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A Novel Approach chapter 137

April 22nd, 2011 Titans Tower, Jump City, California, 6:00 PM- PP:102,800 After I dropped off everyone in Brockton (and gave them strict orders to obey Kim completely) I decided to take a trip. I'd already been to Jump City, so I didn't even need to pay to head there.

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Big ToFu

i dont get why he is still having issues with the three parts of himself this late in the game, its all him. If he didnt have aura it would still be him. just because he got aura doesnt make it not him. its just makes him more .

Malcolm Tent

Everyone does really. We all have times when our inner voices tell us to do dumb shit. His voices are just more defined and easily categorized. Its not exactly issues. He's just more self aware about where his dumb ideas come from. Its not really something that needs to be fixed. If anything its a strength because it lets him ignore his worse impulses more easily and assess better whether they'll be active hindrances.