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Hey Everyone,

I just wanted to start this off with an apology, because Chapter 10 has one hell of a cliffhanger. Don't say you haven't been warned. I will highlight that I thought it would be cruel to leave you without an Appraisal, but... I haven't slept yet, and it's Monday, so it'll have to be in the next batch.

I've received Book 5 back from the editors that I'll be going through this week, so I won't be as active on Discord and responding to messages. I'm hoping it won't impact next weeks chapters, but I'm just highlighting so you know what's going on in the background. There's no way that I'd leave you on Chapter 10, though, so don't worry about that. :)

Hope you all had a great weekend!
Brian

Comments

A Flashy BR

Love Slinky | regretting my life reading this without the next chapters ready

Dawn Zeleznik

Thanks for the chapters. I don’t think you left us in too bad a place.

Ron Blondeau

OK, I have just only read chapter 7 and the first thing that popped into my mind is wondering how you dream up these things Brian. Got to start chapter 8 now!

C

... I disregarded your warning, and I think I regret it.

Dillon Beedie

Can't wait for more on the invention guild!

Dillon Beedie

I think in book one Sal and Upgrade mention how amazing it would be to have mythic barriers, I really like seeing him circle back to the barriers. Especially as Sal talks about helping with the destruction from the attack, but better barriers would have stopped said attack.

Dutch Palmer

Reminded me… what ever happened to Sal’s other friends’ gifts? I’d love to hear what Sal made for Barry and Blathnaid. Would have thought that a visor would have been his gift for Anthony.

keoki

nice, future double drone sleeves (or more) and visor glasses.

Brett 'Swantz' Swanson

Chapter 7, page 5, bottom: "the same was as" should be "the same way as."

Brett 'Swantz' Swanson

Chapter 9, page 4, bottom: "taking to Forge" should be "talking to Forge."