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Miko spider corruption p1-2 sketch (Patreon)

Published:
2022-09-21 16:40:29
Imported:
2026-06
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Finally begin the first draft sketch!

As always if you have any suggestion or found a mistake. Please feel free to post in the comment.

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Comments

Alfredo

I’d only advice you to double check on the very last dialogue on the 2nd page. I think the message is not quite right (I think)

Cryostorm

Looking good, so the mountain goddess is wanting a priestess and champion of her own.

Benjamin Lawton

Spelling/grammar typos (corrections in all-caps): Page 1: Panel 2: "Dammit, shut up! YOU'VE BEEN yelling that for an hour!" "You shut up!" YOU'RE SUPPOSED to protect me!" Panel 3 (bottom-left): "I bet the head priest forgot to check the damn thing and DUMPED it on us." Page 2: Panel 1 (top-left): "Wha……wha…!? Why ARE these THINGS UNDRESSING me?! Quit it!" Panel 2 (top-center): "HUNDREDS OF years being IMPRISONED within that stone. Curse that priestess! Look at what you MORTALS have done to my mountain!" "Sigh, it SEEMS THE quality of PRIESTESS have been ERODED over the last few hundred years." Panel 3 (top-right): "It's been so long since I have HAD a VESSEL to enact my authority." Panel 5 (bottom): "You will BE bound to this place. Become part of the mountain."

The7thSage

I love their chemistry!

Arbiter

Interesting; I'm sure their new Goddess will find them appealing!

Anonymous

At panel 1 both the 'Shrine' are written as Shirne. Top left Spider Mountain & bottom right Mikoto whiney

Pascal

looking good so far!

현진 서

너무좋다

ArcQUITE

The goddess actually hesitated a little bit when kyo mentions her room. Lmao