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Johnagain

With so much detail and sidelines, i am actually surprised the story continues as it does. Yeah, i would like more. Who wouldn't. But being realistic, i am happy for each new offering.

Chester Orland

"Fate conspired against me yet again". No it didn't. You are the most pathetic kind of lazy bastard with excuses, excuses, excuses. Take some responsibility, man. I've been with you since the beginning. I've watched your long descent ringside. I've spent hundreds of dollars on your serial. At this point I'm just here with popcorn to see what kind of lame excuse you will come up with each month to steal some more of our money while producing nothing. You should really just go take a job at this point and stop soaking all of us with your nonsense.

John Lisbeth

A few typos: Aeri Malone shared a glance with her husband, then said cautiously, ………… “I agree with your viewpoint on tolerance, but I think we need to be careful not to let malcontents openly ferment rebellion.” Should be “foment rebellion”. Despite only being a recent recruit, Kaija already had a sizeable number of thralls branching out underneath her, thanks to the Nymphs who had set about enthusiastically recruiting as many Galkirans [as] on whom they could bestow kisses. The superstructure was strong enough to contain the blast, otherwise the casualties numbers would have been a lot higher on both sides.” Missing the opening “ mark and “casualties” should be “casualty”. Her mask of self-control slipped, and she looked a him with remorse. Should be “at him”.

Scott Severs

Maybe it's time to use a Ghost Writer to finish the story. Someone who can crank out more than one chapter every three months. I'm sure there are plenty of talented folks that could take on the project and complete it in a timely manner. This is looking more and more like the high speed train boondoggle project in California.

Kris

I think it's pretty cool, must be hard work coming up with a new excuse while keeping track of the past ones... Cant get caught using the same one twice...

Michael56Smith

... A ghost writer, or an Intern, ... or maybe a Nanny, ... just to have someone there to help would be nice, ... -- But NO multi-billion-dollar Invisible trains, ... So, NO Gavin Nuisance help, please, ... ;-) ttfn (ta-ta for now)

Michael56Smith

... okay, it is 1230AM on 28 Feb 2026, .... just a few more hours until we get some fresh TSM words, ... yay! ,,, ;-) ttfn

Jock McClees

Tef, I notice that you sometimes treat space as if you weren’t in space. You talk about Alyssa pulling back on the throttle and the Invictus coasting to a stop. But there is no friction in space and it would just keep going

Jock McClees

Also, sometimes you talk about ships keeling over when they have been hit/disabled. (You use a different word than keeling which I can’t remember but same concept) This implies gravity is acting on it like on a planet.

Jock McClees

I love the story. I am on my 3rd time through

Jock McClees

I was thinking that they missed a major opportunity when harassing Galkagor’s fleets. They could have sat cloaked in the middle of a fleet while it was recharging its shields and just have Irillith hack all the ships and immobilize them. They wouldn’t even know until they tried to move again. And, no shots fired!

Michael56Smith

Hey, that just might work, ...yeah, ... -- just gotta watch out for the enemy dreadnaught, ... but when the cat's away, ... ;-) ttfn

Michael56Smith

... oops, you busted ol'Tef, .... another 'Gotcha' for our favorite Author, .... ;-) ttfn

Michael56Smith

... that, and he (Tef) runs star systems into each other, like suburban next-door houses in a neighborhood, .... And all the open space between the stars is mostly ignored, .... bothers me, .... ;-) ttfn

Daniel Jechura

So sorry to hear about your wife. i understand, in October i sliced my fore are real bad and i'm not aloud to do any lifting so I'm sitting here rereading your stories for the 3rd time. seeing somethings for the 1st time (maybe). love them.