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Liliraune first concept design. (Patreon)

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2020-05-04 12:21:12
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2026-06
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Ok here are first draft of the two main heroine. Still not final thought if you have suggestion for hairstyle feel free to tel me in the comment. Also design for liliraune outfit too.

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Urazel

Anything but twintails imho. Too infantilising, especially on more petite women. Makes them look like they're minors.

StarGazer

Why not try having one of them be taller then the other? Or maybe add a ponytail like you did with the more recent girl.

Lew

I really like the first versions of the heroines, and the second versions of their liliraune outfits; though I do also like the thorn aesthetic of the first ones as well. It would be interesting to see liliraune with outfits like that!

DuckHunter

I like the fourth hairstyle the most. I think one of them should be a tomboy.

ibenz009

Maybe I'll change the tsundare into more tomboy tsundare with pony tail. Like modread I guess.

M1yago
>>36322926

I think that could be a great idea yeah. Having a tomboy kind of tfed into a more "feminine" form is fun

ChaosOverlordZ

I like the bottom 2 of the alurun outfits looks more stylish.

elderwand11

I think hairstyle like D.Va or Hyuga Hinata in Naruto can go well with liliraune. Long, straight hair. I would like a couple of long hair and short hair.

Evan Lee

I think long hair and twintails are better than others

elderwand11
>>36324910

Short, curly hair for tsundere can be a good idea too. Changing the third hairstyle to a little curly style would be nice. I think it will look good on tomboy tsundere.

elderwand11

Liliraune outfit above, the ones with less decoration, looks good. The bottom ones, to be careful in my opinion, look too decorative.

Gustavo Tani

I like outfit 2, maybe more with a lower belly cut, the left hair on the second one is cute, and tsundere twin tails are a classic

Stormfries

ohh please with tg transformation hehe

MoralHazard

I prefer no tg, just a transformation of girls.

D Banks

A real improvement outfit wise

Asani

- Tsundere hairstyle comment above. - Both kuudere styles are good, and I'd prefer it kept short after the TF for contrast. - Bottom Liliraune outfit looks great, but feels too substantial for the concept. - Incorporating thorns on the outfit is ideal, but maybe only on the tsundere. - Two TF designs to match their personalities would be interesting, but is obviously more work and may go against the whole twin idea. - Could try rose petal bras to further distinguish this pair from the previous two incarnations, but I'm not sure how it would look.

M1yago
>>36340155

I'm honestly 100% with those suggestions, with the exception of the point about the bottom outfit. More can sexier sometimes

RedeemerofDark

I adore the top outfit with the ass hanging out and the heart shaped back but I think the leggings/boots or whatever they are should leave the upper thighs completely visible like the bottom outfit/third outfit. Also I love the idea of a twin tail one or even just making them have a long pony tail on the side I think would be a really beautiful and unique hair cut. As for the other I think it could also be really unique and beautiful if she had a "bun" hair style, also I agree with the consensus that thorns could look cool or unique if incorporated in the outfits as well.