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UNKNOWN

Kek, Villy trolling Jake will never get old.

Misa

Tftc

Rewdan

Villy absolutely pissing himself laughing at Jake and Guss

Bogdan Roman

Now just for the sake of clarity, do you mean in a kinky way, firstborn way or just comment way? :))

Dave

Tftc

mitchell kaiser

Can’t wait to see this conversation, Villy’s going to belly laughing about this.

James Lucas

The real first is He(she) or whoever actually gets the chapter read first. They are the true winners.

joel southard

Thank you for the chapter

CT

Villy with the pptx ready to explain where Jake made mistakes.

Loststar7

Looking forward to this next conversation. Thanks for the chapter.

djthomp

Conquer the world yes, but nicely. Thankfully big snake is willing to see it as a sneaky snake-like activity.

Arieh Sochaczevski

Thanks for the chapter! Finally a chance to meditate with the gate - I hope.

Lemonsqueezy

GG Zog, another great chapter.

Xander

TFTC :) Suggested edits: "incredibly smart and *knowledge*, and" should be "knowledgeable"

Sylphie

Ree!

AfroMocha

This by far will probably be the best Jake and Villy talk jokes and growth!!!

WhiteLeeopard

He could build the teleporter to the Order and bring back A grade healing potions and stat elixirs. That would likely finish putting the snake way above the competition.

Rewdan

Jake will try and defend his actions only for Villy to point out how dumb / naive Jake has been.

Rewdan

Thanks Zogarth great chapter 👏👏👏

Episode 19

Villy on the couch with a beer, waiting to pick up Jake's call (someone please make this a drawing and post it on the Discord) tyftc

Cory S.

TFTC

Nebula

Wait....can't he just claim the planet pylon? Or does this minor world not have one?

BumAssBumAss

Wonder how much revenge Jake is going to commit to. Those 3 A-grades are definitely on the list.

Buzzkill081

This chapter is giving me overlord vibes

Gracie

tftc 🐍

Matt

I don't think it's a world, like a planet. It's more like a mini dimension

Ale_Gi

Tftc

Colton Horton

Jake: First, thanks for saving my but, you're a true bro. Second, WTF dude!? Why you gotta be like dis? Rude!

UNKNOWN

I imagine to really drive in the point he'll use one of the most dreaded tools in the multiverse to really hammer in the point... PowerPoint slides.

IntenseSushi

Tftc 70% of this chapter was internal monologue and yet it was peak 👏 how does he do it

TeamNoPants

Pretty disappointed in the last week’s postings. I don’t think these chapters could be dragged out more if we tried.

Th3Defiant

I don’t think dragged out is exactly right, but I agree that the writing style is tough with all the exposition and monologues. It seems like every chapter is a 30 second conversation 😅 I just hope that Venus has some kind of relevance in 50 chapters. Unlike Jake’s “garden” on earth. Where it seemed like it would become something and now is just a story point

Dougie Mitchell

"Just a prank bro" said the laughing Vilastromoz within his divine realm

Fylbrom

Very excited for next chapter. This one was good in how it was necessary, but we already know Villy is gonna give Jake a good ass chewing tomorrow so im very much looking forward to it!

Fdrugc

Tftc

C0bra$

Thank u for the story

Prospects

From a strategic perspective it would be best if he didn’t have to kill them. Having the possibility of bringing out three peak A grades, and dozens more that are a few steps behind them would allow for a massive increase in military power that is unaffected by the restrictions placed by the system. Well most of them anyway.

zran

depends on the gravity of their actions on his eyes, likely the lich will be killed outright just merely due to the slave like soul contract, the arachnec nestmother likely will get killed as well since jake hates mind control with passion, as for the horned slayer it could go both ways, either killed or heavily harmed again

Anomander_Rake

Anything other than this is unacceptable 🤣 So looking forward to this conversation!

ABTelford

Thanks for the chapter! Looking forward to peak Villy reading tomorrow. I kinda expected Jake to start teaching Mr sea snake alchemy. Maybe Billy can give him pointers on how to introduce alchemy to snakes? That’s be cool!

Seen Death

"I don’t doubt you have much to digest either.” > "I imagine you have much to digest aswell" Something along those lines seems to flow better... in my head atleast. TYFC!

Brett Menzel

Jake: "So what's your name, calling you Great Sea Serpent is a little generic" GSS: "I...dont have a name, i never considered it. Could you give me one?" ---entire universe side eyes jake

Lemonsqueezy

I can always tell people that write comments on their phones. There are a lot of spelling and grammar mistakes (not in your case). The biggest sign though it the auto-correction of Villy to Billy. The biggest issue with teaching him alchemy is that GSS doesn't have hands. Unless he can do some sort of telepathic thing or morphs himself to be more human-like It would be impossible.

Lemonsqueezy

A: Most are just using GSS. That is turned into calling him Guss. I still like Jorgie which is short for Jormungar (the Norse version of Oroborus which fits Zog because he is from Denmark). B: Not sure what you mean here TBH. C: I think it was explained early on that Villy was in a kill or be killed mindset. He is from the 1st era so there was no one to explain things or guide him.

Lemonsqueezy

Very true, but I don't see that happening until Jake (and a several of the 93rd) reach A-Grade. Mostly due to the restriction of Jake only being able to bring people out that he is more powerful than, and I say Jake because he is considered to be the most powerful person in the 93rd and especially in the Solar System. So it might be quite some time before they can leave and by then they wouldn't as great of an asset because everyone would be around the power of these A-Grades. The 93rd also has a restriction on level and grade who can enter.

Adam

Why hasn't Jake stuck Shadow-Jake in front of the gate of enlightenment to just hangout near permanently? "Jake takes a bite of a mango. 'Ding' your skill Eternal Shadow has upgraded to Supreme. WTF!!!?"

Lemonsqueezy

Some are complaining about it. These things are necessary for a flushed out story. It is only bad because we can only read one chapter a day and they are rather short. In an actual book this whole chapter would only take 2-3 pages. I expect that when the book is released (as I saw in the previous ones) the entire Venus arc will probably only like 4 chapters.

CJ King

Thank you for the chapter!!

Lemonsqueezy

Villy could give him one of those special potions he gave Artemis, at an A-Grade level of course. Or some sort of artifact for GSS to consume.

Lemonsqueezy

I think most of them just immediately comment. I was up early and read it as soon as it was posted and there were already comments, and I do not read slow.

Josie

I'm ready for Jake to introduce his new guard snake to belly rubs "Who's a good boy? You are! Yes you are!"

Josie

He already knows Sit and Stay. Soon he'll learn Conquer 😈

Beemoss

Tftc

Brian

Great chapter! Thanks Zog!

NinjaDad

Any guesses on what Jake names the snake? Hawkie- a hawk Mystie- a mystsong hawk Sylphie- a sylphian hawk Villy- Vilastromoz (supreme danger noodle) Sandy- big sand worm Jasper- because of the jasper stone in the cave … Great sea serpent names: Snakey? Serppy? GaSSy? Bob?

Lemonsqueezy

Jake didn't name Jasper, the Forest King did. A lot of people have suggested Guss. I like Jorgie (short for Jormungar) because Zog is from Denmark and it keeps in line with Jake adding IE to all the names.

Chloe

Tyftc

Zilver 51

The title reminded me of -Pinky and the Brain-.

Summer Coff

"The Great Sea Serpent’s eyes opened wide." Recommend rethinking how you phrase this, since snakes don't have eyelids. Maybe its pupils widen?

ZanSanCho

Tftc Zog!

Josie

Their pupils don't dilate either. They don't have good eyesight, but sense the world primarily through those tongue-flicks they do

Samuel Jones

Totally ready for Villy playing it up by cackling like a super villain and reveling in the majesty of his Chosen's grand plan

JW Saxby

Tftc 🍻

Joshua Little

Thanks for the chapter.