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Hi I present you some of the character we will see in the upcoming comic drawn by AxlexCima, let us know your impression . Based on your requests I attach here also an image with Pan in both the her two possible version so to have a more understanding of her possible heights in this story (sorry for being soo late) .

 If some of you think we should redo a poll for choose which version we would like to see let us know.

Art by: AxlexCima

https://www.patreon.com/Axlexcima

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Shifter132

These look great! Specially the head nurse! Very good!

JW

Pans character concept very good! And the head nurse wow

Ren

I really like the redesign of the alien boy (now girl), will we see her getting possessed by Baby before he gets to the nurses and then Pan?

Ren

Awesome! One last question, I know this might be spoilers but will we have a scene where Baby plays with her body? Or no naked scenes at all?

Ren

No worries I understand, but I'm glad to hear that, I'm very excited for this comic 😊

Alejo Carrizo

When the other chapters come out

jose

Those designs really look great, with all these characters I suppose the story will be several pages long

jose

I suppose you placed Videl's image just to compare her height with Pan's, right? Because it would be very strange if you included her in the story and not in a possible continuation in which Baby, still in Pan's body, finally arrives on Earth.

trentrouls

I think either design works! Though im not sure if a new vote would help or change much? Regardless, really looking forward to seeing this, hopefully not too long of a wait

Luis

Can't wait this is exciting!!! Will this he released next or first you will complete the C-18 Baby chapter 3 pages?

ParasiteLovers

Yes I made in this way because their version are from the GT series so people goes better to compare this with the episodes of the anime

jose

I see, so if you make a continuation of this story it could be about Baby, still inside Pan, arriving on Earth and going to train the Time Chamber so that both Pan and he become stronger while Baby assimilates completely with Pan's body and make he can obtain his form 2 and 3

jose

Both designs are good, the only thing I would like to see changed would be for them to put the orange scarf on Pan that covers the top part of her hair, just like she has in the series.

ParasiteLovers

I see, we thought about this version as an evolution as she grown and changed it a more masculine appearance

jose

From the number of characters seen, I assume there will be several possessions throughout the story.

ParasiteLovers

Sone of the characters will be possessed I am finishing to figuring out for one as I don t want to make you feel overwhelmed with too much possessions and body change which in the end could result futile for the story itself

jose

If you want a suggestion, it could be to show in a small flashback Baby possessing the woman in the hospital gown, then it could be that Baby possesses the nurse who seems to be the youngest (the one in the upper right corner) and then If Baby possessed it, she would meet the head nurse and the possessor, so taking advantage of that body you could include the NSFW scene with Baby "having fun" with that body, either alone or together with the nurse that she previously possessed, after that she would find out that Goku and the others are still in the hospital, so taking advantage of that body he would meet Pan and trick her into taking her to a secluded place, either to the room of the woman they saved, or to the head nurse's office and There she would have the possessed nurse hold her down and then she would possess Pan.

jose

and maybe you could include how Pan tries to resist Baby's possession, as Vegeta tries in DBGT, but also failing so Baby, having already possessed Pan, would leave the room and meet Goku and Trunks who would tell him that They are already going to leave the planet, and the story would end in that after takeoff everyone goes to their room, and there Baby would partially come out of Pan's shoulder, while she has an apathetic expression, while Baby decides to stay inside her during the rest of the journey to absorb its energy and become more powerful.

ParasiteLovers

Thanks for the suggestions, I am sorry but the script is already in WIP and I can t change or add too many things such this

jose

also I don't know if you can do the NSFW scene with Pan, since due to Patreon policies you may not be able to do it, but if you can, the scene could happen once Baby is in Pan's room, so would decide to have "fun" with that body for a while, doing so while Baby is still partially emerging from Pan's body, be it his shoulder, his stomach or his back.

jose

No problem, they were just small suggestions.

jose

With these posts I have been thinking, if the people on Earth who were controlled by Baby were cured with the sacred water, what would have happened to the others that I possess on other planets?, such as the boy in the spaceship or the woman he possesses when he escapes of Goku, have they also freed themselves from his control? Or will they still be controlled by Baby?

Alejo Carrizo

Pages 3-4 and 5 because you didn't put it for us to see

Alejo Carrizo

To see it for free you did not put