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Hey Everyone,

First of all, a massive thank you for the condolences over the past week. My grandmother passed away on Saturday and a great-aunt the day afterwards. In Ireland, we have a ceremony of sorts called a wake, which is where the family spends time with the deceased, celebrating their life for a few days. As a result, I didn't get much writing done. I only have two chapters this week, and I'll be heading off to DragonCon on Wednesday for a week, and it's unlikely I'll get many words when I'm there.

So, it'll be Monday the 9th before I return to the normal cadence of chapters. I'm really sorry for the long delay. If by some miracle, I get writing done on the plane or in the hotel between activities, I'll share them with you early.

It also didn't help that I re-wrote 2 chapters a few times, because I wasn't happy with the intro to the Gala. I need to work it out a little in my own head first. :)

Thanks again for all the encouraging comments, and sorry if I haven't gotten back to messages. All will return to normal soon.

Brian

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Benjamin Hartmann

Thanks for your work! Hope you have a great time! 2. Time first😏 edit: well I was beaten to it 🙈, which proves the quality of your fan’s😊

Charles Gillentine

Sorry for your loss. Best wishes for you and your family.

Thomas Todd

Great chapters, I hope it all went well and I'm sorry for your loss. Enjoy DragonCon and take your time with the chapters!

Casey

That's definitely a rough time. Two at once. I cannot even imagine, nor do I want to. Thank you for the chapters you were able to write. I will admit I thoroughly enjoy the back and forth between Sal and Petro. It is just hilarious. And ending the first chapter with "don't trust a thing Barry says" was perfect. Had me literally laughing out loud.

Travis Snelgrove

Great chapters man, looking forward to more and I send my condolences to you and your family.

Tim Walloch

Great chapters and sorry for your loss.

Mike M

Am I the only one slightly annoyed by how many chapters have been dedicated to building this automated crafting machine? Anyway, wish you and your family the best! Enjoy DragonCon!

Chris Hoopes

Have fun at DragonCon.

Dawn Zeleznik

I have a question about the world. Every so often it strikes me as a bit steampunk in Sal’s gun or fashion. Like the gala, Sal wearing a high collar tailcoat. My question would be is the world more steampunk with cores or essence replacing steam? Hope I’m not being dumb asking. I enjoyed the chapters and hope you enjoy your trip.

J

Incredibly sorry for your loss; not sure I would be able to focus in you shoes. I'm sure these next 2 chapters will be great, have fun at the con!

Tom

I think the best parts of the gala will be: 1) Barry being completely dumbfounded when Petro ignores his illusions 2) Sal and Fabi missing an important speech because they're going through the coding report as she fixes it for him

Heather Herren

Sorry for your loss!! Thank you for writing 2 great chapters!

Alteron

Thanks for some wonderful chapters

Darnell Maxwell

Once again, Sal's parents show why they are the best part of the book.

Darnell Maxwell

Think of it more like magical steampunk in general areas while star trek levels of high sci fi in important places like Quest Academy or the Hunter Bureau.

Scott Marshall

Sorry for you loss. Take your time to get back into it. Enjoy Dragoncon. Try not to get sick there like so many authors.

Aaron edison

Again my condolences. Have a great time at dragon con!

Shannon Bryce

So sorry for your loss. Take all the time you need. We'll be here for you whenever you're ready.

Nate

I’m sorry for your loss, the fact you still gave two chapters this week shows your passion for this book. Not related to the book, (which I’m loving I can’t wait for the Gala) but American seems to have a CON for nearly everything (I’m a kiwi and jealous of some of the ones you have). lol 😂

Dawn Zeleznik

As far as the gala, have you ever seen pictures of the Met gala? I imagine people coming in crazy hero outfits, in some cases, and reporters/fans watching people enter. That may not help you.

Joanne Hans

That was so good, can't wait for more.

Benjamin Hartmann

I think it is just annoying for you because you can’t read the whole book. I like the crafting but I want to know what happens on the gala and second semester…

Chris Hoopes

I think the amount of chapters/book time spent prototyping and building the gun and tracker were comparable. At this point the machine is the story. No matter how you look at it, the MythOS is the predominant aspect of this book. It is important and those details were an investment for future material. Atleast I hope so. You could say spending time with parents is the focus but as of right now that machine is a giant money making device for said parents. It's not like he can take it back to his dorm room at this point.

Sam

I think that she's going to help him with his coding too.

Abhishek

Our condolences to you and your family. Please take time to heal and recuperate. We will be waiting patiently when you return. I’m sure it’s gonna be a lot of fun chapters to follow :)

The Foolish One

I am excited for when Sal finally gets Sophia to agree to let him fix her weave.

Bruce Irwin

These are very good. I wish Sal had a formal military uniform at some point rather than a purple tux.

Lumpenhans

To be honest, the only thing that interests me about the gala is the meeting between Barry and Petro. I understand that the machine is not working to get the Fabi ark rolling, but I do not like it. It had the potential to undermine the Gala and start so many possibly ongoing storylines.

Maakolo

I get it, but I think its best that the reader doesnt meta-game the novel. Youre ruining the story for yourself.

Frilas Gilneas

Honestly we don’t know that the machine is not working. He put in materials and got a warning about putting in different things then the recipe needs and it failed. Since it managed to successfully upgrade itself we now it’s working and the most likely part right now is that it is missing a component to store/generate his essence types as a big error in his blueprints tends to be him forcing properties with mythcrafter essence which the materials not necessarily would allow

Calvin Rutherford

Anyone else refresh like every 5 minutes today hoping for more chapters? Hope DragonCon went well and can't wait for what comes next!