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Hi everyone, I just receive from AxlexCima this early design for both Bulma and Videl (I really love the way Axlex draws Baby's suit) for the next chapter of Baby saga and I would like to hear your opinions and your suggestions of how we could improve this. Thank you very much for your support!!!

Also big thanks to Axlex for his hard work!!!

Art and colors by: AxlexCima

https://www.patreon.com/Axlexcima

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JW

The designs are very good 💪

Luis

I love this so much hope we can see this soon in the comic!!

Luis

Just a thought videl should also have the white hair and blue eyes

ParasiteLovers

The reason she doesn't have this details is because this isn't the true Strongest 2 form because Baby is not inside her but she recieve a portion of Baby power. By the way which of Bulma design you like?

JW

I like the 3rd one (far right). I just like the design and how it has potential for more battle damage to become more torn/ripped, slowly revealing more. The 1st and 2nd ones are excellent but leave less to the imagination. If I had to rank, it would be 3, 2 and then 1

jose

They look awesome, I can't wait for you to start uploading the comic

jose

And I think that of Bulma's designs, the best would be the third one (the one on the right), since as they said in another comment, if there are fight scenes, that appearance is fine so that it breaks up revealing more of the skin. of Bulma as the fight progresses. If I could suggest a small change, it would be that on the part of the breasts instead of the dress being black, there are white parts, like the ones in the second design (the one in the middle)

jose

And if you do not plan to show fighting scenes, the most appropriate appearance for Bulma would be the second, since it is the one that most closely resembles that of Baby Vegeta.

SonicLunaDash76

I really like all designs. The ones where they are just covering the nipples and crotches are really sexy and show off their bodies. I do think though if to have other designs, The third one (One on right) could be seen as a good option. Maybe cutting the legs to make the leggings shorter. But I do also like the First one. It covers enough but also shows just enough too.

jose

If you could answer, do you plan on showing Baby infecting or possessing someone else? Or will you just focus on Bulma and Videl showing how they will get these new forms?

Shiro

i like the 3rd one the most!

ParasiteLovers

For this comic we will be more centered on C-18, Videl and Bulma and there will be more erotic scene. The next chapter Baby will have another target. Also I am going to start to for the What IF chapter 2

jose

I see, I wonder who it is or who Baby's objectives will be, I think it could be maybe Bulla or Maron (Bulma and C-18's daughters) or maybe someone else like Erasa (Videl's friend)

Gali

Will Videl have like the “first” strong form (the one before final form)?. Also, could it be the u show that progression?

ParasiteLovers

Well it depends on the next chapters as Videl current form is an hybrid one as she doesn't actually host Baby. Depending on how we evolve the story she too could have the Strongest Form 1

jose

But the one who got infected was Valese, Goten's girlfriend in Dragon Ball GT, the one I'm referring to is Videl's friend Erasa, who appears in the Dragon Ball Z chapters in which Gohan goes to school. Here I leave links to images of her: https://static.wikia.nocookie.net/dragonball/images/3/38/Tumblr_mb0qjqx8VQ1r3f3duo1_540.jpg/revision/latest?cb=20161120213532&path-prefix=es https://static.wikia.nocookie.net/dragonball/images/8/81/Erasa.png/revision/latest?cb=20110827003204

Garou

1 or 3 are good for Bulma

Piero Gamarra

I personally like to see her with normal clothes, but for discard, number 3

jose

I don't know if it's because these designs are more detailed, but apparently both Bulma and Videl will have a more muscular body than C-18, so I wonder if during the comic C-18's body will stay that way or will become more muscular?

ParasiteLovers

My opinion is that due to the enormous power gap between Baby and Bulma and Videl, their bodies got overwhelmed and enhanced thanks to Baby presence inside their bodies. In the case of C-18 due to her own strength her body doesn't needed to be more muscular than theirs as the power gap was highly minor

jose

I know it's a bit rushed and besides I don't know if you already have some ideas in mind, but I would like to make a suggestion of a possible plot of the chapter following the bonus chapter of the Baby saga, I would like that after Bulma and Videl has reached these appearances, Baby, before going to more cities to infect all the people, would decide to enjoy C-18's body, he would go to C-18's house and make her return to her normal appearance, but still preserving muscles that she got when she transformed, and also that his hair would be a little longer like in this image: https://static.wikia.nocookie.net/dragonball/images/b/ba/Vlcsnap-2017-02-12-05h00m33s613.png/revision/latest?cb=20170212100305 . And after that C-18 would put on new clothes (since the one she had when she was possessed by Baby must have been destroyed when Baby transformed into his ultimate form inside her body), so her new clothes could be the one in this image: https://static.wikia.nocookie.net/dragonball/images/b/b1/Tumblr_m92e3bOTKy1ryrpaxo1_500.jpg/revision/latest?cb=20130217221033 . And after that "18" would meet Krillin in the living room of the house, who would ask her if everything went well during his visit to Bulma's house, since it took him a while to return, to which "18" would tell him Yes, and the reason for taking a while to return was because Bulma asked her for help with something, all this while under her clothes, Baby's face was protruding from her abdomen while he smiled sinisterly.

jose

After that Krillin would tell him that his work called him and he has to leave, so he asks "18" if she can take Marron to the city center to go shopping, to which "18" would agree, while Baby would think about using that opportunity to infect more people while still remaining hidden, so "18" would go with Marron to the city and Baby would start infecting more people, releasing small parts of his body that would come out of Baby's body. C-18 (like her crotch, her butt or abdomen) and at a time when "18" is alone with Marron, she would ask her if everything is okay since she would notice that her mother has been acting strange since she returned from Bulma's house, to which Baby would answer yes while C-18's hair would turn white and red lines would appear on his face, (similar to the DBGT scene in which Trunks realizes that Baby is on Earth and has possessed Vegeta), and finally Baby would transform into his ultimate form and infect Marron.

ParasiteLovers

Honestly basing on how I have imposed the next chapter after the bonus it will be more easier to give it as a spinoff, or I could adapt as a a part for chapter 3 or 4 of the what if saga. I have to see how to make the story and add this part

jose

No problem, you can include it in the way that suits you best, although if it causes problems for you to include it in your main story you can develop it in a What if

jose

You could also use those scenes in which Baby infects people, like the one I described in my previous comments, to include female characters who appeared briefly in the Dragon Ball series such as Maron, Krillin's ex-girlfriend who appeared in Dragon Ball Z during the Garlic Jr. Saga here is an image: https://static.wikia.nocookie.net/dragonball/images/b/b0/Hjj.png/revision/latest?cb=20190518005919 , or Angela who appears in chapter 202 in which Gohan has a date with her, here I leave an image of her: https://static.wikia.nocookie.net/dragonball/images/8/8f/Angela_DBZ_Ep_202_001.png/ revision/latest?cb=20180812175458 Or Cocoa Amaguri who appears in chapters 73 and 74 of Dragon Ball Super, here I leave an image of her: https://static.wikia.nocookie.net/dragonball/images/3/3f/Kokoa_escucha_a_Gohan.png/revision/latest?cb=20170109081620&path-prefix=es

InfiniteBeing

It would be extremely hot if the female characters that Jose mentioned and the other infected female characters would give all their energy to baby. Something along those lines would be a dream come true😍🙏🏻 I would also like to add that it shouldn't be missing the part where you can clearly see the enjoyment of the absorption. That would amplify the arousal.