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Zynder Dragyn

Big girl needs some special attention

want7000

His presence forces her to conceal what she knows.

Deadhorse

Really fantastic work on those callbacks, and how the nurse's jealousy blinded her in part to what was going on. I really love the way you have our good sciencegirl's realization, too, and how it all comes together here. Someone is going to end up getting fired over this. But really love the way you brought this all together. You did really well showing the other side of the story here and it helps tie the story into one piece. I'm really impressed by your storytelling and the way you keep up that realism in the characters.