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Brock and Sabrina (Patreon)

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2022-09-02 07:25:34
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This was one of the first artworks I commissioned and it's only just gotten finished thanks to andromedakrow on tumblr for completing this brilliant artwork.

What are people's thoughts?

If you have something you'd love to see, or an artist you'd like to recommend I look into, please leave a comment or flick me a private message! I'm thinking of locking in Ryot_ryot for some monthly artwork at the higher tier on Fiverr as well for some of those young Brock/Sabrina series! 

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Pamela Gillespie

Don't like Brock's eyes, looks more bulging than narrow

Wanous

Like the shading and the hands look good, however the faces on both of them look kinda...cadaverish,, except when I zoom in

Harmony

Brock looks rather...old. Looks more like his father dressed up as Brock, especially the wimpy way his hands are positioned. Sabrina looks, well, Caucasian whereas in the anime, and manga she looks more Asian (not to mention smiles less albeit that out of character smile could be for Brock.

Ravenext

Something about the face is just... odd. But the rest are great.

Dull Pen

Brock is supposed to be 16. This is more like 35. I think the issue is the lines on their faces. Not sure, but those look like wrinkles?

Dull Pen

In fact, the whole image is corrupted somehow. Here is an example, of when those weird doodles are removed from their faces: https://i.imgur.com/o4uTWty.jpeg

Dull Pen

I checked some other artwoork from andromedakrow, and those weird doodles on their faces are supposed to be blushes! That makes a lot more sense, though why he didn't just well, color then in pink/red I wouldn't know. The artist makes the same doodles on other artwork. Overall, I think ryot_ryot might be a better fit. I also loved the last chapter, with more focus on their pokemon. I love your world building, and for that you need to focus on the people, but it just isn't the same without pokemon in the picture. Just tell him to make sure that they are supposed to be young :)

SupremeTempest

Not a fan of the art style. Sabrina looks... not fat, but rather more plump than she should, given every canon depiction of her shows her to be quite slim. Brock just looks weird in a way I can't put my finger on, his face, his hair, his body all of it. He also looks a little bigger than I feel he should, like Sabrina, in a way that doesn't really imply muscle. May be that just wraps back around to the style again? Artist deliberately adds thiccness? Either way, cute concept, but not a fan of the execution. That's all on me, though, so as long as you're happy with it, then it's money well spent.

Astralogical

I do enjoy how sabrina would just randomly teleport to wherever Brock is. Would love to see more of them

steve

So I do like most of this, but I do think the cheek outlines detract a little bit? but otherwise, I do love the whimsy and spontaneity that this scene suggests about Brock and Sabrina's relationship (that she can just jump in whenever). To be clear, I don't feel strongly enough about the faces that it should be changed or anything, I just wanted to comment on the tiny part of this image that I think could've been done better

Cerber

Sry to say, but Brock looks around 40 here. The body makes him look like a dad bod instead of fit and solid

Thanatos

Sabrina’s forearms are fucking YOKED bro, what’s her routine?

angie bell

I like this!

Cap'nSmurfy

It's not great. The proportions are just too far off and the blush lines made Brock look 40.