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Connor

Thanks for the chapter

C0bra$

Thank u for the story

Burkes

Never have i ever clicked so fast.

Jason

BTW theirs a typo saying he evolves into a c grade might want to fix. Still thank you so much for this chapter i looked forward to it all weekend

Zitronenwasser

"Congratulations! You have successfully evolved into a variant C-grade human." May be missing the B's here

Fdrugc

Quite early today

Jax

Shouldn't this bit say B-grade? "Congratulations! You have successfully evolved into a variant C-grade human. Due to Origin, all other variant options are blocked. Congratulations! You have successfully evolved to C-grade!"

Arieh Sochaczevski

Thanks for the chapter! This bit doesn’t make any sense “Seeing the system even directly Jake’s identity as the Primal Hunter definitely got him to raise an eyebrow...” I’m not even sure what to recommend as a correction.

taylor ritchie

That typo fucked with me when it said you evolved to c grade I was Like what

Thomas Todd

Thanks for the chapter! Great little twist, can't wait for tomorrow! Just an aside I think the below quote should say B not C Congratulations! You have successfully evolved into a variant C-grade human. Due to Origin, all other variant options are blocked. Congratulations! You have successfully evolved to C-grade!

Abdulaziz ALRumaih

Fuck yes Honestly reading this books just fills me with pride this isn’t the most impactful chapter but it’s definitely up there Honestly the most impactful one for me is the Villy and Valdimar fang of man fight

Bmax

Damn another cliff

Fdrugc

Congratulations! You have successfully evolved into a variant C-grade human. "Due to Origin, all other variant options are blocked. Congratulations! You have successfully evolved to C-grade!" Shouldn't it be B grade?

Chris Warner

Evolution part has C instead B. Tftc.

Pibblepunk

Congrats to Jake for evolving from C grade to C grade

Phoenixdrop

WELL THEN LOOKS LIKE TOMORROW WILL BE FUN

Indevan Jones

It says he evolved to C-grade...

Daniel

Congratulations! You have successfully evolved into a variant C-grade human. Due to Origin, all other variant options are blocked. Congratulations! You have successfully evolved to C-grade!

E S

Ugh it's going to take so many chapters for this to be over but none of it is filler it's so hard to wait.

Noah Mclelland

So does it give stat boosts for all the stat's? 10/lvl in c grade and 5/lvl prior grades? That'd be op lol

Yahyo Malikov

I think its going to be instinctual knowledge of how to use his bloodline

itsdlow

Jake and his cheat abilities >:D I love it!

Kt-x

Oooh! Thanks for the chapter!

Orod

I laughed out loud when I read that 🤣

Numors

He evolved into B grade, not C grade. There is a mistake there. TYFTC

Alexandre8901

🙂 I would I've taken the next chapter right now! Can't wait!

D3monEmper0r

Damn we will 100% get teased with cliff's regarding evolution stuff this entire week ._.

Stevean Bozek

So apparently Jake evolved from C grade to C grade again lol. The system prompt for his evolution was messed up. Also "Seeing the system even directly Jake’s identity" should be "Seeing the system even directly reference Jake’s identity" I also swear I saw a mistake in there where "race" was just "ace" but now I cant find it any more so maybe I imagined it

Arkenian

A much more minor typo but near the very end "Seeing the system even directly Jake’s identity" needs a verb like "directly mention" or something

Sarianne

Looking forward to tomorrow! Always fun when things go and other direction then that Jake expects 😇

Endern

Probably. It would make Zogarth's job easier to keep track of Jake's stats. I wonder if it affects Perception too in another way.

Rakharun

Tankuuuu, strong chapter

Misa

Tftc

Fdrugc

Suggested edit "The human race is known as the most balanced and numerous races in the multiverse, being able to walk many different roads on their Path to power." Races should be race.

Sarianne

Would be a bit much to write in one chapter 😅 but if you want to read it all at ones you could always wait till Friday to read the whole week at ones 😉😇

Alexikon

Thank the author that he did not do 1 Chapter descriptions of the 10 choices, 1 Chapter Jakes choosing process, 1 Chapter system error with the current cliffhanger and 1 Chapter explaining the new skill. With how good Zog writes and reading the chap, I want to thank you for not torturing us.

IntenseSushi

Tftc a full week of cliffhangers

polyx

ooo we are in for a nice talk with Villy

Dessink

Tanks for the chapter

Cyranosaurus

12 days of Christmas!?!?….. nah……12 days of “ cliffs-mas” here we go!! 😅

brjenness

Arthur. Really. Filler again. Jake made B grade 3 days ago. Arthur, why make filler chapter when we are so close to A grade? I finish book for you: Jake make A grade. Jake make S grade. Jake make God, Jake make super god. Jake make super duper God. See, Arthur. No filler = better story. Give me pullitzer. Oh crap...wrong side of the bed. Be right back. TFTC. Who has the best idea for what the other spirits of man were? My guess: Hunter's Irrational Spirit of Karen/Brent. The human spirit is one of irrational complaining and demanding to see the manager.

Til Weisheit

I feel like Jake's spirit skill variant either buffs all stats or concentrates all the stat points of the normal variants into a perception boost

djthomp

Nice to see the Jake weirdness starting even with aspects of his racial evolution. Same for his new bow not needing anything else just yet to evolve too.

Orod

Jake - "my bloodline deleted my 2 race skills. Now my new singular skill has my bloodline name included" Villy - "Jake you don't understand how fked this bloodline of yours is. I'm tired of having to explain it to you" 🤣🤣🤣

joel southard

Thank you for the chapter

Beemoss

Tftc

Roy

Thank you Zogarth!

Dave

Nice

Dave

Also tftc

Thread9000

Love a good system error. So is Primal Hunter’s Spirit of Man a single unique skill or a bunch of Spirit of Man skills? And "unlike past or present" means he's got something the Sage (if the system counts FK) and Valdemar don't? Gc; Tftc

Eric

Well since it has « primal hunter » his bloodline surely has something to do with it, so we can assume that this skill is tailored made for him and no one else, past present and futur.

Alan Lint

Awesome chapter. I'm imagining that this entire week will be about upgrading everything to B and talking with Villy about it.

Dakota

I was slightly annoyed about Fridays cliffhanger but soon(today) realized it's this week and thereafter that the cliffhangers are gonna get to me I'm so ready for tomorrow already lol tftc!

Gardor

Haha i had a similar comment the other day about not having to read all the "increase dungeoneer title" dungeons, and reading this comment made me think we may be setting the bar a bit too low. We're normalizing it. "Well, it could have been WORSE, so that makes it good".

Patryk

Well, maybe it should've, but it didn't! We're going back to Nevermore arc, smile everybody!

Eric Shivak

TFTC! Gogo Jake!

Loststar7

To be fair, I just finished cursing your ass out for this second cliff, but on the whole, thank you for the story.

Sylphie

Ree!

Kristopher Hanson

Why cant you be nice to us... like is it really that hard to hook us up come on zog.

Morazain

But of course, Jake likes to be Jake; he still will complain.

Lommona

Tftc!

Fyrtue

Jake is going to get hit like a truck by the old bloodline tomorrow. If C grade had his sphere out hundreds of kilometers, I wonder just how much of the planet he'll 'see' now.

Fyrtue

Also something I find kind of funny is that even if he shares this with Villy, we won't necessarily know if it's forbidden knowledge to the wider multiverse.

BumAssBumAss

Well, time for a week of cliffs.

Shai182

TFTC! Soo... I presume this is the Week of Cliff Climbing...

Leviathan

I know his evolution has yet to complete since we are gonna find out his new skill tomorrow, but I'm curious if his bloodline might stir more this time around. While I'm doubtful it'll happen, it would be interesting to see Jake's bloodline jump up to a percentage higher than he would initially expect, thus showing his bloodline is growing more attuned to how kt should be when it's in its unleashed state

Alexander C Hyde

The human race is known as the most balanced and numerous (race)races in the multiverse, being able to walk many different roads on their Path to power. You have shown yourself to stand on the extreme side in this regard, reaching a level few of your race ever accomplish.

Jack

Villy is gonna get such a huge headache when Jake tells him what happened

SinCinnamon

Very special boy being extra special again! Thanks Zog!

taylor ritchie

If you read the description it says that he doesn't choose but resonate with all that embodies his path or something like that I think that means it a super long skill that will basically mean he gets all the skill that have even the bit to do with his path like fight with others the big games one he was going to pick the alchemy one and all the other ones out of the 100 and something that effect him a little truly showing that he's beginning to enbodie being human just so much more

Episode 19

Zog power leveling Jake so he can handle all the shit hes about to throw at him TFTC

Stephen Heng

How are we getting cliffhangered like this on a Monday….. tftc!

Ramadasa Butler

I think Vila's is just going to laugh at Jake, asking him if he can do anything to do with the system normally.

Carl Never

Thats the stuff. One skill instead of two but still better than two? That sounds pretty sweet. I guess we were all wrong on jake being some reincarnation. Good stuff zog

Jason

I mean, this was basically his bloodline saying, "I'm better than this. Give me one of everything!"

Cyber_dy

Tftc

Grond (James)

Did I understand his race in the last few chapters correctly? Namely that each time he comes to an evolution, his race is at a point where he needs one more grade in order to evolve. But by the time he gets to a new grade, his origin energy has been working on him long enough that it's now leveled up again and needs another grade? Because that kind of sounds like an infinite regress.

Alexander C Hyde

Seeing the system even directly (used) Jake’s identity as the Primal Hunter definitely got him to raise an eyebrow... but not as much as what came next.

RnR_ RnR

Jakes variant has to border on unique life form like minaga or something. Like not enough to be a unique life form, but not enough to be human.

Dallin S

I first read the skills as “the effect is boosted when hunting your fellow humans” instead of with your fellow humans and was thinking man this is some serial killer type skills being offered

Josie

Jake & Sylphie will have to have their test spar in space i guess. The planet definitely isn't safe anymore for their rowdy time lol

Athena

tftc :) "system even directly Jake’s identity" -> "system even directly referenced Jake’s identity"

Davis Martin

I think it’s gonna be a great week

ABTelford

Great fun! Thx author man

Igneas

There we go ! This is the good stuff hell yeah

slasher 5095

Lol do you guys think we will get done with the race evaluation, class selection and profession selection this week, or do you think that will take at least 10 chapters? 😅🤣

Ian Hebert

Thanks for the chapter

David

Oh I'm expecting a cliffhanger every day. Probably won't resolve till next week

Fyrtue

That seems to be the theory Jake and Villy had but it is ultimately still unknown.

Nathan Holliday

What do y’all think it does?

Bjarne Hansen

Wonder if he'll identify as "The Primal Hunter" now.

Ty Cooper

Tftc Its going to be a funny chapter or two with Villy about this. Looking forward to it.

Nate

Primal Hunter's Spirit Of Man fucking slaps for a skill name. Can't wait to see how this knowledge just fucking upends the universe. Villy will want it secret, Eversmile will just somehow know because of the way Jake's karma touches other humans now, Valhal will feel a disturbance in the Human Spirit Force as a new Human Spirit embodiment is born. This is a great chapter.

Alexander C Hyde

[Hunter’s Collaborative Spirit of Man (Unique)] – The human spirit is one of collaboration and improving alongside one another to create the tool of your (race)ace.

phil

probably something like greater experience gain for killing higher level foes, greater ability to manipulate origins, higher amounts of perception per level (even though man has way to much lmao)

blucube 14

Thanks for the chapter!

Ty Cooper

Looking forward to seeingvhow his bow evolved and what v is new or more powerful. I somehow forgot it would get some of that system sauce as well. Wonder what is going to happen with the mask if the Forest King hasn't evolved yet.

Matt

WTB 24 hour time skip

Nathan Holliday

He should have done that after Nevermore if he was going to do it while still a mortal. Since he didn’t he will wait until godhood to proclaim who he is to the multiverse.

ZMVPJ

The real questions is will the echo of rerecords be felt more in the multiverse or specifically the new universe from jake connecting the spirit of man, and now that jake has done it has he opened the path for other humans to upgrade their spirit of man skills?

Rewdan

I’m so excited to to see what Zogarth has cooked up for us

Rewdan

I love it Jake’s bloodline bullying the system. Give me what I want NOW!

Stephen

We won't see the skill for like 6 chapters

SetherAedekae

So is Jake getting plus ten all stats for all c grade levels and plus five for all other levels

Wen L.

Taking bets that it's going to be +40 to perception (best stat) and +20 to all other stats :P

K R

Tyfc

Mat

Makes me wonder what was Valdemar’s Spirit of Man given his transcendence skill? Or this whole Spirit of Man is due to legacies inspired by his Fighting Spirit. That might explain Jake’s unique race skill in relationship to legacy of human.

DaMule

Z, you really are giving us a cliffhanger every day… I guess you must be feeling the Christmas spirit! TFTC

austin kutz

The system is probably off crying about how bloodlines are too outside of its power and its unfair for a bloodline to do the same things it does

DeAndrea H

I love how Jake’s bloodline basically hisses in irritation whenever the system tries to give Jake basic skills that touch on his bloodline’s domain. “How dare you? Nobody asked for that basic bitch bullshit. Move. I got this. One super duper system breaker coming up!”

Conor McCarthy

Villy is going to lose his mind over this

tigerfishie

The way I actually gasped and said “oh what the fuck” as soon as I saw that error 😩😮‍💨

David Storey

Jake’s bloodline so OP it slaps the system into giving him good skills lol always so funny. Villy is gonna have an aneurysm.

JW Saxby

Omfg YESSSSSS bro!! Gimme more chapters already lol I’m jones’ing here for that new skills description haha 😂 Tyftc 🍻

CT

Already excited about "after action" chat with Viper and his reaction : )

Walter Kimberly

Absolutely F****** amazing chapter 👏🎉

Chris Connolly

Theory- Jake will lose his perception stat at godhood and just have perception of the primal hunter as a legacy skill. The divine variant is omnipotence in perceiving the world and system itself.

Bookreader97

I wonder how fair his circle of perception can go now and how much he can process

Leigh Micheletti

Suggested edit "Seeing the system even directly Jake’s identity as the Primal Hunter" Seeing the system directly identify Jake as the Primal Hunter. TFTC! Is it possible Jake is on par with Unique Lifeforms?

JohnSnowden

Goosebumps 😂 Thanks for the story Zog!

Sam simmons

RIP cliff hanger. lol.

Toni

Of COURSE he got his own personalised skill😂. Thank you for the chapter boss!

Austin

Knew I should have waited til tomorrow for two chapters! But everyone knows you can’t postpone evolution. Just waiting for the next *THUMP* moment TYFTC

Nathan Holliday

If I was Jake I would be worried about the brain aneurysm he is going to get when his bloodline evolves again.

dash w

Thanks for the chappy

Stephen

Theory about the System. What if the first integration was actually the second, but Noone survived to first integration because the system didn't intervene. It acted as a spectator. It would also explain where Jake's bloodline is coming from.

Daniel Brian

The First Sage told him he would be able to handle his bloodline by B grade, so I'm more excited to see just how broken it gets!

Colin

Tftc!!! Let’s goooo!! Danger noodle with confetti, waiting for sure! 🎉

micah Hogan

Thanks for the chappy. Brb, imam go pass out till tomorrow morning now.

Tomer Yud

omg I want the next chapter!!!

Dhia

does the system recognize single celled organisms? like do they level up and grow? is there a whole b plot happening inside of jake’s boots to determine the king of the single celled? can they grow strong enough to become just one big single cell the size of a tree or something? this is really important to me

Xander

TFTC :) Welcome back everyone :) Suggested edits: "greater appreciation and recognition *of*" should be "for" "the void itself came alive as ** all prior times he’d been there" missing word "with" "and Jake was finally *represented* with his “new” race" should be "presented"

Coramoor

The fact that his ability will spread to all other humans through exposure should have some really positive benefits for his group

Gregory Schmitt

Lol missed opportunity to use 'system fuckery': "Such just wasn’t the system’s MO, and he knew that should the system so desire, it could USE SYSTEM FUCKERY TO DO ANYTHING IT WANTED, so a world where it failed or broke wasn’t an option either."

Joshua Little

Thanks for the chapter. Still I'm sure he could complain it isn't called the Spirit of Jakeness.

zran

nah, he is going to have a field trip about it rather

zran

id say perception will be percentile, where instead of giving a fixed amount of stats per level, it affects the whole grade with a percentile effect

NicN

Tftc

zran

well, by b grade is when people starts to take to space

Josie

That's true, it's been a minute since we've had a good THUMP moment.. can't wait!

Josie

Mr Author, would you be so kind as to give us a THUMP after the sentence "Very wrong." ? We love the THUMP. It's the sound of Jake's Bloodline backhanding the System to get our boy the very best skill 🥰

C. Adkins

I KNEW something was missing. God I live for those scenes. Great catch Josie

Jason Connors

So Jake will be getting 63 points minimum in all stats due to his legacy skills. He will also get 78 in whatever the stats this new skill gives him. However judging by his reaction either A it gives a combo of both his profession and class stats. B It gives a much higher amount in maybe perception, agility, and wisdom? Kind of a mix between the two with a higher number

zozzy the beast

Been waiting almost 2 years for B grade. Looking forward to the next couple days.

Nick Elliott

He did only select the hunters spirit so far... Hasn't selected his alchemist spirit yet. So I'm guess 1 merged skill massively increasing perception. Then same again when he selects his alchemist spirit.

John R

Well…. That just left everybody scratching their heads…

Sean R

Can we get a THUMP THUMP

zozzy the beast

My math says I've been waiting 2.79 years since C grade. I'm excited for B grade. I just hope I survive till the end of the story. This is the only Patron I pay for every month no matter what.

Michael Click

❤️❤️❤️👏👏👏

Sergej Fel

GRRMartin will probably finish Wind of Winter before Jake gets to godhood

gray matter

Anyone have the chapter number for Zogarths big F**k you authors note to haters at the end of the nevermore arc? I like to reference that to other authors I sponsor who end up catching hate when their story changes or goes long. I guess they’d have sign up to read it though? They might also have to have some level of Zogarths success for it be applicable, but still.

Xerecs

I don't believe he will ever finish that series. He cashed in got paid why finish it?

Nate

I fucking nailed my predictions so hard that I came back to pat myself on the back.

Nebulous

Typos: Zogarth mentioned on Discord he meant for the other, "normal" Spirit of Man skills to get percentage increases to stats on top of the flat increases. Just a heads-up for whatever editor may read this before it gets to Royal Road / KU!

TwistedVanity

EDIT. Thus sentence seems busted. Seeing the system even directly Jake’s identity as the Primal Hunter definitely got him to raise an eyebrow. I think it should say Seeing the system even directly REFERENCED Jake’s identity as the Primal Hunter definitely got him to raise an eyebrow

Corey bess

Bro ok im just gonna say it the coolest moments for me looking back. Like everything has been dope but like when the fucking system has to error message jake and play elevator music and is all like "bruh you kinna different hold up we werent ready we gotta accomodate some shit real quick" gets me so hyped and also laughing everytime its wild spectacular bro. When the system was like my bad bro we forgot you dont have to pick you get all of them. That was crazyyyyyy but also just like jakes meditate thing. Greedy boi jake strikes again!

MrBooniecap

He couldn’t go without being primal.

Chase Burleson

Tftc Zog! So excited to see what OP, broken-ass bullshit he just unlocked

Greg Alverson

Minor correction, under [Hunter’s Collaborative Spirit of Man (Unique)] it says tools of your ace. Should be tools of your race

Justin

This is a very mean Friday chapter..... WHAT DID HE GET!

Nicole Sparks

Looking forward to the next chapter! (Also, devouring Azarinth Healer since it was mentioned in Zogarth’s AMA, which makes surviving cliffhanger tension here much easier!).

Chloe

Post the pic or it didnt happen. Tyftc