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Question (Patreon)

Published:
2026-01-15 20:12:14
Imported:
2026-06

Poll

Question

  • Rewrite it cooler 54
  • Leave it as is 118
  • 2026-01-15
  • 172 votes
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Content

Should I just rewrite the forging scene in the last chapter how I wanted to write it, and wave away the physics concerns of how compressible steel is with Positive Energy, or should I leave it as is?

Cuz the former would be more cinematic for sure, but the latter would be more realistic, and I do try to keep my writing realistic even with magic and stuffs?

Comments

Victor Andrade

I thought it was fine but if it bothers you rewrite it until you like it

cris

Keep the physics, change the creation details, we just had a nice lil chapter about Narauko turning a lil deer into a spell, maybe add some magic spice to it?