guy was already swaying as he tried to keep his eyes open and his consciousness intact. Rather than speak, Jake acted as he gritted his teeth hard enough for the taste of blood to fill his mouth as he pushed himself as far as he could.

One final heartbeat echoed throughout the entire cavern, bringing with it a shockwave of Primeval Origin Energy mixed with his arcane affinity. From the perimeter of the circular ritual, this energy began travelling inwards, and as it passed through the circle, it destroyed the entire thing, dragging with it all the remaining energy and Records still lingering within.

Upon impacting the loot piles, it forced out whatever was left as the ritual circle rapidly grew in size before finally striking Jasper in the middle. The impact was almost physical, and in that brief moment it struck, Jake realized it had been too much for the already weakened peak C-grade to handle.

In an instant, the luster on Jasper’s fur began rapidly fading. The boosting skill was no longer active, and the Warpsnatcher’s eyes lost all focus as they shut closed, the little guy falling forward with no signs of consciousness.

Jake’s eyes were open wide in disbelief, and he was about to yell something, but just before the last hair lost all shine, one of Jasper’s eyes barely opened, a faint light within shining right as the Shimmerfur Warpsnatcher’s entire body disappeared.

Comments

Connor

Thanks for the chapter

Beemoss

Tftc

Sylphie

REE!!!

C0bra$

Thank u for the story

John Burton

Tyftc Edit: hopes of obtaining (one) of these jewels

Jana

obtaining of of these - one of these of should be a one, no? Btw thank god it’s not Friday

SyndaXatrix

I am simply choosing to believe that Jasper is going to come out of this okay

Bloodshadow

I knew it would be like this but why I just wanna see his evolution

Igneas

Lets go Jaspeeeeeer you can do it lil buddy !

Will R

Great cliff and at least it's not Friday so we don't have to wait long!

Frank Franco

The level of cliff hanging is wild

Boffadeez

LETS GO JASPER little cutie is a champ

Sarianne

Looking forward to tomorrow! Really curious as to what Jasper will become. POV from Jasper would also be awesome

solomon pagan

Jasper is gonna be something special maybe even something unique maybe even the start of something new

Avery Howell

Yet another chapter that could have been a Friday cliff hanger. Can't wait to see what the little guy turns into.

Tristan

JASPER DID IT WOOHOO!!!!!

IntenseSushi

Tftc, can’t wait to see what the chef cooked

Sarianne

Yes! Really thankful that we get to continue reading tomorrow and not have a weekend break! 3 more chapters before the cliff.

brjenness

Watch out for that cllllĺiiiiiifffffff

Wimsey's daughter

Omg, I'm on the edge of my seat now and have never, in my life, been so thankful it's not friday yet. This is SO well written!

brjenness

Just to confirm...you disappear when you evolve?

Brian Schutt

Dang. Feels like Friday…

Fdrugc

Tftc

KinglyTimes

Damn that's a cliffhanger.

Daniel Brian

Hell yeah! No way Jasper doesn't end up as some deific creature!

joel southard

Thank you for the chapter

Salguod

Snatchie 2.0

Alex

Man am i happy its not friday holy hell

Lonez Zhavec

Damn. 24 hours cant come sooner. 😭😭

Jordan Rogers

🏔️ zogarth just casually adding cliff peaks to the massive mountain range he’s built, needs a warning sign beware not for the blind or inattentive…also you may need a parachute.

Andreas Sommer

Damn, I hate cliffhangers like this ... Great chapter 😁

Daniel Jackson-Woods

That's the biggest cliff zog has ever left us on since the el hakkan fight

Jesper Hansen

wow this is such a horrible cliffhanger, luckily we're only one the second day of the week :P

Seen Death

Obviously i cant wait to see how this effects Jasper, but somehow im even more looking foward to how it effects jake haha This seems like an abnormal feat even on Jakes standards haha Tyfc!

Michael Fannon

Mutiple gods' POV tomorrow?

Kt-x

Thanks for the chapter!! Woohoo!

Rewdan

That was so intense, I was holding my breath at the end! Thanks Zogarth

Lucas Callahan

This is when we get an update saying Zog is taking a few days off and our next chapter will be Monday

Nathan Stewart

Damn. Can’t believe you’re leaving me hanging like this!

RnR_ RnR

Hold me nowwwww im six feet from the edge!

Al

That cliff hanger was mean 😭 praying for my boy jaspy

Clint

Jasper, Noooooooo!

Phallusar

Reading this I can't help but feel we missed out on Jasper being named Jake Jr.

khielira

Well that was intense

Abriel Blauer

why are already in completely unexplored territory --> we are already in completely unexplored territory

Paul B

Dear Z, you're a tease and I think it's rude. Please give me my dopamine release so that I can find peace again.

Josh stevens

First the King returns then new GF and bow and now ultra instinct Snatchie!!

Shafan Knight

How? How does Zoggy keep pulling off such amazing story telling? I can’t wait for tomorrow!

Was geht sie dass an

If that's just the start I'm afraid I won't be able to handle the cliff at Friday 😱

Jonathan Jelsma

I wonder what Arnold and Sandy are up to?

Azazel

DAMN I’ve got a Cliffy!! ……giggity.

Azazel

Still feel the name “Snatch Adams” was a missed opportunity for Jasper.

Kevin Brooks

Great chapter. I'm wondering if Artemis or possibly any of the other gods will get any levels. Maybe not as they didn't actively participate. I just remember Viper and Duskleaf getting some after the Vesper ritual.

Chegs

Minaga actually brought 2 clones to maximize his vantage points lmao

John Durrett

tyftc. Warp speed ahead!

Mrburns93

So Jake has this ability to tell when someone is watching him and even the identity and intentions of the observer. Would Godhood for Jake reveal us to him? Will he then know that we are watching his journey?

Devillelouch

Jasper went for the maximum greed route. I wonder whos guess will be right because Jasper is the most blank slate character we have seen.

Jaroslav Zapadlo

I am literally in the verge of tears. Best book ever. I wonder if you ever get the recognition you fucking deserve. Well done.

Sprightly Ebbie

I think Jake as just created his own version of Stormild, Jasper is going to end up as a being encompassing all of reality, space and time 😁 At least that is my prediction

Chase Cantrell

Tomorrow can't come fast enough.

Cyranosaurus

If Jasper had died I would have needed therapy.

Ty Cooper

Woo! Good chapter. I saw the cliff coming but it hit hard. Lol got to love when a chapter pulls you in. So looking forward to tomorrow's chapter and glad it's not Friday.

Timothy Spradlin

I always think of the cat from Alice of Wonderland when thinking of possible evolutions...

Bobo

Great! “Why” -> “we” “why are already in completely unexplored territory”

brjenness

Jasper comes back from evolution, says thanks, and disappears until Jake is about to be killed by the dragon and rescues him.

Phil Ritter

Found a typo: why are already in completely unexplored territory, so I can’t tell you what the effects will be.” why -> we

dean ash

Cliff hangers like that are just mean

Phil Ritter

I have goosebumps. Let’s hope dropping the boosting skill won’t fuck Jasper over.

Pretzel Warrior

It's ok disappearing is good most likely he is on the evole screen dimension thing lol

Lynderyn

why are already in completely unexplored territory -> we are?

Reno

If anybody is surprised by the cliff, they haven't been following this story for too long. 😄

SinCinnamon

Jasper will have his own portable mythical realm doesn’t he? Ultimate vault

SinCinnamon

Villy should get a massive intake of very relevant records from Invocation being used. It’s a two way street

SinCinnamon

And I kinda want a Jasper evolution point of view. I want to see his choices!!!

InfernoDroid

I had a feeling we were at a cliff

Chris

Jasper you got it buddy🫡

CJ King

Thank you for the chapter

Mikesch

I am so curious about what Villy will get out of it. The Invocation Skill did some work here

Keion

Revenge for snatchie!! Blow that drifter world up muhaha world hunter Jake coming soon

Fyrtue

I hope Jasper becomes something like Monarch of the Drifting Planes.

Skryser

A bit over dramatic for my taste. That's for the chapter I am very curious what Jasper will become 😁

TwistedVanity

I knew it would be a cliff hanger chapter. Thank goodness its not Friday. That couldn't have been forgiven! Great chapter thank you

Colton Horton

Bloodline of the Primal Hunter: your ludicrously high perception stat, along with your massively enhanced senses allow you to perceive and gaze through the fourth wall.

Anthony Nonhof-Fisher

The records from so many gods watching must be insane on top of all of this.

MrEM4N

Jasper about to become Casper. RIP little dude

Brian

ABC!!! Always Be Cliffin!!! Thanks for the chapter!

NovaZero

Perennial something something

Andrew K

Small phrasing issue with "Most valuable are the jewels from there, but as these jewels cannot last for long outside of the unique environment of the Drifting Planes, and they can’t even be put in spatial storages, which is why they are most often consumed by the creatures within." - using both the "as" and the "which is why" breaks the overall structure of the sentence. (Keeping either one of them on its own would be appropriate, but not both. The problem is more obvious if you consider how the sentence would read if the "and they ... storages" clause was omitted.)

Fleetpanda

Interested to see the god’s reactions to the ritual. Particularly Villy’s to the records he’ll get

JJB4345_80_815

Yes, thank you for the chappy Zogarth! And yes, this is a cliff worthy of a Friday. I'm so glad that we have a Wednesday tomorrow...

JJB4345_80_815

Okay, this is PURE speculation... But what if Jasper is offered the chance to become a Warpdragon? • He likes hoarding (a typical dragon trait) • Jake used Invocation of the Malefic Viper, who has been one of the most well known dragons who didn't start off as a dragon • B grade is the start of True dragons I dunno, I just find the wild idea of Jake involved in creating an entirely new dragon line (unless I have failed in remembering Warpdragons being a thing already) a wonderful idea💡

RiTECH

tak for kapitlet Zogarth! Lige en rettelse: "why are already in completely unexplored territory, so I can’t tell you what the effects will be.”" shouldn't that be "WE ARE"?

Ty Cooper

Oh he is definitely going to have some PoVs all around. Artemis' reaction will be good. This is her first time watching Jake Juice in action.

Eric Rasputin

It is cruel to not release two chapters when faced with such a cliff.

Michael Murphy

"why are already in completely unexplored territory" why should be we

islandcastle11

Honestly that’s a long shot lol. I was hoping he would become the “god thief of the shattered planes” later in his path due to the clear value of the jewel he stole. Maybe he becomes much more powerful in fragmented realties.

atome 4 000

List of of Jake being an harbringer of primeval origine : -Sylphy [Sylphian hawk] -[Eternal Hunger] -Sandy [Cosmic Genesis Worm] -Vesperia [Vespernat Hive Queen] -Perenial Mana Beed -Demon Prince [Cerulean Demon] -[Palate of the Malefic Viper] -Jasper [?]

ItsFin

Im going to guess some kind of void snatcher since thats where the plains are located

Fyrtue

My biggest hope is that Villy makes a connection between Jake Juice and what it can do to help him revive his family so we get some proper back story to outright say what happened back in the 7th era as well as moving forward that plot point.

BumAssBumAss

Interesting to see Jake's heartbeat expressed outside his soul. I previously believed that his sound could be Jake's ultimate version of the concept 'words of power's or expression of willpower

Justin Moen

Wtf! Zog! You have a sick addiction of making people suffer with these damn cliff hangers! Just give it to us man! I’m begging. Omg I can already tell tomorrow is gonna be mostly god perspective dialogue in disbelief at Jake being Jake and the viper being all too happy with his surplus of levels from his dear chosen and laughing at all the high tier gods with jaws on the floor. It’s only Tuesday! Don’t do this to us man! Someone give this man more money! Do you take souls as currency?? That’s about all I have to offer at this point 😭😭 Mental breakdown over…🥲

Prospects

It should be fine, the problem with the soul damage was that it could prevent the evolution from even happening in the first place, now that it’s started he should be fine. If not then Yggdrasil might just decide to bring him back to life anyway.

Xander

TFTC :) Hopefully Jasper come back strong :) We're all rooting for the little guy. Suggested edits: "factoring in she ** delivering the entire speech" missing word "was" "unique energies and *treasure* born" could be singular but feels like it should be "treasures" "obtaining *of* of these jewels." should be "one" "what you *can’t or can* use" usually this is phrased "can or can't" "outcome, *why* are already in completely" should be "we" "Primeval Origin Energy and *Jake’s* arcane affinity properly mixed" should be "his" since Jake is the subject of the sentence.

Blutako

What if its an origin snatcher for all we know the drifting plains that Jasper got the crystal from was a part of the world the system was originally created on, or maybe the drifting plains are used as seeds and nourishment for new universes like yalsten combined with Jake juice, what if Jasper becomes the thief version of umbra basically, the number of possibilities is vast, lol what if he teleported into one of yggdrasil's worlds to steal some life essence treasure to heal, it also could be possible that he acquired his own pocket dimension or soul realm type thing that he can enter and store his treasures in

Talmadge Hires

Had to read this chapter twice! So good!

Rob Lyon

Yup then it update on Earth on Thursday maybe a POV from Jasper on Friday and the conclusion on Monday

Blutako

The thing duskleaf and nature's attendant are working on is probably a variety of duskleaf's avatar trees designed to revived villy's family, it could get mentioned but I bet that those two had died in god hood and reviving a god is not something I think Jake can do in c grade or B grade, so while I may get mentioned we may have to wait like a decade real time

Eden

Knew i should have held off a day, knew this would take atleast two days

Joshua Little

Thanks for the chapter.

Eden

Honestly forgot you dissapear when evolving

Ty Cooper

Yeah definitely looking forward to the God PoVs. Just hope they give us Jake's and Jasper's PoVs tomorrow and I am so glad it's not Friday.

Ty Cooper

It mentions his heartbeat doing this a lot. if you look back at the Valdy colosseum fight it happens prominently.

Austin Byrd

Who was Temlat, “his first and possibly last disciple”?

LemonPerson

I'm just imaging them all with note pads and pens jotting stuff down. Maybe got lab coats on and whispering among themselves😂

Kelfu

Hope our little treasure hunter gets a hat.

brjenness

what kind of weirdo only reads the chapters once? ima get my money worth, I read them at least 10 times.

Red45jimster

Deff want a Artemis pov. of Jake's aora could answer a lot of questions about his bloodline

jobe matula

what what happened ! ?!? can't wait until tomorrow

Nick

This is gonna be like Shark Tank with the Gods fighting over who can give the best blessing to Jasper

Lyn Shirley

Great chapter! I can see the future chapters now—Jasper busy evolving, Jake lying flat on his face on the cavern floor unconscious, his resources drained to nearly nothing, Villy smiling, the other gods either shocked or elated and Artemis teleporting over to Jake to make sure her moral man is still alive.

Eric

I'd be curious to see if Jake will get involved and create a new starting point for a dragonflight. A thought i had is if he visits the ghostlands and potentially works with the blight father to create a death/risen true dragon. If it doesn't exist already. Or at least does something badass with the risen to absolutely piss off the holy curch.

Ira Smith

Great Chapter

Gardor

From the perimeter of the circular ritual, this energy began travelling inwards, and as it passed through the circle, it destroyed the entire thing, dragging with it all the remaining energy and Records still lingering within. Upon impacting the loot piles, it forced out whatever was left as the ritual circle rapidly grew in size before finally striking Jasper in the middle. The ritual circle grew in size after shrinking around jasper? Did it shrink again before hitting him? I think this may be a typo

Cameron Taylor

Palate looks so feeble there in that company! With Jake spending a couple of books with Palate crippled, with Jake Juice and Villy Transcendence invested and with Jake opting out of the system fix I really hope something novel comes out of it. Not necessarily something more powerful than Palate. The way Villy uses it Palate might be the most powerful skill in the multiverse except for certain primordial Transcendent skills and Minaga's one skill. But I would love to see Palate customised to become more Jake.

Dittmer

any ideas on who's chosen Jasper will be?

Cameron Taylor

We have been waiting for Jasper's evolution for a whilr. The surprising twist is that it was someone other than Jake recklessly raising the stakes with self destructive overachievement. Jasper may well be the most Jake like of his Godchildren so far.

Cameron Taylor

There's always that good old trope of finding an egg after you kill the mother. Dragon slaying is on the C tier bucket list.

Cameron Taylor

Villy teasing Artemis for worrying when Jake has merely depleted all his mana, all his Jake Juice and 90% of his health. That's Jake when things are going smoothly according to the plan.

Cameron Taylor

It is a shame Minaga can't give blessings. Jasper giving no shits and going everywhere somehow seems to fit.

Cameron Taylor

I don't think we have met someone who would be a perfect fit. Not like Snappy and Stormild fit, at least. Behaviourally... a vampire god could. Whichever god is most responsible for making the vampires a bunch of obsessive hoarders.

Carl Never

New mexico to declare war on denmark 6:15 am if we dont have a pirate hat

Gman

We all know that somewhere along the way Jake is going to do a Primeval Origins ritual with Sanguine's blood. which grade do you guys think that will be? A or S?

TimeDrawsNigh

> but when factoring in she delivering the entire speech in less than a second Typo: factoring in her delivering === > many creatures go to one of these Drifting Planes with an energy intensity suiting them with the hopes of obtaining of of these jewels Typo: obtaining one of these === > I’m just here to provide you with an extra boost along the way, and while that jewel will certainly affect the outcome, why are already in completely unexplored territory, so I can’t tell you what the effects will be. Typo: outcome, we are already

Paul B

Yeahhh so Z doesn't like it when peeps tell him how to write. We know that typos will be a given but we (patreon subscribers) also know that this is going to get edited before it's released as a book. Plus Z will do another speech thing and it takes away space for the chapter which is the equivalent of Jake enjoying that shroom soup 🍲

Koby

What is Jake’s soul ritual skill nowadays? Kinda surprised it didn’t upgrade after that. This ritual felt rushed and was kept stable due to primarily Jake’s control

ABTelford

Holy crap I was worried!…therefore, great writing!!!

Chloe

That was nicely done. Tyftc

Rachel Clements

Eeek! Cliffhanger! Jasper! Too many exclamation marks ‼️‼️

Tamathon

I really hope there’s a scene where all the gods talk about what a weirdo Jake is lol, also Jasper is cool, I hope he meets Miranda and she goes all crazy cat lady trying to pet him!

username68749

I am so disappointed, how can tou have a chapter like this with out "thump" "thump, thump" "thump,Thump, THUMP" it's such a good opportunity and travis baldree delivery will be S tier